OMG when is the next chapter coming out it is soooo good the story is great its elaborate and cunning plus funny and the scientific stuff and explanations!! this story is the best!!!!

OMG when is the next chapter coming out it is soooo good the story is great its elaborate and cunning plus funny and the scientific stuff and explanations!! this story is the best!!!!

I REALLY like this story. It is well-written and descriptive. I just never want to stop reading. But, the one thing I don't get is how its a Sess/Kag pairing. Isn't it supposed to be? All I see is that she loves Inuyasha and only just sort of cares for Sesshomaru. I don't like that aspect. It would be better if it was on another site that was for Inu/Kag pairing. It just really doesn't seem like it belongs in this sort of site.

Oh please oh please keep updating!! This is my favorite story and I can't wait to read more!!

I am so very, very glad that you have come back. The thread of the story was not even shaken.

This is absolutely one of my very favorites and I keep watch for updates.

Your characters are so strong and filled out that it is almost like being there.

Kagome did an exceptional job of standing up, not only to the sluts, but the hostile houses. She showed them that she was ready to fight and defend her position. The males were proud of her and it showed.

Can't wait to get to the good stuff. If you are going to move to another site to finish this I would appreciate a "heads up" so I can follow.

email address= Flightoffancy55@yahoo.com

Thanks again for coming back to us with this wonderful story.

I nearly had a heart attack when I saw you posted a new chapter! i got so excited! This story is the best...I can't wait to see where it leads

OMG! I LOVE this story! I have read it at least 3 times. This is my favorite story on this website, hands down. Please, continue the story! I HAVE to know how it ends. PLEASE!!!

this is a great story!! plz comtinue. i cant wait for the update!

this is a great story!! plz comtinue. i cant wait for the update!

update soon please...how much of this story is left, alot, alittle...?

YEA THE NEXT CHAPTER GLAD TO HEAR THAT YOU DIDNT LEAVE THE STORY HOW IT IS CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT

LOVE IT. I just love Kagome as a bitch with those 3 girls, nice , Great work, please update very soon,

I'm so thrilled to see a new chapter! And it was great that it picked up with the tone and story as it left off. You are great at writing chapters that keep me on the edge of my seat wanting more!
Thank you for returning to this intriguing story.

thank you for continuing the story - i can't wait for the next chapter - this is one of my favorite stories on this and other sites = please update soon

yes finally huhuhuhuhuhuhu thanks for updating so love u huhuhuhuhuhuhu pls update again soon thanks huhuhuhu

Lol. I just love this chappie and I'm glad Kagome was able to prove herself worthy in the eyes of everyone there. I especially loved all the stories that her mom told. And I'm glad that you have updated... since it has been awhile, I thought that you had forgotten about this awesome fic that u have here. Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P

pllss plss updateee plsssssssssss

do you have plans to continue this story? have you ever heard of twins? many human females have two un-exact babies... different in many ways......

i love the way your story is going so far! please update again!it says more then 3 months since the message about updaing soon so im hoping thats any day now. SNOW SUCKS im in British Columbia...it snowed like ALOT here so i know how you feel on hating snow. any way good luck on the move and i hope >crosses fingers that you update soon for now im re-reading all the chapters you have posted so far!!

i know i speak for many fan who would like to know what is going to happen in the next chapter . . . its been about 3 months since your last message

pls pls update pls,....

oh and by the way my name is really kagome im half japanese. iluv your stories write more or ill be pissed. dont mean its in a mean way its just the story is so freakin good to read bye bye gomennasai

oh and by the way my name is really kagome im half japanese. iluv your stories write more or ill be pissed. dont mean its in a mean way its just the story is so freakin good to read bye bye gomennasai

OMG, I live in Iowa, too. LOL And yes, the weather does SUCK!

Yes! For a while there I had given up hope. I thought you had given up writing or something bad had happend. I just decided to check for an update one more time before I deleted your story from my favorites(I'm cleaning out my favorites folder- I have like a hundred websites). I hope your move goes well. Tons and Tons of snow here in Michigan as well!

Take ur time sweety ur story is well worth that wait!

Choas

please update soon !!

can't wait for the next chapter - have been waiting since 2006 - with eager anticipation - have wanted to tell you how much i have enjoyed this story so far - plot has a lot of possibilities - wonderful

can't wait for the next chapter - have been waiting since 2006 - with eager anticipation - have wanted to tell you how much i have enjoyed this story so far - plot has a lot of possibilities - wonderful

-Sigh- It's been a year... I still hold hope... But I hope nothing bad has happened to you... Hope things are okay... Love, Ray

I LOVE IT keep up the great work. i love it. please update soon i cant wait

Hey there! Great story so far! I was wondering if you would like a beta? I have a lot of free time, and i have a good sense of grammar and spelling, along with a great word processor. If you are interested, just drop me an e-mail. I am completely willing to go over all the past chapters if you like and make sure everything looks good. This way we can get you set up for some awards... OH YEAH! xD

First off, let me say that this is a great idea for a fic, and from what I've read so far, it seems pretty good. It has a ton of potential!

