its been awhile since i read your story and i read it all in one day i am really impress at how freaking awesome the story came out i cant wait for july 12 and i bet it will be worth the wait

-still waiting-
please update soon....

please update soon....

Oh i just simply adore this story i like to think of it as a graduation gift from you. Because it came right after gaduation. Thank you^^. And when Lord Kanton fought the dragon prince i was was on pins and neddles hopeing that he would kill him because i know what he dose in the future. Also i cant wait to see how Inuyahsa reacts to all of this. And i wonder how shes going to come in i mean is she just going to countinues along the years and be there when shes born or what! I cant wait to find out^^

wow!...this fanfic only get's better and better...can't wait for the next update! keep up the great work!

DUDE! I just totally imagined Kagome looking like that boy in Nabari no Oh with scriptures all over her face. SO AWESOME.

Okay, Sesshoumaru had better get over whatever stupid macho complex he's got going here. I mean sure, Kagome basically attempted to kill herself to save him, but still!! That doesn't mean he can take out his own frustrations and self-hate (which is what I'm assuming his anger stems from, it sure as hell had better not be actual at her. Her stupidity, maybe) on her! And he'd better not have any problems with her new decorations! I mean, it's sort of...cool. Could you include a more detailed description of the tattoos?

Anyway, I'm majorly glad that you updated!!!! It's been forever!! Bishou's death was extremely depressing, but we all knew it was coming, and it was written really well. A pretty good chapter, and I eagerly await more!!!!

OMG! You are a genuis! is this why he is such a cold demon in the future?

Gah! You kill Bishou AND you make them fight! You're so cruel. XD I hope they're able to resolve the tension between them soon...it hurts to see Sesshoumaru growing so distant from her.

Ah well thats just eff'ed up. Damn Sesshoumaru any ways!!!! GRRR! what a jerk... i have been waiting for months for this chapter i am so glad u finally posted please post again soon...

Choas

That was an intense chapter! I hope that Kagome's fate it's going to be like Bishou!! Right? Ha-ha. Well i can't wait for more!! This is a story i just can't get enough of!

This was an intense chappie. It is said that Bishou died, but what happened to the pup she was to give birth to? Did it die as well? And why is Sess angry w/ Kags? Is because he viewed Kagome's sacrifice as a blow to his pride since he could not handle the burden? Does he no longer love Kagome since her appearance changed? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie plz. :P

Man, whats w/ Sesshoumaru?! He's becoming more and more unreasonable. Poor mom. She's dead and she couldn't help Sessh or Kagome. The thing that is confusing me is that if she was pregnant, where's the kid? Please update soon

Wahh!! I so wanted another chapter to come but this is so saddd =((( I can't believe Bishou died...and Kagome!! these spirits are so evil!! argh!! I loath them!! I really hope something good will happen soon T.T Hope you update again really soon with lots of smut and happyness =))

Hells

Wow this was sad, amazingly well written but still sad. Im happy you're back i really do love your story it has a really good plot line because its sort of complexed while being understandable 2. Well keep up the good work

I really really adored this fic! It is wonderful! I absolutely loved all the inu traditions that you created and also Sesshoumaru's parents! They are really likable characters! =)))
But of course, the best part is the relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kagome! *-*
I hope you upate again soon!
Hells

This story is AWESOME!!!!!!!!! please update asap!!!! and when you do could you e-mail me so i know to come and read it??? thanks a bunch!!!!!

absolutely awesome - like i said in my last review, chapter 1 was ok, chapter 2 was good, chapter 3 was great and after reading all the way up to chapter 35, all i have to say is that it's KICK-ASS! thanks for not letting me down - its always a pity when stories are really good to a certain point and then just bomb at some point and never fully recover. I think this one WAY exceeded my expectations. it is much better then many of the fanfics i've read either here on SS, MM or AFF. Keep it up. I'm interested to know how Inuyasha comes into the story and so on. Just one question though - is Rin going to be in the story? at this point it REALLY doesn't matter, i know, but i was just wondering. Anyway-like i said before, awesome job. KEEP GOING. and long live Sesshomaru and Kagome~

alakeshadow

Update as soon as you can please!

What was the dragon youkai's involvement in Bishou's visions becoming more painful? How did the spirits come to possess her? And what will the future hold for Kags and Sess? When will Kags be reunited w/ her friends? Keep up the good work and keep the chappies coming. :P

Another well written chapter.

Finally! I've been dying! I love this story and can't wait for more.

