The only critique I have is that the story needs serious beta-ing for grammar, its really bad. Once you goe past the grammar issues it really is a nice story.

I loved this story soo much. I nearly cried when Koya died. :(

One fantabulous fic! :)

b-e-a-utiful ending and begginging man though that was cruel i like it

and THAT girlfriend, is really WHAT beauty and the beast SHOULD be about!

this fic is sooo...!!!!!!!i have no words to describe it!it's simply amazing!what a wonderufl literary piece. it's beautiful and amazing. i've never EVER come across such a beautiful piece of literary work. NEVER.

This is the most beautiful story that I have ever read. Why? You writing flowed smoothly and arched with such poignancy you made mr cry with tears of laughter and of happiness. I am also aware that you may never read this sense you wrote this years ago. And yet I cling to the feint hope that you do read it.

Your story deserves recognition and I do not understand why you don't have hundreds of reviews. I do know that your work is very mature and multi-dimensional. It did not have to be M to be so well made and mature...it just had to have that lilting cadence, ne?

Thank you for writing this wonderful story, you have enriched my life for the better.

-Dani.