Great stroy, the first one was good s well. You have a brillant writing style. I so going to read anyother story you have writen

Very well written. Good job on this piece.

Hahahahahahaha that was slick

i always love the epilouge.. however, i hate how kagome can forgive sesshomaru so easily each time. i guess it's in her forgiving nature, but still.. =/

he was a total asshole for most of the story but I loved it anyways

he was a total asshole for most of the story but I loved it anyways

Wow good sequel! At least Sesshomaru quit being a bastard and started actting towards Kagome in the way that he should. The ending was sweet with them getting married. I enjoyed this story very much!

oh mu god i love it!!!! you should make another sequal.... but i dont know what you would put in it.... i was hoping that you would explain the whole sessh cant get people pregnant thing in this one but thats ok. keep up the amazing work your an unbelievable writer.

awesome I loved it. Love the ending too. If you get a chance please stop by myfanfic I am writing If Only you knew the website is http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3367304/1/ please review and tell me what you think

OMG, that was perfect. I laughed, and cried, and yet still smiling. Thank you for writing a beautiful FF.

I thought I had reviewed or read the second half around, oh well.
Greaaaaaaaaaaaat story!!

Too bad they can't have babies, Sesshoumaru being impotent just seems so wrong lol.

I thought I had reviewed or read the second half around, oh well.
Greaaaaaaaaaaaat story!!

Too bad they can't have babies, Sesshoumaru being impotent just seems so wrong lol.

I like both of the stories very much and I think that you did a wonderful job on them. I also think that it would make an interesting add on, like a short story or one-shot about Kagome getting pregnant and all of the things that go along with that. Anyway great job.
Sakura

omg sweet XD when I made that suggestion..I didn't realize...the story was already completed XD! The Inuyasha drunk scene..priceless!!! XD I thought it was the end and gonna be on eof those author talkin to character scenes...XD You're a awesome writer!! I rarely leave comments..so yea xD ja ne

damnit i told myself i'd do my hw after i read a first time..BUT SOMEONE MADE A SEQUAL -_-

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please update more....
like role play..... PLEASE I LOVE your work!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

I dont know why but i just cant get enough of this story, i keep wanting more and more, i'm sad that its over for good...sniff sniff

*claps* bravo! Perfect ending! I loved this story from start to finish! Aw I'm gonna miss getting updates...Have a new story in mind? How about Role Play? I'm sure there are more parts that can be added to that lil story heh.
Well again, great job! I hope I can review another story of yours soon!

one word:

AWESOME!

one word:

AWESOME!

Wow amazing just amazing. I loved this so much. I read There's a First time for everything on fanfiction.net and I told myself I must read the sequel. Please do an epilogue!! I'm so in love with this story. You are a very good writer, I couldn't stop reading and I still want to read more! This has to be one of my favorite stories. Keep up the truly fantastic work.

Ooooh that was awesome. I was very happy to see that there was a sequel to your first one. Very very good!

Oh MY FRICKIN GOD!!!! this is one of my fave stories...u have a gift....dont forget that...

No! It CAN'T end already! There HAS to be more!! ::Sobs: such a great story. don't end it just yet. There MUST be more

Epilogue! Now!.......er.....please?

^^

-Kanz

You know... It doesn't really NEED an epologue.... BUT... It doesn't reaally matter... Update soon
Lots of Love...
~FFM~

omg i loved the story i was so scared at the end and i was in tears although i will be sad to see the story end i can't wait to read the epilouge

I love this story there is so much emotion in it. I cant wait for the last part

Well i didnt really catch on to the ending at all..the whole meeting thing. And honestly this didnt feel like it was a good time to end the story, in love stories you want to read tell they say i love you, it still leaves to many questions in my mind.

wow. I loved it. The ending was so cute!!! That was an awsome idea. I loved how you did that. it was just...oh idk. It was just great. I am extremly happy with the fact that you had Kagome stand strong and not give in. It made me so happy. I will admit that the fighting sceene did seem to be missing a little bit of something. I can't pin point it, but it's just there. It was awsome anyways, though. I thought it was well written. maybe Kagome could have been angrer? idk. It was great without it though. so it's all good. I love this story and am sad to know it's almost over. Please update soon with the epiloge(sp?) i can't wait to see what happens. I hope it ends on a semi happy note. Well, AWSOME job! I love your style of writing. keep writting what you want and post it on here so i can read it. :D jk. yeah, it's late and i'm half awake...so forgive the oddness and slight phyco-ness. It's normal...........right?

Im so happy that you updated. I was afraid that you forgot about this story. Im gald you didnt. Anyways I thought it was a great chapter and I loved how they started over. I cant wait for the epilogue. Thanks!