Yay! I was so happy to see an update for this story! A great chapter as always, keep up the fantastic work!

Chapter 17: Oh crap. I was wondering why that annoying OC (Anubis) had turned up. Then I noticed the "guest author". Don't get me wrong. I love the majority of Rinseternalsoul's work. I *really* don't like Anubis, though. Wish Sesshomaru would get a chance to kick his arse to kingdom come.

Chapter 13: Ewww. A first kiss ... right after she's vomitted.

I can't tell you how long it's been since I last fic of this calibur. How refreshing it is to read such an original idea for this pairing. Your chosen storyline is absolutely enthralling. Before I came to a full realization of it, I found myself absorbed in Embracing Ice. I admire the personal language in which your work is beautifully written. Your style is in good taste. I hope you will continue to refine such skill and grow as an author. I appreciate the art you give to the world in the form of a story.

can you email me when you updated at hazelsonice06@yahoo.com

Ah! I'm going to be captivated with this story forever now! It's absolutely perfect. The progression of things, the plot; everything!

I love this story so much!!! I just can't stop reading one chapter after another. Please update as soon as possible. :)

AHHH can't wait for the next chapter update soon please im dying here!!!!! lol love this story tho soo good!

3becca

Wow, two hundred years. That's a long time. I have an ominous feeling from Sesshoumaru's premonition...

Another beautiful chapter to a wonderful story.

This fanfic is amazing! Even though Sesshoumaru is OCC, you did it in a way where it seems that's how he's SUPPOSED to act. Great job, keep up the great work!

ah this is my fourth (i think) time reading this chapter and I still love it. beautifully, and tastefully written, with some witty lines I just love!

Wow. Just Wow. This is one of the best SessKag stories i've ever found on this site, i have to say at first it was kind of hard to leave behind the cold shell Sesshomaru is alway's potrayed in but the way you made him to be in this story is extremely enthralling and endearing, and Kagome thou a little weak minded in the beginning grew stronger in her personality through the story, i can't wait to read the rest of the it =DDDDDD an awesome fic.

AHHHH i love this fic!!! it's soo GOOD, so happy that kagome and sess. finally mated...lol hopefully kagome is not thrown back to the future now and wined up meeting a hard/mad sesshomaru! lol can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

3333

Yayness! *singing* Its fiiiiiiiiiiinally happennnnnnned!!!!!!! BUT *rubs hands together* Now that everybody is happy, I am positive that you're going to throw in some angst-ridden little plot bunny and shatter their peace! I can see it all now!!! Sure, you might (please) wait a chapter or two, but in the end something bad is bound to happen. And I'm fine with it. Stuff like that keeps things interesting!!!!! And interesting is good!!!! So, a toast to being evil to your characters!!!
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That doesn't mean I'm going to enjoy reading about them (random guess) being seperated by time again. Cause that would make sense. The seperation could make him bitter against his brother. Either that, or you aren't going to be that cruel, and future Sesshy is going to have a mate hidden somewhere that the shard-hunters don't know about. OR...
Nevermind, you're writing it why should I bother you with my (most likely) pathetic attempts at anticipating your plot? I know, totally pointless.

VERY GOOD

WooHoo. That was great!

Whoa super sexy time!!!! Good job! :)

I don't think that i could ever fully tell you how much i love this fan fic. it is so cute and well thought out and put together, i can not wait until you post the next chapter... i hope it is soon.

chaos

Finally together again. Lovely mating night.

Beautifully written. (:

IT'S ABOUT TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The suspense was killing me!!

Please, please update this fic soon...I know clique but I really want to know how this will all end and still be canon!!!

Great chapter, it was much awaited and I think you did great with it!

first let me say OMFG!!!!!!. Ok I love this story. You are awesome! I can hardly describe how much I just adore your story! There was so many emotions that you brought out in me. And that one chapter where Bishou-san lost her child, that made me cry so much. Ugh, you are an amazing author and I really hope that you keep updating this amazing story. Thank you so much for writing this piece,

Gothcat!♥♥♥

Wonderful fiction! I've read the entire thing twice now, and I love every word of it. So many questions though!

If Sess injured his mother upon his birth because of his poisons, will Kagome suffer the same fate upon the birth of her child?

The Inus seem really harsh, will Kagome's concern for the miko in labor rather than continuing on with the ceremony be taken as a sign of rejection? (I hope not! Sess and Kagome need their happy mating ceremony. Not to mention that lemon!)

