I found your story to be very original, and I find it amazing how you can link it back to the same quotes about Heaven's Kingdom so many times. I hate doing this, but I'm giving you a 10 for creativity.

I also found everything to flow with grace. I especially liked how the beginning and end of most of the segments of your story seemed to relate to his being, whether physical or mental. You characterized Sesshomaru quite well; each section of your story related to a different part of him. However, you only showed how Sesshomaru was after Kagome's death, with an exception of some mental and emotional traits. For this, I will give you a 10 for flow and 9 for characterization. (This is actually my first rating, so I'm not sure if I can rate to a certain decimal point.)

Lastly, I did not see any spelling errors, and you wrote with proper grammer. Therefore, I give you a 10 for spelling/grammer as well.

This was really good. You can continue it but you don't NEED to like with some stories. Some stories you didn't get the ending right and so you have to continue but you did good on this one. I loved it.

That was so sad i started to cry. You write great it really was something else. T.T (wipes tears away only to have more come) That was sad and very bueatiful at the same time.