However, I've noticed that a lot of your "I"s aren't capitalized, and there's a lot of run-on sentences; there's a few misspellings as well. This would be MUCH better if you ran it through a spell check before you post; any decent one will tell you when things aren't capitalized.

A beta reader might not be a bad idea either; there's a resource right here on Single Spark to find one that will work with you to improve your story.

I've yet to read past the first couple of chapters, though; I've been pasting them into Microsoft Word to run a spell check on them so I can read them more easily. Bad grammar or spelling will ruin a story, and I'd hate to see this one get bad reviews because of it!

I have to say I am disapointed in this story. I can not understand why you have over 2000 votes. The story line is ok but the grammer is so bad that I find myself unable to enjoy this story. I think you need to get a good beta to help this story to improve

I haven't read anything you've put up yet, but I know what I'm doing for the next 2 days!! I'M SO GLAD TO HAVE YOU BACK!!!! And even better is that you sound like you're getting settled nicely. Again, glad to have you back and best of like getting things situated!!! ^_^

I hope your have a grat time in your new place but plz tray to git a new chapter up by spring. :)

girl you better get your ass in gear and start writing, it is almost a year sence u last updated and you leftoff at the best part

I hope by now you are more then settled into your new place. This story has sooooo much potential, please don't abandone it. If you re-read your last chapter or two, perhaps your muse will hand you the rest of the story. Inu needs his night with Kagome and Sesshy gets one too. After that...have you ever written a threesome? Could be fun!

Purrs!

Neko-sama

Just wondering if any word yet on this story being updated soon. I saw where you updated "Whose Child is This" in October and was so excited (love all your work). Anyway, just thought I wouled email you and let you know that you are still loved and have anxious fans awaiting any update you may have.

UPDATE SOON!!! YOUR KILLING ME HERE!!!!

I absolutly love this story!!! I cant wait for you to update. it has to be my favorite inuyasha story!
cace

Hey I really love this story and I've been waiting so long for you to update. I don't know why you haven't, but I would really like it if you did.

I've read this story twice, once since the last time you updated and next just recently. Both times I completely enjoyed it! This is Such a facinating story and I can't wait for you to update! (Hopefully you haven't given up on this story :) ) I'm not sure what direction you should head in with this story, but I would really like for Kagome to have some pups within a few chapters or so. ( I know that you have very detailed chapters and it will take some time to work up to the ball and pups.) Also I've always been curious as to why they won't double mate? Did I miss something that makes it a bad idea? ( Also it might be cool, yet a little bit odd if Kagome could carry fraternal twins... one Inuyasha's and one Sesshoumaru's) ( And I know i'm rambling but i'm very tired after just having come down off a sugar high... but I think it would be cute if at the end in the epiloge Kagome where to give birth to her First Hanyou... I don't think she could servive not having any puppy eared pups....) Well, I think that's all I'll bore you with for now!

Neko

@----%-----.

Why did you stop writing at such a climatic moment in the story? I mean you have so many different directions you could take this story, Why stop now?

-squeels- come on this is so good you got to tell me whats going to happen next! Please pretty Please?
Well.. actually you can't leave out everyone else. My bad. Sorry.

Your story is so amazing. Please try and update it soon. I can't wait to see how things go after the presentation.

Hello? Somebody still in the world of the living?

i would just like to say how much i have enjpyed all your stories so far especially "a breeders world" & "fighting the times". hopefully, you will be inclined to finish these stories - the plots are original & once i started i could not stop reading until the end - wonderful - please please pleasse write some more . . . .

i love the story i hope you continue it!!

PLEASE. PLEEEAAAAASE. I HAVE BEEN WAITING LIKE A GOOD GIRL FOR THE LONGEST TIME. IT HAS NOW BEEN 6 MONTHS SINCE UR LAST UPDATE. im going to cry. pleese update. im lost without u.

love ya, hope to see a new chapter soon.

Kiaya.

hello!!!!!????????? are you alive?? *pouts* ive been waiting for over a year for this story to finish....meanie. please hurry.....I love this story so much

Please update soon. I really enjoyed reading it.