And of course the most obvious question... If sess in the future has the sash (which can be explained as what protected him in the episodes shortly before he found Rin) and the outfit... and both were made by Kagome. What happens to her so that she's not in the future with him? Why is he so cold? And why doesn't he seem to know Kagome when he meets her again in his father's grave?

I'm so excited to see the next installment!

lol, I'm loving the puppy. So adorable. Sorta weird how they're just about to get mated and then it got interrupted. lol. I'm almost disappointed. I loved the omake by the way. I wonder what happened to the tree.

So... do transformers really have tail-pipe sex in transformer fiction .. because that might be worth reading ....

lol

*cracks knuckles menacingly*
I KNOW you will update soon...
*snap-snap*
jk

wow this is really good i dont have musch time but please keep writing.
Sharilynn

helz to the ya!!! That rockd my sox!

Kagome's alive and they're finally goin to tie the knot... but then the water broke. Oh well. Congrats on a new baby!!! I thought the whole hiding Kagome from the other males was so sweet and when they finally come face to face...awwww, so beautiful!Please update soon. Did the wedding ceremony continue dispite the birth of a new demi-god? PLEASE UPDATE!

That whole testing of the potential mate by the alphas of the pack, behind her male's back, was a nasty piece of work. That just seemed wrong on so many levels. It was like emotional and physical torture or conditioning. Kagome had no clue what was going on and the only person who would have been open enough to explain things to her and protect her was gone. If Lady Bishou is a seer, then she knew Kagome would be a good mate for her son and she knew she would give her life for him, so why test?

great chapter.

I love the tension between Sesshoumaru and his father in this. i could see Sesshoumaru getting his back all up about the trials. And the puppy. I love that somebody as fierce and lethal as sesshoumaru (although he isn't at that point yet unless it involves a threat against Kagome) could produce something as cute as Shugosha...I just picture a cute little pyrenees pup when I think of him. a ball of white fur lol

Excellent chapter

Yay! I loved it, but it's so frustrating for Sesshoumaru and Kagome, are they going to get a break?! :) Keep up the great work!

OH MY GOSH!!! I hope the moon god gets his butt handed to him by the sun goddess (or Bishou, that would be good too :D ) Poor Kagome, I hope she's okay *cry cry*

Anywhos thanks for updating! I really enjoyed this chappie, I wonder what the final test will be?

OH MY GOD I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

OH MY GOD I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

good story please update i would like to see what happens next

TENSAIGA!!!!!!!!! They could really use that sword right about now!!! WHAT is taking Konton so long?!?!?!?!?!?!?! GRRR!!!!! You'd better update soon!!! Its EVIL leaving us in suspense!!!!!!!

I love how you are slowly developing the story! I can't wait to see how it goes from here!

cute!! I love the younger Sesshoumaru-- soooo cute!!

don don duuunnnn and it comes out that Lady Bishou is Sesshoumaru's mom... let's see where things lead from here :)

O- OMG!! How is it that I am just finding this fanfic now?? The first chapter was beautiful!! I am hooked. I can't wait to read chapter 2... and there are still 30 chapters more to read!! what a delight!

Kanazawa

AWESOME chapter!

OMG. I can't believe u killed Kagome...if she really is dead. Everything was so perfect and then the moon bastard pops up. I hope his sister kicks his ass. Please update soon.

O_O! Like woahz! Another fabulous chapter! I was not expecting that! MORE PLEASE! x_X

Oh wow. That was a good ending, not saying that I'm fond of cliffies, but that was a really good cliffie. I certainly cannot wait to see how this whole situation is resolved. Great job. ^^

I can't get enough of this story! I can't wait for the next update!

slightly confused for sure but still good update soon hope you clarify as to why tsukiyomi attacked them and not the fake fish lady and Is kagome going to be ok I hope so

Loves Arry keep up the great work

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!

Gah you are so evil!!!

Good thing I know what happens next ;)

Is She dead? It this where His mother dies, When Is his father getting back. Where the heck is the next chapter To answer my questions?*collapses in heap on floor to cry out frustrations.*
Great chapter post again soon!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chaso

Bravo! Loved the new chapter... i was wondering when Kagome was going to treat Sesshomaru. It was one sided until now. Any ways i can't wait for the next chapter i love this story its Awsome!!!

Chaos

looove it!

LOL Totousai made 'The Great Ino no Tashio' fetch his bath water!!! (looks like Inuyasha takes after his daddy after all LOL) Thank you SOOOOOOOOO MUCH for updating! I really liked ther bonus chapter hehehe poor puppy :D

I LOVE THIS STORY ....I can not wait till you update.

