Reviews for ~Rude Awakening~ by Kiba

Vixen12089- Thu 26 Jun 2008
I normally like your stories very much and you are actually one of my most often read authors. I always make sure that I give a story a fair shot and read it in its entirety before dismissing it or deciding I don't like it. However, I beliee you may have missed the mark a little bit on this one. The story line itself is stable, but your grammar, spelling, and wording are very much off in quite a few places. On top of this, the names you came up with for the swords actually came from the the bells in the Sabriel, Lairel, Abhorson series, (though I probably spelled the names wrong) which you failed to mention in anyway. So, in conclusion, though not a bad story, it needs a lot of work. Perhaps once you've updated it I could read it again and perhaps like it better. Most of your work is fabulous though, just not this one. Sorry if anything is misspelled in this review. My spell check isn't working at the moment.

Rocky- Thu 12 Jun 2008
Hey, I Like the idea of your story, but I felt like Kagome was too Out of Chara.

She was way mean to inuyasha and I don't think she would treat him like that.

Just my opinion. =)

Happy writting

Megan Consoer- Sun 16 Sep 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

eulalia- Fri 30 Mar 2007
Way to plagerize. Yeah, you used them as swords instread of necromancer's bells, but you should still have a note somewhere that they aren't your creation--everyone here knows about Sesshomaru & co belonging to Rumiko Takahashi, but how many have read Sabriel?

Priah- Sun 17 Dec 2006
I thought the story was awesome. I'm a huge english nut, I'll admit that there were a few spelling errors but nothing that makes it hard to reador anything. The story was well thought out and extremely good. I thought.

Megan Consoer- Fri 18 Aug 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

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