Reviews for Across Time by FOOCHA

alakeshadow- Fri 28 Mar 2008
oooooooo...lol i guess i'm an idiot or something. i didn't see the "prologue 1" "prologue 2" thing...lol-i'm a dumbass, what can i say? good job on the story though-it has good potential.

alakeshadow

alakeshadow- Thu 27 Mar 2008
lol-let me rephrase: you have no chapter 1 and it's been posted over chapter 2...lol-what's going on?

alakeshadow- Thu 27 Mar 2008
lol-you're doing a me. Your chapter 1 is posted over chapter 3, lol. I just did the same thing to one of my stories - its the only thing i don't like about asinglespark as opposed to AFF.net. I always forget when i edit a chapter to change it from chapter 1 to whatever chapter number i'm editing and AFF does it automatically. lol-whatever. great story. keep it going.

anonnie mouse- Sun 13 Jan 2008
well.....okay.....stupid idea number one......

Kusaka comes into office.
"daddy how come I never see your nailclippers?"

o.O

I mean mommy always clips my claws.....how come I never see you do it?

-.- go to your mother.



mommy how come daddy doesn't have nail clippers?

how would you know he doesn't?

cause I checked in all his stuff.

you shouldn't stick your nose in other peoples stuff.

but why?

cause it's wrong.

but why.

because it is.

who said it is?

me.

why?

because I did.

why doesn't daddy have nail clippers?

*sighs*because his nails are so strong they break the clippers.

how come he has short nails then?

because he's a nail biter.

O.o*bursts out laughing*

soooo....the ridiculous ideas WILL CONTINUE!

awwww come on!!! at least give us a half way decent reason why you've abandoned us!!!

darklove- Thu 08 Nov 2007
this is a good storie hope to read more of it

Shery- Thu 27 Sep 2007
Lave the story

anonnie mouse- Wed 31 Jan 2007
couple quick simple questions.....
1 are you dead {I really hope not but if you are and a close friend is reading this...'my condolences'}
2 do you now hate the SessKag pairing??
3 are you ever gonna be nice to your {according to ff.net} 200+ {i think} reviewers????
4 WHAT IS TAKING SO LONG!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY BEFORE THE SESSKAG MOB GETS MAD AND LIGHTS THE TORCHES.....*they're passing the matches around the crowd of hundreds of people*....better hurry.

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

WILL SESSHOMARU FINALLY FIGURE OUT KAG ISN"T A POSSESSION BUT SOMEONE TO RESPECT?????

How will he act when he learns he has a fullblooded son???
What is Kagome's punishment???
How is he gonna explain to the media {w/o killing them(newscasters I mean) that he, the most wealthy person in the world, knocked up a 16/17 yr old shrine maiden???} HUH!??!?!! HOW"S HE GONNA DO THAT WITHOUT MELTING FACES OFF!?!?!?!?!?

And is there gonna be a war and will Sess be on the enemy side????

If you don't update soon I'll write totally ridiculous suggestions in reviews....the first being that Sessy sleeps in boxers with pink elephant on it and has a blankie.....
it'll get worse with the ideas....maybe you could have Kag think of some completely ridiculous ideas about fluffy *cough*dyed pink fur and fluff*cough* and have her roll on the ground laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!

anonnie mouse- Sat 28 Oct 2006
UPDATE ALREADY DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO YOU HAVE ANY CLUE HOW MUCH PEOPLE WANT THIS STORY UPDATED!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
DO YOU!?!?!?
*whines* PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pangoo- Tue 16 May 2006
oh WWWOOOOWW!!! I love this story sooo much!! I keep coming back just to see if you've update....BUT YOU NEVER DO!!!!
Why!! Come on! This story has such a damned good beginning!!! PLEASE!!! UPDATE!!!!

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