I've said it before, both you and Rin make a fantastic tag team.

This chapter was fantastic, made me sigh happily

i like how this is going i hope you update this fanfic soon i would like to see this to the end thank you

Alittle confused with this chappie you switched stories mid stream soo I'm very confused hope you clear up the sunao thing after you explain everyone reactions in the house in the moon or something I'm yea confused updae soon please

Arry

Yay! *puts down claymore happily*
I don't have to chase you... for now... mwah ha haa! lol Loved your addition, you have yet to dissapoint. Keep up the excetional work.

They're back! Yippy! Too bad Sesshoumaru didn't really get to kill the koi yokai like he said he would. This chapter was a bit confusing but after reading it 2 times I'm getting it. Suddenly having new characters popping in throws ppl off. But I erally likeur fic. please update soon.

GOOD UPDATE!

Oh my!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow...I would so hate to be that priestess... and I thought Kagome had it bad....

SESSHOUMARU LIVES!!!!!!!!! YEY!!!!! *jumps up and down while doing a happy dance*

It's all so...magical. LOL Please update soon! *waves cookies under Yabou's nose* I'll give you a cookie.

great! that was a good chapter. so many names, so many lessons, so much going it's hard to keep up. still i loved it. can this sunao be trusted?

great! that was a good chapter. so many names, so many lessons, so much going it's hard to keep up. still i loved it. can this sunao be trusted?

great! that was a good chapter. so many names, so many lessons, so much going it's hard to keep up. still i loved it. can this sunao be trusted?

great! that was a good chapter. so many names, so many lessons, so much going it's hard to keep up. still i loved it. can this sunao be trusted?

Loved the new chapter ust like all the ones before... Please post again soon, i await on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.

Chaos

YES!!!!!! They're okay!!!! Whew!!! *leans back in chair* I admit it, you had me worried there for a while. But all's well that ends well. But, then again, it didn't end well. Poor Sunao.

An excellent chapter. I couldn't tear my eyes off the screen all throughout. Warmth, fluff, and the part with Sesshoumaru becoming a daiyoukai was powerful.

*chases you pitch fork in hand* How could you do this to me! Love the story hope you update soon!

Damn! This chapter was intense! I remember reading this story a while back, but then I forgot the title, so I had to read it all over again. But as usual, it was definitely worth it. Tiy're so descriptive and I love that. AND Seshsoumaru is just too adorable sometimes, that I can't help but squee and do a little dance in my seat. I can't wait for the next chapter. The anticipation is killing me!!! O.O

OK!
*Puts down pitchfork... and picks up the claymore besides it*
*with evil smile* Thanks for the idea, this is MUCH better! ;) lol
Just please update soon!

please update soon!!!!! i love your story

please update soon!!!!! i love your story

I absolutely love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope sess is ok I would hate for anything to happen but angst always make a story good. As long as there is not to much. Anyway keep up the great work and update soon.
Sakura

OMFG!!!! How could you leave us with a cliffie like that??????!!!!!! I'm begging you please update soon! I need to know what happens (shameless I know)

Just wanted to say your story rocks!!!!!!!!

NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sess CAN'T die!! *runs away crying hysterically*


Update soon! I must KNOW!

Grrrrr!

OMG what a cliffhanger. Please let Sesshoumaru be okay. AHHH please update soon. U're really evil to leave this chapter like this!

I quit reading stories that weren't finished yet, several months ago, however, after reading one of your completed stories I couldn't resist starting this one. It is a good story, very entertaining. Please update soon.

You asked for it *Sticks you with a pitchfork* How could you meanie that was a evil cliffe update soon roar I need to know what happens next!

It bites when things go wrong. Why do these beings want Sesshoumaru to die? Is it because Lady Bishou was supposed to and she and her mate effectively tricked these entities out of taking her life? Kagome meets him in the future so he can't die or we have a paradox on our hands, right? So, don't kill him off.

Ohhhh noooo what's going to happen?!?! Update soon please!

ARGH!!!!! If I can't use a pitchfork, then how about a machete!!!! You are EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You'd better update soon!!!!!!!!!1

yay an early update! man my imagination is running wild. i am so happy you updated. what's going on? sess will be alright...right?
well see ya next update

That's certainly interesting. I wonder what her next test will be. ^^

update soon

Well that is unfair. Couldn't they explain some rudimentary communication first and then test her?