OMG, you story is amazing. At first when I read the summery I wasn't sure but when I read the recomendation I decided to read it. This has been one of the best stories I have ever read, and I think no mater what you did with the story it will still be amazing. I am really impresed with all of your futuristic ideas and it adds so much to the story. I can not wait until you update so please do so soon.

hey
i love your story i was wondering if you were going to update or not because if you are not i wont wait for it

please update soon!!!!!!!

please update soon!!!!!!!

I was wondering if you would ever be finishing this storey? It was always my favorite, and I would love to see the finished fic. Thanks.

pls... update pls......

This story makes me dizzy with all the changing view points. I really don't feel the main characters in character, even Kagome who wasn't supposed to change that much.

hey are you gonna up date soon???
please do, i can't wait anying longer i want to know what is going to happen next!!!!
I love your fan fic soo much!!!

pls. update pls pls pls....

I just read the whole thing and I love it and am waiting for the next chapter so please hurry

Kami this is a good story! I see you have not updated in awhile so I hope you have one about ready to go up. This story is awesome and very enjoyable! The direction the story is going is good as it seems there is an unknown evil about to surface at some point in the near future of your story. It would be nice to see the reincarnations of Rin, Sango, Miroku, and Keade. That would really be cool! Maybe it would help Kagome to adjust better if she had her old friends back and they could remember what happened in their past lives. Just my two cents. Keep up the good work and I really hope to see an update soon as this is well worth reading!

I love this story so much. I cant wait to read the next chapter. I think that Sesshoumaru should be the one to mark her and not Inuyasha.

START UPDATING NOW!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING SINCE CHRISTMAS!!!

wen r u going to update again?

I've loved this story since I first came accross it on aff. I had been disappointed when on that site I learned it only had chapters up to 51. I was ecstatic when I found it on this site. I don't care how long it takes, but I want to finish this story. This makes more sense then many fanfics that have been made for this type of catergory and the characters are more true to themselves then in many other interpretations.
Thanks so much and keep up the good work and I look forward to your next update.

Hey, sorry about your computer troubles. I can't wait till your next update. A suggestion for what should come next is that you continue witht the plot how the story is going now. You know with the ballroom scene and the challege posibilities that kagome may receive. Though I'm sure whatever you come up with will be great overall.

adding koga would be interesting, i'm not a huge fan of him but it would be interesting

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

your an awsome author and i love your fic please do finish it soon!!!!

i realy love your work. you need to update as soon s possible or else i will die of boredom.

i realy love your work. you need to update as soon s possible or else i will die of boredom.

when are you going to update???? Gahh I'm going crazy just waiting for you to Update!!! cuz i love your fan fic soo much!!!

when are you going to update???? Gahh I'm going crazy just waiting for you to Update!!! cuz i love your fan fic soo much!!!

ahhhhhh. i read your story on adult fan fiction, and i have been waiting monthe for you to update. and then i read your reviews, and demonlordlover said that you had more on single spark. i realy love this story. you need to get your computers running and update your other accounts of this story so that everyone can read it. i know so many people who love your story and have been waiting for you to update.

I LOVE THIS FANFIC I HAD HOPED IT WOULD END DIFFRENTLY THAN THE WAY IT END........COULD U CONTINUE WRITING THE FIC I THING IT WOULD END IN A MORE U KNOW HAPPYER ENDING.........ANY WAYS I LOVE THE FIC U A GOOD WRITER.

I love this story. I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

Hey! it's been ages since you last updated! well.. i understand you've been very busy.. anyway, what really matters is that your here again and that you are Updating Soon! right? ok..good luck!

Wow, it looks like things have been really hectic for you!!! I sympathize girl, I had to move recently too...I never knew i had all that junk in one itty bitty room! I've been waiting for an update on this fic for what seems like forever and yet I can still remeber everything that's happened! I totally want to see the conversation between Kouga, Inu and Sess! LOL

U SHOULD UPDATED SOON. SO TRIED OF WAITING

Well I definitely want some action during where they are at before getting to the niddy griddy afterwards. One question, who's gonna get Kagome first? Inu or Sess.

sooo nicee wonderfull gudluck takecare

and there is that whole, does he grow his arm back, thing!