You cant leave a chapter of like that! what do you think you are trying to do , kill me.

your fan,
desdemona angelica bloodmire

it's a wonderful chapter... what do you mean there are only 2 chapters left?, well you know i really love this story i hope you can update soon, but im not forcing you to finish it already i don't want to know the ending yet.........

well more power to you and god bless..

oh and please let me know if you put the latest chapter, thank you very much

it's a wonderful chapter... what do you mean there are only 2 chapters left?, well you know i really love this story i hope you can update soon, but im not forcing you to finish it already i don't want to know the ending yet.........

well more power to you and god bless

I just remembered..Kagome no longer lives at that building! Because I doubt Sesshomaru knows where Kagome has moved.. so is this building on fire a realization of his true feelings towards Kagome? TWO chapters left?! ='( Noooo....I like this story too much...If I may add my two cents, the ending seems to be coming a little too fast. Won't Kagome want to put up some fight should they get back together, which thety will of course.

OMG! Kagome is not going to die right?!

Another wonderful chapter...and yes it was speedy ^.^
I'll be waiting for the next one :) Keep up the great work!

OMG! great chapter. I hope Kagome makes Sesshouamru beg for her to take him back! He deserves it after what he put her through! Anways awesome chapter and cant wait for you to update the next one! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

your stories are really great....you dont know how excited and intigued you left me with the last chapter of the first time isnt always everything, please dont take sooo long with the next chapterrr...could you plzz inform em when you post thenext one ..tnkxxx!!

UPDAAAAAAAATE OMGGGGGG

UPDAAAAAAAATE OMGGGGGG

this is an awesome series i've read both stories and i love it.....i hope u updat this week cuz i'm dying for the next chapter i hope kagome is ok....and i want them back together!!!! hahahaha anyways i love plzzzzzzzzz update!!!! thanks!!

3becca

hmmmm... wats going to happen? is kags in that fire buidling?> please update soon ^_^

AWSOME!! I loved it! *breathes* very well done. It seemed a bit shorter than usual...but not really short so that was no problem at all. I love this story. It has so much drama. I am very happy with how Kagome stayed strong and made her point and did not give in. If they do make up i'd really like it if she didn't fall right back into his arms again, ya know? I want her to have that same strong-ness in her. But still forgive him...idk. I confuse myself. I guess you can take me sugesting things as a really big compliment. I never do that unless i'm so lost in the story that i wish i was the one writing it. If that makes any sense. ANYWAYS!! Great job. Please, please update soon. -Forsaken Faith

Why does the last scene with Kagura in chapter 12 sound so familiar? Did you get any inspiration? Anyway, great job. I look forward to reading more.

You kept me waiting for so long I almost cried when I saw you had updated!! I can't wait to read next chapters, and as you said, maybe they'll be the last ones. I kinda feel sad your story is about to end, but in a way I'm happy because I was starting to hate Sesshoumaru and that is just SO TERRIBLY WRONG.!!

Anyway, update ASAP! I'll be waiting!

Wow!

OMFG! I really do love your writing. I love this story. it's so well writen. I can't even count the # of times i have cried during it. The characters are very well done. The only thing that gets to me bit is how she falls into his traps all the time. I think that this time Kagome should stand strong and not give into Sesshomaru untill he says sorry and admits tha he loves her. I really don't think she should have another on night stand with him you know? That would ruin it for me. But alas...you are the author and I the reader. That is only my sugestions. Please update soon. -Forsaken Faith

i really love the story, but i hope you can update your stories in a short period of time because i can't really wait to see sesshomaru get jealous haha so as kagome...

good luck and more power to you

that was awsome u should continue. With the storys.

awwww! come on! why cant they just get together again?! 'pouts'
love your story! hope you update soon!

WOW! this get better by each chapter! Update soon

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! INTENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Was that enough emotion for you!?! If not I am so sorry!!!!! But PLEASE write more!!!!!!!!!!! It's too good to stop!!

Well, let me just say- all of your stories are absolutely amazing!
I believe "A First for Everything" is my absolute most fave story on A Single Spark as of now...=]
Your fanfiction is the best, really.
Cream of the crop.
0.~
Keep updating! I'll be checking on this story later. =]

I love the story ^^ I am so glad that she is being hard on him to get her back. Get up the wonderful story ^^

Glad this story is going again. What will you come up with next?! Go Kags!!!

I only hope Kagome and sesshy get back together soon, it's making me sad *sniff* and I really want to kill Kagura >.
so yea, it's good so far though. Keep up the good work!

wow! awesome....please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was more than disappointed with what you did with Sesshomaru. It was just like what everyone does with him. I was hoping you would have been different, but I guess not Lemming. This sequel was really not needed.

Your story is really good, can't wait to read more. Hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE ! ! ! PLEASE ! ! ! PLEASE ! ! ! :^)

Oh please update soon.

Dude, 11 was one powerful chapter! I hope you feel inspired to write more soon.

omg it was awesome ^_^ update soon please! i really want to know what her saying that did to him. omg please update soon

AHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG! That was an awesome chapter and I especially LOVED the ending of it! Serves Sesshoumaru right! And you know what? I hope kags finds herself someone sexy who likes her back and shows him off and then I hope Sess finds out and becomes jealous! OMG! im dying of suspense here! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THANKS!

OMG! Awesome updates! Sesshoumaru already has a date! What will Kagome do or think or say! I hope she will get a date to! One more thing I hope you UPDATE REALLY SOON!