Finally ya updated!! Update MORE!! sorry,,,,its just dat i cant get enough of this fic! :o)

Test number two complete yay! hehe can't wait for more Yabou-chan I adore your fic very much update soon

Loves Arry

You were one review away from 100 and I couldn't resist!! Nah, but great job Im enjoying your story so far.

woah. that was intense. I can't wait to see what else they throw her way. I've been thinking about how Inuyasha will end up making his way back in the story. It's quite clear that he won't know of her as he once did. Instead he would only see her as the mate of his older brother.. half brother. That is if he's still even born. This is going to be so interesting. Waiting patiently for your next update. Good job... no great job.

Yummy on a stick ^_^ Waiting for more!

My dear authoress, you are FAR too kind, but I would, of course, GLADLY accept ANY sort of cookies tossed my way. I may try for modesty, but it stops where it concerns FOOD. Especially SWEET food. Or, should we say, 'citrus-y SWEET [brain]food??' *snerk* [Lemon IS one of my fave flavors, after all!]

Just so it's on the record. I love the way this chapter unfolded and the further explanation of Bishou's 'testing.' The lime content at the beginning and Sesshy's awareness of Kags injury at the end all point to the bond that is growing between them... fluffy, sorta, but VERY yummy!! Can't wait for more!
;D
~~Wiccan~~

Loved it! please post the next chapter soon. Sad that she needed to be showed that way, but... yeah post again soon.

Chaos

ewwww she had vomit breath....

Pretty pretty pretty please post the next chapter soon. i love this fic. i can not wait to see what other tests kagome must past to be deemed worthy of Sesshomaru.

Chaos

So, I'm taking it Kagome will forever be in this world? Well anyway. Loved the story, I read the whole thing yesterday, but did not leave a review because I fell asleep. So I decided to do so right now. Loved it. Can't wait until your next update.

update soon!

That was wonderful loving, but I feel something really stressful is going to happen when all the men are gone. Just what is the deal with this test of Kagome? I see you posted the next chapter so I will probably find out as I read on.

This is continuing to peak my interests. I hope that you update soon.

Indeed it Does the plot is for sure thick I can't wait to see what other trials our Kagome has to go through hopefully an all out sparing match between her and Bishou now that would be awesome hope you update soon again I love this story soooooooo much hehe

Loves Arry

EH, well I skipped the lime, but DUDE!

YAAAAAAAY for update!

*grin* Coolness. I wonder what other tests Kaggy will have to go through? Keep writing!!

Very well done. I hope to see more soon.
Yours Truly
Aki-kawa

*fans face to wave away the tears*

You had Kagome go all emotional on me and now I am a centimeter away from crying myself.

Thank you for such a wonderful chapter. I have enjoyed this story from the very beginning and have patiently awaited your updates.

-Raining Teardrops

I can't wait for the next chappie took all day to read your fic from start to now even through all of Single Sparks errors and I loved every minute of each chapter. Update really soon please or I haunt you through emails I really will hehehe well hope to see you soon

Arry

OMG OMG OMG! I just spent the last who knows how long reading your story. Obviously I'm a new reader. And I don't review many stories. But I have to say that I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. I can't wait to see an update. And if you're still looking for a Beta let me know!! ^^

~Lady K

wow i totally love your story can't wait to see what happens
your new fan
sktl

damn, EVERYBODY'S getting some ^_^Br>Br>haha, but it was all very sweet :)

awww its so cute i love it

hey i really like where this story is goin...i soooooo want to know what happens next!!!!!
so pleeeeezzzz update soon!!! pleeezz n thank u!!!

yenny

AHHH update! im dying to know whats gunna happen...does kagome fall back into the well in the end or what! hahaha good story tho

3becca

I love this story...can you update some time soon, please?

Please omg PLEASE UPDATE

I'm dying over here

This is like the best story ever, and it's not continuing *cough*!!

Yeah so please...*puppy dog eyes*

Another great chapter! I serious love this young Sesshomaru, and I hate to think that he will change into the cold demon of their future, but I look forward to discovering the 'why' of his future behavior. I also look forward to working with you again in the upcoming lemon scene between Wep and Ikiris! Yummy dog-god sex! Until then~

hey there, I really like your story! I can't stop reading and I am glad you started writing again! thanks! please don't stop. I would like to know why Kagome hasn't marked Sessh yet, or if she ever will... and also why he suddenly stopped when he marked her, was it because he could sense someone coming, or may be because he got second thoughts..... oh, and are you going to put Kouga in this? I really like it when Sessh gets jealous, it is just too much fun =P
I guess I wont get the answers to my questions until later on, so please continue with your great work!!!!