P.S. Could she carry twins? One for each at the same time? Wouldn't that put a kink in the boys' competition to get her pregnant. (real dogs can get pregnant from different fathers as they)
Could she have a litter of pups like Sessh's background story says he was from a litter?
Oh, and there is the whole mystery of the journal from their father. And the mystery of Sess' weird childhood.
And the possibility of Rin being reincarnated. I'm dying to see a fatherly Sess since he doesn't have to keep up pretenses as much as he did in the feudal era.

please write more, even if it's not perfect.
I want to know how the presentation goes, does she fight? does she dance? does she make any faux pas? insult anyone? do the enemy houses make a move?
Then, after the presentation, what/how do the brothers share her "initiation" into being a breeder? Does Inu have the same control of his "potency" that Sessh's beast does? Does Kag care enough about Sess to have a physical relation to him? What about the bath attendant punishment?
Then there is the meeting with Shippo and his family. That should be a riot.
Then, the planning and training for the Ball. They seem to plan it before Spring Mating Season.
Any more attacks between Presentation and Ball?
How do the 3 deal with training/relationships and working? What does kagome do for work? Does she ever paint anymore? Since she took her paintsets from home.
Do they ever get a new Miko to train her?
Do they teach her anymore submission positions? What to do if she angers another house? Does she get them mad again?
And there there is the Ball. How many fights does she have? One right after another? Do they find the enemy? Do the boys get attacked? How many other allies do they have?
Then, there is the competition to get her pregnant after the Ball, and the whole Mating Season issue. How are they going to live once the Ball is over? All together? I mean, if she has Inu's child and Sess's child, would either brother want to have her away from them half the time?

Your writing style is very detailed and complex. Please don't rush because of time lines and such. It would be a shame to short change the end of this wonderful epic story.
Sorry for the lengthy review, but I've been looking forward to the continuing saga for what seems like ages, and I just wanted you to know that there are still readers out here eagerly awaiting more installments of your creativity.

well it's good to know that you will be updating soon, i really enjoy this story, well good luck with everything can't wait for the next chapter

i Love it!!! update soon!!!! PLEASE!!!!

Your story is great! I loved it! Update soon! Just one thing: Sometimes, when you change the point of view, you start with "I" and continue with "he/she". That pretty confusing. Otherwise, please go on!

sorry for the long absence i've been having computer trouble and i just now caught up with what u've submitted and i must say it's getting better and better plus it's a whole lot more interesting I hope to read more soon!! And now that my computer is back and working i'll be able to keep an eye out for when u update again...

i hope that new program of u'rs works out for u, but in the mean time hurry and update soon i'm sitting on the edge wondering when the workers for this bridge u've built will continue i'm looking over the edge hoping i won't fall off of it, lol hope to read more when u put it up

~ja ne~
~demon13o

I truly am enjoying this story. Your way with words is amazing. You have a great gift. I look forward to reading the up coming chapters and the conclusion of your story.

We all still love your story and you! Please update soon : ) MERRY CHRISTMAS !

aww blue we luuuuuv you. I hope your work hours aren't too hard on you and I wish you well

I love your story, it is one of the best that i have read so far. keep up the work, and i can't wait until the next chapter.

hey blueribbon98, i know i have reviewed a lot, but i love this story, and am surprised as i am only on ch. 52 and noticed kagome is slipping away from inuyasha and more to sess. By the way, dont so hard on yourself about the time of when you get your next chapters in, if people respect you like i do then they should shut up with the complaints, be patient, and thankful an artist like you has blessed us with the best story i've read since harry potter and the order of the phoenix.

you should put Koga in sometime cause you mentioned he was still alive. i'm not to fond of koga but hey he is a character so...
well do whatever you want to do.your story.
sincerely, Anonymous

YAY! I cant wait. I love this story so much. I guess Ill have to be patient for a little longer.

Yeah!!!!!!! I love your story, can't wait for the update!

Wow! Tough times! I sympathise with you, and while I'm glad to hear that you'll be updating in the new year, I'm even happier to know that you'll be sleeping better. Sleep deprivation is no joke, I know. Just concentrate for the present and near future on recovering, getting your health and mind back in shape and let everything else come as it may. I'm sending all of my best wishes and thoughts to you!

You write so beautifully and I can only say that I wish to read more from you although I would like to inquire about that thing that will allow you to talk and it will type? Please explain, it can be my lifesaver!

-Dani.

can you update on your story of the young Taiyoukai with Kagome in the past? She is like dyign and Sesshy asked his father to save her. The other story is where kagime is a genius and a child mated to Sesshy cuz he didn't want to kill her just kikyou. I LOVE both of those stories, can you update soon?

it seems inuyasha doesn't want to loose kagome after waiting so long for her, and to his brother.

nice chapter

wow, a side of sesshomaru i've never seen.

this is such a good story, and to make it out of the way the show was, you should get it published. I think you could be a big time author like J.K. Rowling.

Oh my gosh, you poor thing! Take all the time you need, I love your work! And thank you for taking the time to update with your hectic schedule. Have great day and sleep well! ^-^

Sweet! I can't wait to read to read the next chappie! And I hope you get more sleep soon! Merry Christmas

~Winter

Ok I can't wait for you to update the next chapter whenever you can! XD But I'll be waiting! ^_^

please i love this story so much and i know i have reviewed a lot but i need to read more. you are a genious.
Love ya,

Mari

I really liked that chapter (I think it was the tenth chapter)

Inuyasha is a bit of a bastard (Exploding at Kagome for being afraid. Surgeries are scary-and needle phobia, sad)


Great chapter

Aww! I loved chapter 4!! (A little rushed on Sess finding out-but still great)

Wonderful chapter!