UPDATE I HAD TO REREAD BOTH STORIES TO REMEMBER WHAT WAS GOING ON. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES. AND THIS ONE IS THE BEST SO FAR. YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED LATELY, AND I'M SURE A LOT OF READERS ARE DYING TO READ CHAPTER 11! SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^.

This sequel is wonderful! I can't wait until the next chapter. You're doing a great job, keep it up! I love the storyline and everything. I'm anxious for the next moment. Hurry!

Your storys great, but I want kill Sesshomaru, the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome is undeniable, and I cant wait for for your next chapters, update soon, ^_^.

Don't you think it's about time for Kagome to pay Sesshoumaru back....with interest!!!!! There has to be someone out there thats just as rich and cute as Sess that Kagome could get to help her!!! I always love a jealous Sesshoumaru...don't you??

Oh my gosh...Sesshomaru is being such an ass...I can't believe it...What was he thinking? Breaking up with Kagome like that....Well update!

god sessh is so messed up in his head..I like theway you brought out hischaracter.its so key to make strong characters in Au scenarios...your story is goinr rather wellI like it more than the prequel...cant wait for a showdown in the future...she better teach him a lesson on trust...so key
well take care and keep writing and best of luck in your university

Girl!!! UPDATE! you're killing meeeeee!!
Pretty please? ó.ò
^^
K.

I love this story. Please up date really soon.

You must write more!!! It is really good! I luv it and I want to know what happens!! I do not enjoy cliffies.

OH MY GOD!! I LOVE YOU!! You updated!! I'm so happpyyyyy!! Wow..Sango is amazing with the predictions like "Stop reading prono while talking to me" Is it cuz he uses those adjectives, making her know he wants to get laid XD I really want to give Kagome a hug...I really can't wait to find out what happens when the book makes its appearance...hope it doesn't backfire...can we have a little payback with Sesshomaru, afterall...he was a HUGE asshole in Chapter 9..jeez...that chapter was really well-written, you brought out the feelings and made me cry.

I F-ing love this story. Pardon my french it's just so great!!!!!

More!
More !
More!

YAY! you finally updated!! whooo hooo!!! go nivalrose!!! yay!! hehe.. i'll stop with the craziness now. please update soon. I LOVE YOU! ....err.... your BRAIN!!! .... lol... ^^;

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

wow. i must say. this is definately one of the better sesskag fanfic i've read. i really love your writing style, although i think it would be kinda cool if sesshomaru took it harder than kagome, only because it's ALWAYS kagome that cries and is depressed. i don't mean you should make sesshomaru sit on his couch and eat ice-cream or anything like that, but i think he should definately sulk some. anyway, hope you update soon!

much love,
kookie-san

I so hope you get them back together soon! I was really surprised when you had sess going on a date at the end story. I can't wait for the next update!

THIS IS SO GREAT!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

-tears in eyes- If I were Kagome I wouldn't have made it that far.

As for the way Sesshomaru is acting...he is acting like the inu taiyoukai we all love from the anime. Is he a demon? From the growling in stuff I'm not sure. So is he and just covering it that well?

I love this fic just like I loved the one before it. I love how Kag and Sess have such a shaky relationship. It will make them stronger, if the dumb ass, Fluffy ever realizes what he just gave up.

Awesome chapter nine! It's been awhile. What a freaking twist..I hope they come back together soon..wait what am I saying! Of course they will. ^_^.

OMFG!! This is pure gold! Brilliance! A masterpiece! Meant to be cherished forever in the world of masterfully done fanfiction! Oh my gawd I cried with Kagome! I'm sitting here still crying! PLEASE CONTINUE! THIS IS MY LIFELINE!

it was awesome continue.

oh my god. I cried for what Sesshoumaru said to her. Ahhhh!!! It was still a beautiful story, i love it, and i just hope that they stay together in the end. *crying as i write this* "Poor Kagome...." Love...

WHAT AN ASS! How dare Sess say something like that to her!?!? I think Kagome should just forget him... ok, maybe not entirely, but he should at least be the one that comes crawling back to her and beg for her forgiveness or something. A**hole. Update. (soon, please)

I read the first one and enjoyed that. This one although a bit awkward with the tense change, but afterwards, the fanfic ran smoothly. This relationship you have developed between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is very explosive. I look forward to your next additions.

I apsolutly loved "A first for everything" so when I saw there was a sequal I just had to read it!!!

This latest chapter was great, It had me in tears, poor Kagome!!!
Well keep it up, I love your work!!!

I really like it! Why would Sesshoumaru do such a thing! He didn't even let Kagome talk! I Hate people like that. So any way, please update soon! I enjoyed it very much!

Great job. I can't wait to see what happens next. I do hope that you update soon.

Noooooo!! Sesshoumaru is so insecure with trust issues. I wish he would just.. Ugh, I don't know! Update as soon as humanely possible; it's braking my heart to see Kagome and Sesshoumaru apart.. :( But it's good that you finally updated!
Ja ne.

EVIL!! How could you leave it at such a cliffie?

WAHHH! MORE, PLEASE!