MORE, MORE, I NEED MORE!!! You are an amazing writer, and your talent seeps through with every chapter. The characters are so tanigible, it's scary I love the Royal Family!!! Please....keep ging! God Bless and please email when next chap is up!! Thank you!

Wow I really love this story!! =3 I really do hope you keep going at it, cant wait for the next chapter.

- Kason Enre Nviaide -

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why haven't I heard of this fic before?!?!?!?!?! I was just browsing around, spottted this, opened it and BAM! I'm hooked!! That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was funny, angsty, action-packed, and mushy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

isn't sesshy just so sweet?
wait, what did Lady Bishou call him? "Fluffy-chan" i believe it was. Lmao.
i enjoy this story thoroughly. please don't ever stop.

I was ecstatic when I saw two chapters were uploaded. I really loved the backstory between Konton and his wife. The love story between Sesshomaru and Kagome thus far is so sweet. I hope the sweetness lasts a bit longer for them two!

Mir

I'm so happy to see this story again!!! I've been hit and miss with this site while my computer was in the crapper. Nothing could've made me happier but discovering nearly 10 chapters I've missed. They were all amazing and explained a lot of things. And gotta love the super-mega-powerful Wepwawet. The fact that you even mentioned the Duat (the Egyptian afterlife-world-thingie) made me die all over myself. This continues to be a freaking fabulous fic!

Yay! I am so happy that this story is being updated again! I love this story!

Wow!...i can't wait until you update the next chapter!

Wow! I enjoyed Bishou's story, it was very beautiful. ANd U just made my day too... I couldn't have had a better b-day present. I kinda see my bf and myself in Sess and Kags. So this was a very touching chappie for me. Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie:P

Your background stories are so interesting. I hope Kagome is able to suceed in her tests.

Yeah! Finally another chapter. the history of the House of Immortal Moon was so sweet! I loved it. I hope u found a new beta and i loook forward to ur next chapter! Please update soon.

I absolutely love your story it's awesome. I can't wait to read the coming chapters so please keep'em coming.

that was so amazing.and you brought another side to sesshoumaru.

This is one of my favorite stories.....Whats next....

I love it and will be checking every Wed and Sat to read the new chapters.

I love your story you are so very talented.
I hope you keep on going on this story the latest chapter was superb.
Keep on writing and don't you dare leave me hanging on this branch .

I really like the plot, it's very interesting. I like the way how you're keeping their relationship steady and just didn't rush it as well. ^_^ I can't wait to continue! :D

It's definitely been awhile since I last read this fic. But I have to say, it's still as amazing as ever! I just love the last chappie, but seriously, did u have to leave it like that just when it was starting to get good? Evil Cliffy! Will there be lemony goodness in the future? And will we find out why Sess is so icy in the future? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie:P

So beautiful. I'm really, really, really hoping she's meant to stay there and not get sent back and have a lot of angst and terrible sadness at being seperated from him.

I think that's the way I'm reading it, but I can never be certain. *sigh* Maybe her friends could exist in another realm and dimension while she lives in this one with him and his family? His mother was saved, after all, so time has already changed. (Or, was that only what we were meant to believe?)

Frustrating to guess the motives and where the story will go. I'm waiting for the axe to fall and hating every minute of it!

But...this chapter was so wonderfully written. Something about the flow and just the...happiness and love made me feel embraced by the sentiments described.

You're really going to leave it there? You're killing me. Please update soon.

Ah, it's been a while. I'm so glad to see the progress. ^^
Please continue!

Great story! There are so many scent markings, wow! You have made it quite complex. ;) But very interesting! I love the story so far. And a guest author? That was a cool idea. Rinseternalsoul did a great job, and I always did love Anubis. It's great to see her creation even working his gorgeous body into other people's works, lol. I will certainly be checking back for updates with your story!

ooo what a way to leave me hanging lol. plz keep up the great work! cant wait for more.

Please update soon....

I NEED MORE >. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i love this story please update soon ( you need to fix chapter 20 because you have chapter 18 on chapter 20 page.)

hey ypdate soon!!!

Yay! I finally had time to finish this story up to it's last update. But let me tell you. It is a beautiful story. I first started to read it on fanfiction and then I became really busy and I sort of slipped away. I found your story on here and I decided to pick it back up again. It is one of the only stories I have been able to accept with Sesshoumaru being out of character, but that is mostly coming along to th point of explaining why he is the way he is in the first place and i am sure I will enjoy the answer to that as much as the proportions of this story.