2 million Japanese yen =
17 217.6309 U.S. dollars

hmm. 2 Million American dollars would be better, I think.

Confused. I thought EVERYONE had forgotten Kagome (but it looks as though Inuyasha didn't)-why did Sesshomaru? Because he didn't have as much contact with her, and never expected to see her again?

Great chapters so far (I think I just read chapter 3)

Love it truly awesome I adore the fic so update already.

Hurry up! It's been forever since the last update! I'm looking forward to after the banquet almost as much as Inu!

Hmmm, i can't wait to read the next chapter so I can get a really good feel for whether or not I like the way it is going... Sorry I didn't read this until now, but I got so wrapped up in school and my job. Update soon!

More Chapters Please???(beggs on knees) :-}

Wonderful, I plan to keep myself posted on this story. I think you could definitely use an editor, though. It's a great idea, but your spelling and grammar could improve A LOT. Oh well. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,
Fluffy'sMate17

thanks for the update. But i still want more!

I LOVE this story and can't wait for the next chapter(s). You are really good at writing. Your characters are very real and your readers can easily fall in love with the brothers too. I have been noticing the dates at the top of each chapter, have you already written this and posted it elsewhere?? If so, could I get the link? (Yes, I'm VERY impatient..sigh)

OR I could help by proof reading and helping to post them.... whatcha think???? I have to tell you that I have two favorite stories that I love equally... A Breeder's World and Mating Season. (In fact I have read your story 3 times already, cause I just love your characters and feel at home in your story)

I love your other stories also ... Whose Child Is This (Can't wait for it's next update either) AND I am really intrigued by the storyline on FanFiction called Fighting the Times but it looks like it hasn't been updated since Oct 2004... Is it posted elsewhere too? Are you going to finish it??? PLEASE DO!!! I love the land of your imagination and would love to see the rest of this story.

Anyway, if I can help in anyway, I would love to (and I have NEVER offered this to anyone else). I type 90 words per minute, I am quite proficient in spelling and sentence compostion if this would be a plus to you.

Anyway, here's hoping you are still writing or posting on these three stories.

Thanks so much for giving me a break time from reality.
Rhonda

i picked up reading this fic about half way through the chapter and i have finaly caught up and i love this story you have done a wonderful job. cant wait for the next update. love ya,
mari

awww nice save shippo

very interesting concept... your descriptions of people and clothes is good but im having a little trouble visualizing the dome... oh well. i really like your backgrounds the stories make sence and it flows together really well. keep up the good work. oh and if you need a beta let me know. (i noticed a few typos and the like) cant wait till the next chapter.

OMG! This story is sooo great! I love it and can't wait for more. Please update soon : )

Yeah! An update! Was the Lord of the North on their friends or enemies list? I'll go back and check, would be cool if he was on the I don't know list, 'cuz it sounds like he is definitely on their side now. Still think you need a beta but such is!

Cheers!

I LOVE YOU!

I love this story and am so happy that u wrote another chapter. Hope to read many more soon.

i do hope you continue with your story and i thank you for writing another chapter. t's nice to see another chapter, and at the end of each chapter i will review you about what i think. I love your story so far.

YEAH ~...~ A new chapter. I am glad to see you writing again. It really does feel like forever since the last chapter.

YEAH! I AM SOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY!

YES! DEAR GOD, YES! AN UPDATE! I love you! Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! ^_^

I did a little "happy" dance in the kitchen when I saw that you had updated. This was wonderful. You are prolonging the torture and it is sweet. I don't know if I can take much more. I have read this story through at least three times.

They need to be sharp right now. There have been too many threats made and mishaps occur. All three are in danger and maybe even Kagome's family. I know and trust in the brothers but someone out there is focused and very serious.

I thought the appearance of Enti as the Northern Lord was really cool. I really like the way Inuyasha has matured and is calm and caring in his manners and speech.

I just think it is neat that she gets BOTH of them. I hope she survives it.

Til next time, Deb.

Welcome back!!! Awesome chapter done from InuYasha's POV. never knew he could be so mature. lol Write more!

Thank you for updating. I loved it!

I really like this & I was very happy to see a new chapter posted. If ever you get around to editing this you may want to change reviled [to say harsh or unkind things to] to rivaled [One who attempts to equal or surpass another] where it mentions Enti's harem. Hope this helps.

