this story is real good if not really sad. can u email me with updates to this story so that i can read it? if u could that would be wonderful.

this was really great i hope you write more pleaseeeeeeee. this is suspensful not having another chapter. I'm serious now. please please please write more thanks!

u should write a lemon with naraku and kagome cause it will spice ur fanic more

K um how do i put this um im goin to kill u! There i said it ur killing me here killin me! Its been soooo long since u updated n its short to but at least u updated im sry its just sooooo gooood! The story i love it lease try to update asap pleeeeeease! Thanks

K um how do i put this um im goin to kill u! There i said it ur killing me here killin me! Its been soooo long since u updated n its short to but at least u updated im sry its just sooooo gooood! The story i love it lease try to update asap pleeeeeease! Thanks

Another review from me ..

Your story is bland ..it repeats itself. Drama, drama, ..etc. You don't let it peak or fall. It's repetitive it's annoying. I think you should read more stories from other great writers on this site. They have a theme and more detail.
By the way, whatever happened to everything happening to her at 18? If she was 13 when she was raped and three years later she tried to jump off the roof and you started the story there ..she would be 16 right now. It's hard to keep up with something that makes little sense. I'm sorry to be sound so critic like ..but it really wasn't that great a story and I don't think it will win an award any time soon unless you go back and completely revise the story. More detail, places, themes, maybe even a few more scenes that doesn't just conflict on her being raped by her stepfather or interacting with Sesshoumaru(Yeah, don't get rid of any of those parts lol).

From: Ayesha
Review: this is a really good story so far, but it's kind of confusing.
in the first chappie, u showed Naraku raping Kagome and in the second
chappie, u just show the rest of the gang without any explanation.
another thing is, y would she kill herself right now if it's been 3 years since she's been raped? and y doesn't she tell her friends about that period of time and only about the rape that happened 3 years ago? and how come Sesshomaru knows her and y would he suddenly decide to help her too? u should really rethink about redoing this story and getting more info and show a bit of the characters' lives before they meet each other an dhow they meet... then u could get on to where u r now... u really missed a big part in ur story....


A/N: Kagome wants to kill herself now because Naraku has been raping her since she was 13 and he wouldn’t stop. He just keeps continuing and so she has become tired of him and she wants to die. She doesn’t tell her friends about that time or at that time because Naraku had threatened to hurt her. But now she decided to tell them because she doesn’t want to suffer from that pain again without the reassurance of being comforted in the arms of her friends. Now Sesshomaru, Inuyasha, Miroku, Kagome, and Sango have all known each other since they were kids and Kikyo naturally knows her because she is Kagome’s cousin. It should be obvious that they want to help her NOW because she just told them about her being raped. I would tell about the character’s lives but it would take too long. Now since it was since they were all kid I don’t think I have to tell you how they met. I can assure you that I didn’t miss a big part in the story because I want to get to a certain point.

Me:: Okay ...look. You don't take well to critism I see, but that doesn't mean go and bash the critics who are only trying to improve your story. Personally I, and I bet a lot of others, believe you missed a large part of the story. You should explain to your viewers what you did to this review person in the story ..not in a reply to a review and pinpointing one of your readers. That only makes people irritated at a writer who doesn't think their opinions matter. I've only got to the review page, and already I'm irritated at this outburst towards the reviewers. You DID miss a large part of this story or you had a very bad sense of direction to your story. I think you should take your reviewers advice and rethink a few things. This is a story ...just because it is on a Kagome and Sesshoumaru site does not mean your viewers have to automatically assume things. It's your story, you should make it exactly the way you picture it without others having to fill gaps that you leave.

i liked it alot. next chapter plz update soon! by the way love this story!

i love the story and can not wait for more and see what happen next . up date soon your fan.

you know, you could've just changed it so that she was raped at age 15 or something. just an idea.

Oh my dear lord!! This story is like my new addiction! I love it so much! I really like that it's unique and different from everything else, usually I can't take stories set in the modern world but I really like this one, its like the perfect blend of both relms. One little thing, the switching between play format and writing format is a bit hard to read, it'd just be better if you picked a definate one, other than that, major love to you. UPDATE SOON, THIS IS MY NEW STORY CRACK!! much love,
♥Diana♥

I love this story. Please do continue. Its so good n keep up the good wrk!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I'm glad you finally updated I love this story

HOW U HAVEN'T UPDATE IN A LLOONNGGG TIME. GOOD THAT U R NOW

Love the story and hope to see more chapters soon.

Really good story........Lust Powder? Who wouldve thought......Please update soon

it's really good. it's really wrong and nasty what Naraku is doing to Kagome! i was just wondering if you could please e-mail me when you update this story?

I love your story it's great and i'm enjoying it. sorry I diddn't review sooner.Oh and I was wondering if u could tell me how I can be able to write a fanfic and submit it. Bye!

great fic ^^ can't wait for more but do hurry seeya

I lioke it, I loved your story from the first time I read it. and though what Naraku is doing to her is wrong, I think it need s to be told in some detail what goes on, you don't have to be toexplict. anyway update soon.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Bad time for a cliffhanger. UPdate before the day's over

Wow I was hoping you would update, Save me. I love it hope to read the next chapter soon

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

"Josh's Friend"i liked the twist with the step father and all very very good!!i really want to know what happens next,"Josh" i mostly liked this story at fist it was a little hard to understand, but i got interested after the 1st chapter, overall once again it was good!!!!!!!!