So in the words of you, is it scroggin' time yet?

I couldn't resist.

There were so many opportunities where I almost expected it but the way the story is so far without the sex made it all the more beautiful.

But when the time is right it will happen. Now I am just waiting for the next update.

This story for me is on my favorites list along with Tale of the House of the Moon by Resmiranda.

If you have not read it, it really is amazing.

I can wait for the update because I know it will be of the most wonderful quality and just as beautiful as the others.

Ja ne,
Raining Teardrops

Aside from the disappointment I felt when I saw that there is a double of chapter 18 in the chapter 20 slot, meaning one less chapter to read, this is one of the best fics I've read lately. Keep it up please! (Oh, and get rid of the 18 doppelganger, wouldya? It annoys me. ^-^)

GAH!!!!! no no no no!!!! please update soon!!! thisa story has kept me up all night reading it! you cant end it there!! it must go on! i love this story! please update it soon!!!!!

I actually think that u did a pretty good job on this chappie even though u have a writer's block. I wonder if Kagome will ever see her friends and family again? Will there be lemons in the future? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P

I just wanted to tell you that your missing a chapter from this story.its chapter 21 A Taste of Fear, you have it on your fanfiction.net story but not on A Single Spark.

Yay for fluffy feel good chapters! I am happy that you updated, this is one of the stories that I am sticking with until the end. The Kagome and Sesshomaru fluff is still making me smile. And I'm glad that you got over your writer's block. Can't wait for the next update!

What a wonderful story. I read it all in one sitting. I can't wait until the next chapter. U[date soon, please.

awwwww, this story is so awesome! i love it and i think you should continue to write such terrific chapters as soon as artisticly possible! =]

WOW!!! That sums it up/ lol

So glad your back! Waited for so long and was not disappointed. Please hurry back soon with a new chapter.

Hello Yabou!
Well I can honestly say that I absolutely love this fanfic. It progresses gradually, like I think it is supposed to. It is very touching and very sad but at the same time very captivating. I cannot wait to read when you update once more. I shall be awaiting you next update. Unitl then,
Serene Aurora
P.S. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ta, ta!!!!

This was a really great chapter and I want to see more of this story and soon. I like how Sesshoumaru has actual emotions but you have written it into a way that makes it believable. I was so happy that you finally updated and that it was an awesome chapter. Please update soon!!

I love this story! It is very good! Bravo. Cannot wait till Ch. 22

Wooooow! This is a really nifty story! Do you plan on finishing it? ooh! Please say yes! -Whine whine.-

Sugoi! ^_______^ Awesome hun! I love it! The characterations of everyone is bloody spot on! and the story is... well awesome. ::grins then glares at the clock:: Time for work, damn. >_ ::laughs:: I wish you all the best in writing more on this story, I've enjoyed reading it greatly and laughed my butt off on your Omake parts. ::wide grin as she walks off:: Blessed Be on your writing dear! JA!

Update NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please?
~FFM~

Oh, this is such a wonderful story! Honestly, i understand now why i so rarely read anyone elses fanfiction! It's because I get so jealous of how good some of them are! Oh well though...I'm just glad that such great authors and stories are out there, you know? Keep up the wonderful work!

alakeshadow

awww, there was enough fluff in this chapter to choke on. BRING ON THE FLUFF!! yes, i am a fluff whore. poor lady bishou though, being sble to see her own death must be terrible. i really like how you've done her character, but sessho has to be my favourite. especially during that swimming scene...*drools* oh my...anywho, update soon, kay? or i'll ATTACK YOU!! yes, i'll attack with...uh, with...
*rummages in pockets a little desperately* with pocket lint, a gum wrapper and an expired train ticket!!
*brandishes ticket* raar.
lol luv emily

I love the story. Please update soon. I want to know what happens in this story.

very cute! Thanks for the new chapter.

this is simply AMAZING!
You have such talent and even though I've read storied where Kagome goes father back this beats them all. by a million and a half!
Please, if it is no burden, could you email me when you update?? I'd very much like to keep up with this story!
^_^

This is an amazing story!! Please Update soon! Peace.

(insert loud squeeling noise here)
I LOVE THIS STORY SOO MUCH!!! there is another one sort of like it..but different at the same time and it is sadly coming to an end so i am MOST happy to see that you arent dead and that you ARE continuing this story!!!!! im just soo excited i want you to update RIGHT NOW!!...please??
alright alright..i'll wait..but please update whenever you have a spare moment!!!
-brandi

SQUEE! YOU'RE BACK!!! *glomps*

I've been waiting for this story to be updated for so long!!! And now that I've read the update, I must say that it was AWESOME XD You totally kick my tail when it comes to story-telling! Please update soon! Ja!

