I Like This Story!!!! But Just a Suggestion....Make the Chapters a Bit Longer, I Understand a hectic scedual. I Volunteer as well, and i go to school and play tennis and dance, i also teach dance 4 nights a week, but when im waiting for my students to arrive i write down the next few paragraphs to my storys so i can go home and type them before i go to bed. Just thought id tell you that, you should try it, i accually enjoy it!! Happy Writing! ^^

Kagome-Chan

i love it u should put more up......puweez?