YES!!!! You updated. Happy happy Joy joy
Unfortunately, it was a small update but it was still an update.
I hope things are going well in your life now.
Thank you so much for updating.

YES!!! You updated!!! But you left it there... *bawling* That was a cruel tease, but I'm glad you were able to post. I hope you can give us the rest of the party soon. It's coming along great! Can't wait for the party aftermath >:) Mwahahahah!!!! Love your work, hun! Keep up the great writing!

I love it.... I love this whole story, can't wait to see how it progresses.
Rhonda

Update! Update! Update! PPPLLLLEEEAAAASSSSAAA????

FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT'S GOOD IN THE WORLD, PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! I've been waiting since JULY!!! If you don't, I think I'll cry. Don't make me cry!!!!!!!

Pleeeeeeaaaaassseeee updaaaaattttee!!!! You can't leave it at that!!! That's just wrong, Please update sooon!!!!! T_T

Please update Soon. I really love this story and you leave it at such a hot spot. Do you have (dare I even say it) Writers block? Its just that all the chapters have been leading up to this point, you've created this Great and Horrible Suspense. Won't you please release your chained and captive audience.

MORE MORE MORE MORE... This is great, have read it all and need more, are your continuing this or starting a sequel??? You are a great writer, Keep it up.
Rhonda

MORE MORE MORE MORE... This is great, have read it all and need more, are your continuing this or starting a sequel??? You are a great writer, Keep it up.
Rhonda

I love the story! I noticed it's been a while since you updated. Please update soon as I wish to see this beautiful story continue. I truly hope that you allow us to see this to the very end.

This is great! I would love to read more!

PLEASE!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE. You are truly a villian to deny this perfect writing and update.

hi, i would like to know when your gonna update the story again. i'm just so interested with it and wanna know what happens next. it is kag's big night after all.

Hey i have loved your fic from the begining and i cant wait for the citris to flow. cant wait for the next update. love ya

All I can truly say at this point is WOW.
I have just read all 71 chapters and I am blown away.

The detail was stupendous and the storyline very intriguing. I am just a happy hentai at heart. I love it that they found each other and poor Kagome has to be shared, what a bummer. I'll trade places with her any day.

This fic was recommended by another author. She had a list of her favorite fics that she follows and you were on the list.

Is Koga going to show up at all. If he doesn't I'll understand but I really do like him.

Your explanation of the different houses and their leaders was absolutely facinating.

Have you ever read anything by Anne McCaffery? Her "Dragon Riders of Pern" series created a whole world and this is what you did as well. I was swept away by the possibilities. Aside from the fact that this is a Sess/Kag fic, you have created everything from government to city planning, business structure and family structures. I was very impressed.

Please, if you can, keep me updated. My email is pegasus4@bellsouth.net.

Thanks so much for the wonderful ride, Deb.

please i beg u update this fic

Yeah! So glad you updated! Now if the notification thingy will start working I will know when you update instead of having to check every once in a while!

You are spinning quite a tale, that I am enjoying immensely! Your imagination for filling in backgrounds and how Naraku might be destroyed is wonderfull. Hope you update soon!

I love the story so far and really hope u continue to update often

AHHHHHHHH! NO PLEASE UPDATE!! I HAVE BEEN READING THIS STORY FOR MONTHS!! I'M DYING TO FINISH IT!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

please update soon

Wow, definitely like the presentation so far. I love kagome's line, very clever. Although, is someone other than her mother and inuyasha going to clap for her? Cause that would be bad if not! Update soon!

Absolutely wonderful. Well written and original. Though it may have moments in certain chapters that I prefer to just skim over, more often than not I pause in the middle of a chapter just to absorb and be amused by the characters. One of my favorite pieces of KagSess fiction ever.

so when is the next chapter coming and why did you stop posting on media miner. i spent a while waiting there until i found that you posted it here as well and a lot farther done then on media miner. i can't wait for the battles and i hope that they figure out a way that because 'gome is their breeder that she can also be their mate and because it is 2 of them they can then have a soul bond and she would then really see her kids grow up because if they are youki they would still be in puberty by the time she died or just getting out of it. and wouldn't she want to see her grandpups just like her mom. or maybe she some how becomes part inu demon from the guy who healed her as a last gift from him. then she could surly live with them for all their lives together. well i hope i get an answer and you update soon. email me if you want oh and great story. ja ne

You are my god...or would that be Goddess? I AM PORTIA! I own your e-mail..you have e-mailed me before...And the Portia has wrote you other times and you did not respond...Grrr....I LOVE YOU ANYWAYS! Please update as this is genious and...*Cough* Give Portia lemon *cough*

Please update soon!