More More More More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(Don't mind spelling errors!)
I can't believe how awsome this fan fic is turning out to be. I just started reading today and i don't want to stop. I can't wait till the next chapter comes up and I can continue this story. It's so creative and well thought out! I love so much and I find it imaginative and it actually flows really well.

AAAAAAHHHHHHHH i love this story its unlike alll the others i have read!!!!!!!

I just so love this story. It makes me cry and laugh. It is beautifully written and well thought out. I like the way you made it possible for them to be together. I do believe that this is a very unique way of getting them together. I

Why is chapter 20 the same as 18?

you posted the same chapter twice!!!!!!!! Update soon...

really good story! did you know that you have the same chapter twice??? update soon!

ONCE AGAIN YOU FLOUT THE LAWS OF TIME AND SPACE!

Will there be no end to the HORRORS?

I'm really interested as to where you are taking this story.

*appalled*

wha..wha..what have you done? You've completely altered the time space continueim and have put us all in danger of ...I'M TELLING RUMIKO! *grumbles, walking away*...always taking things just a step too far...


:)

Ahh well how wonderful!!!! I have to tell you that I had begun to read your story some time ago when it was a bit shorter, and some how I lost the darn thing, and I couldn't find it, and it just so happened that I stumbled across a summery on the IYfanguild site that sounded interesting and upon my reading of the first and second chapters realized to my happy surprise that I had found you once again my friend!!! If you can't tell I absolutely love this story!! I think the plot and all that goes with it are great and so original!!! You know not the everyday is the same routine that I read so often, oh don't get me wrong they are good stories but it's nice to kick it up a bit ya know??? Well look at me i'm rambling i better stop here or ill be telling you my life story in a few moments.

One question, why is chapter eighteen repeated as chapter twenty??? Well I just wanted to let you know that I LOVE your story, can't wait until you update!!!

untile then....

-DARK

This story is truely phenominal!!! I hope that you finish it and don't quit like some people do when they just give up. This fanfic is the best one so far!!! I love you for writing such a great story (I hope you've got another chapter ready) and I can't wait to read what happens next. They really should make a movie out of this. ^ _^

This story is truely phenominal!!! I hope that you finish it and don't quit like some people do when they just give up. This fanfic is the best one so far!!! I love you for writing such a great story (I hope you've got another chapter ready) and I can't wait to read what happens next. They really should make a movie out of this. ^ _^

heyas!!!! omg i love this story it's awesome...keep up the great work...i have a question tho, will sesshomaru ever find out that he tried to kill kagome in the furture? and how will he react when he does i hope they get together! ok later can't wait till the next update i hope it's soon i;m dieing here lol

3bex

um...your chapter twenty is also your chapter 18. You put it in twice, just to let you know. And, btw, this is a really good story so please continue as soon as creatively possible.

That was one awesome fanfic! Your writing is amazingly good!!! Everything is so in detail that I can see vivid images in my mind! I really and trully cannot wait until Kagome gets back to her world! Will Inuyasha be jealous? What will happen with Sesshomaru! Come on Update! Dont leave me hanging on his cliff of suspense!

That was one awesome fanfic! Your writing is amazingly good!!! Everything is so in detail that I can see vivid images in my mind! I really and trully cannot wait until Kagome gets back to her world! Will Inuyasha be jealous? What will happen with Sesshomaru! Come on Update! Dont leave me hanging on his cliff of suspense!

There are great stories, and then there is your story. It's beyond great. I enjoyed reading your fan fic so much that you got me back into the sess/kag pairing all over again. :)

can't wait to read more

your story has been really interesting so far but when i went to chapter 20, it had chapter 18. did you accidently put in the wrong one? well, sorry for bothering you.

your story has been really interesting so far but when i went to chapter 20, it had chapter 18. did you accidently put in the wrong one? well, sorry for bothering you.

I love the story. It brings out so many feelings that I rarely experience while reading a fic. You really do have talent if you can bring tears to my eyes!

^__^ Hope you update soon!
3

Glad to see a new chapter! I loved the part where Bishou tells Konton that Sesshomaru will love Kagome desperately one day. That was soooo sweet. Great job, as always!

Rinseternalsoul

This fanfiction is sooooo goood!!! please please please finish it or I wont be able to concentrate on school very well (I'm too buisy thinking about what will happen)