This was such an interestng story.i think i know who the person is in kagome's dream, but i don't know. you have to update as soon as possible. i'll be counting the seconds until your next chapter. so sto reading reviews and get to work. if you need a beta reader i'm your girl. so if you want to take me up on my offer email me. okay.

you need to update sis!!

Hey i know who it is but i want to see for myself if its the person i think it is so please write another chapter to it and please send it to me or put it to the story but i would like it if you send it to my e-mail address because i might not find this again on here because of the many stories that comes on every day

ohhh!!!man you have to up date soon...plz.n_n...or i would be like this o_o...T_T

Very interesting. I like this story. Keep writing. Waiting for the next chapter!:)

MidnightStar

UDATE!!!NOW!!!!

This is a really good first chapter, it's very well detailed and written! I enjoyed it very much.

I like it! please continue!!

I really like this. I can't wait for the update.

One thing though, could you possibly space out your paragraphs? Its kinda hard to read it when their all bunched up as they are.

Other than that its really good. Keep up the good work!