I really love this fic and I hope you will continue with it. Please update soon

update up date....

update up date....

update up date....whens kagome going to show her fighting skills agenst the other breeders....oops my bad....


ok not Really I want to read a kat fight and see kagome mingle with this new group

update up date....whens kagome going to show her fighting skills agenst the other breeders....oops my bad....


ok not Really I want to read a kat fight and see kagome mingle with this new group

Have mercy on us avid fans who have waited so patiently and update soooooooon!
I love this story. It is a masterpiece of creativity. (it's huge! and deep) It's one of the few stories that I continue thinking about throughout the day.
Please update soon.
(the offer still holds if you need someone to check spelling and grammar)

child!
anyways great job please keep updating,

Ur story is great but I believe the fur Sesshomaru has is a way to show his rank and title and is not his tail. Keep up the great work! :))

WooHoooo!!!! AFter 72 chapters and more than a year, the presentation has begun!!!!!

This chapter was great! A teaser, for sure and I can't wait for the next chapters!!! Please update soon, and don't tease with the fake chapters!!!! :D

Wow! I really enjoyed this chappie and can't wait to read the next one. So keep up the good work :P
BTW could u do a pic of the dress Kagome is wearing or have some do a pic cuz it's very hard to pic it in my head. I'd appreciate it :P

Oh happy day!!!! You have made my whole week! I almost couldn't believe that this was a new chapter. Woohoo!!!!
happy squeek!> time for the presentation! Can't wait!

plz plz plz update soon pretty plz with a cherry on top *looks at u with puppy eyes*pweaseeeeeee,lol anyway take care Ja Ne^.^

wow very discriptive and captivaiting!! I am such a slacker! On to the next chapter! Write more!

wow omg I cant w8 2 c wat happens next plz plz plz update as soon as u can plz I beg of u plz plz plz....................uh anyway lol take care Ja Ne ^.^

I think this is my favorite chapter so far, because it promises more!!! Woohooo!!

Wow really great chapter keep up the good job. Please continue to update regualry. You are so talanted wish I could write like that. Cant wait until your nest chapter maybe you will post it soon? Keep up the awsome work.

Please update soon!

UR FINALLY BACK! i'm SO glad!!! pls continue to write! =]

YAY! you're back. hehe, im so excited now. I love this story so much. its the best!

I AM SO GLAD TO SEE YOU BACK UP AND WRITING!!!! I FEEL LIKE I HAVE HAD TO WAIT FOREVER TO READ THIS STORY. I ACTUALLY STARTED TO REREAD IT SO I COULD REMEMBER THE BEGINNING PARTS.

CANT WAIT FOR THE NEW CHAPTER!!!!!

You are a tease!!! Posting a fake chapter 72 that we've all been waiting for since ...um ...a REALLY long time! LOL

Your story is fabulous and so detailed! I love how you portray everyone. I don't get tired of reading it time and again! I really hope you are able to post regularly once more!!! I can't wait for the presentation and what happens after!!!!! Please update soon!!! I don;t mind long chapters!!! lol ^.~

So excited to see activity on this story.
My favrorite line in this chapter has to be the "applying his makeup" insult. hehehehe.
Love the armor presentation and how it means a lot to Sesshoumaru
I think I like Uncle Kin. So, he was watching over the castle during the battle with Naraku.
Keep up the great work and we can't wait until the next chapter. Oh, the presentation is getting close!

Wow! It certainly has been awhile since u last updated! Glad u did a summary flashback of all that happened cuz i kinda forgot some of it. And great job on the very vivid details. Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie:P

*pouts* you better...

Story is still great... although the fainting bit there at the end seemed a little gay, unless it was the wife that fainted. I guess I'm just not big on fainting guys. Anyways, other than that it was good. I'm a little confused, Kagome is meeting Sesshomaru's and Inuyasha's uncle and this is all in the same day as the presentation or not? Update soon!

So happy to see the next chapter posted! Love it, love it, love it! Go Kagome! Make Sesshy holler "Uncle!"
Glad you had hugging added to the repretoire of interactions with the brothers. She seems like the type that would hug a lot. Hope you are saddling back up for more exciting chapters. Can't wait for the Presentation! Oh, the possibilities of things that could happen!

Keep up the great work. This is absolutely, without a doubt, my favorite story on 3 sites!

Update soon i love this story.

yay!! an update! good chapter. update soon agan please!

YAY! She updated!! Thank you very much for the new and wonderful chapter. I am very much looking forward to reading about the presentation so please update soon :) Thanks again

Wonderful story! I hope you'll return some missing chapters and update very soon!

I LUV UR STORY!! r u going to update anytime soon??

Hey, I haven't posted in a long time-just left a man that I have lived with for 7.5 years, and ended up having to get a divorce-bad situation, but I am back online after 3 months. Hope you get back to writing-would love to help you finish this piece. Give me an email sometime-thanks.

Are you ever going to continue this fic?

yes, this is a well written story, but.... GAH!! its so so so, sexist!! i can't help it its a good story, but women having to bear kids for an entire household of men! wtf?!? geez! i like it but its pissing me off... this story is really good, but bad fo rmy blood pressure...*imagines shooting down all men* humph!

i just want to say that i love your story to bits. the only problem is that it seems like you need a beta reader. some of your sentences are run-on, words are missing or broken up strangely, misspelled and sometimes punctuation is just completely not there. basically, it just seems like you need to either carefully edit what you write or get someone else to before you post it. also, thank you so much for not making inuyasha the biggest jerk in the world. i love sess/kag but i also just love inuyasha himself. i think your characterization is fantastic, the plot is original and your world believable. good job!

Are you still alive? Will you continue to write this fic? I really hope you do, please let me know.

Please update??? I need more! Come on, i promise to love you forever!

Chapter 53 Liked the "guard dog" comment, and the "should I be fleeing" comments. Come on, how naive, to ask your pursuers if you should run. HOw funny. And, how is attending 2 gorgeous, well built men that she has the hots for in a bath, considered a punishment???

I loved the "hot damn" thinking of the brothers. Good for them to both be on the same page for a change. Course, I think it's funny when she can push their buttons so easily. Yep, they are "whuupped"

So, the puppet showed up the same day that the mattress came and they guys started talking in concert, and she almost laughed herself to death? Same day the police precinct was overtaken? That's some pretty powerful magic. Would a barrier prevent this?

Like the animated doll of Kagome and the way Sessh find out it's not her. Also like Sessh bragging about the torture technique that he became famous for, and critiquing the crime scene photo as an amateur.

Chapter 40!!! Wow, that was a serious thank you! I liked the part about Sesshy hurting when he thought it was just a thank you and she didn't care. I liked how you turned it around so it showed how deeply she did care. Really nice touch.
Oh, and over all, Seriously HOT chapter!! They are going to have to hurry and do the blood oaths for the presentation or those mind readers are going to blush big time!
Really like the whole "chase/pounce" analogies.

Darn jewel! Needed to stay in the safe!
I liked Sesshy pleading for her to give it back. Shows how much he cares.
It was freaky to have Kagome talking so dispassionately about dying and how it bothered the brothers. But I guess it's good to start a new life with the end in mind.

I also liked the phrase "she pissed off the killing perfection"

Chapter 38, I like Yumi's punishment. She deserved it twice, once on the phone and then being rude in the office when she went to apologize. I really don't like either mentor mikos.

I truly loved Sesshy's introspection about his life and father and his own doubts of being a parent in chapters 32 and 33. Course, the seeing Kagome's backside trip across the hallway was great! I like that you had him mentally mark this date as important in his history. Nice touch. I mean, a being that is over 1000 years old would need to make an effort to mark certain memories as special to not lose them in the repetition of every day life. Nice touch

OK, chapter 29. Wow! What a dream!!! Sesshy and a wet dream??? What a naughty demon side he has. And Kagome finally gets equal time seeing all Sesshy's assets! How hilarious! She really, REally needs to learn to knock, or get her own private bath!

Chapter 27, Loved the making others jealous at the drum concert. Take that you voyeurs! ! Glad you explained about Sesshy not being able to mark her no matter what his condition because of the binding agreement between them. I wondered about that. Does it work the same way with Inuyasha even though he's only hanyou?
Interesting that each brother is a bit jealous of the other during make out sessions.

Chapter 26. Love the whole dress and Kagome "stalking" Sesshy to make him give in and go to the drum concert. I have to give you credit. You let her try to ask nicely, then pout with puppy dog eyes before whipping (all puns intended) out the big guns! I love Sesshy's reaction to the lip gloss. Too funny!

The Shippo Chapters 23,24,25 still make me tear up. I absolutely love the way you handled the reunion and how it affects all those watching. Having a child of my own, I can empathize on how horrible it would feel to be forced to leave him behind.

Hey, in chapter 18, you said she needed a wardrobe for work. What kind of work is she supposed to be doing? Just curious.

AHHH! I've been waiting for you to update for ever! Please! Update soon, this is my favorite fic on here and the suspence is killing me!

Yes! i finished reading all 69 chaps! Usually i get bore after reading halfway through a long fanfic since it gets draggy but this still has me hooked. I REALLY wana know what will happen in the presentation and at the ball! Plz come back and update! =/

I absolutely love this story! I hope you update soon!