SilentFirez- Thu 19 Jun 2008
Beautiful story..do not have words to describe how well you've written. The lime could've been more intense but wow. It was so worth reading all of that. I've finished this whole fic in two days. It's unbelievable. You've evoked every emotion and captured the characters wonderfully. After reading this, I feel like I've just started another life, a new beginning. Truly marvelous

LordSesshomaruLover16- Tue 15 Apr 2008
loved it it was sad towards then end because the both died but then it was a good and very happy ending i loved it great work wonderful... You are an amazing author!!!!

avid reader and biggest fan- Wed 02 Apr 2008
I think I have read this story about three times, and it gets better every time. The ending still makes me cry like an idiot. I deeply appreciate your writings and hope you will keep it up... though you havn't in some time (Don't get me wrong, I'm still maddly in love with you!)... and that some of your amazing tallent can rub off on me.

Sei- Mon 31 Mar 2008
Wow. Wow, wow, wow! That's all I can say. This story was awesome! It made me cry, made me laugh, and at times made me so angry. And so sad...

This story is truly a work of art. You deserve all the praise it brings you - past, present, and future.

I had so many favorite parts of this story that I don;t know where to begin; I'm so glad that you finished it.

I know that I'm writing this review 2+ years after you finished the story, but I couldn't just walk away after reading it without reviewing. The story was just too awesome.

I know you've probably heard all that already, but I still couldn't help but say it myself. I truly thank you immensely for writing such a wonderful, moving story. Much love to you!!

joyce- Sat 01 Mar 2008
if u could i would really appreciate it if u would send the updates to my email! Thanks!

joyce- Sat 01 Mar 2008
if u could i would really appreciate it if u would send the updates to my email! Thanks!

hellspixie18- Sat 23 Feb 2008
This story is so very touching! I loved it and enjoyed every single word of it. I do believe this is the very best story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. How long did it take for you to complete it? Well just to let you know it was well worth it cause it is a masterpeice. I hope to be able to read many more wonderfully delicious fics from you.

lyssa- Fri 25 Jan 2008
you are an amazing writer your story just drags so many pepole into it, any way all your stories are great if you ever pursue a career in writing you have many people to support you including me ^_^.

Ender_kb- Fri 18 Jan 2008
I laughed, I cried, I was angry, I was heartbroken...

You just write too well to not get paid for it. You're so thorough and creative and I will save this story forever.

Thank you for writing this!!!!!
*bows deeply*

Kitty- Wed 19 Dec 2007
OMG, ITS ABOUT FUCKING TIME...that was my expression when the lemon started o-o

And everytime it was about to start I was like, come on ...o.o come on > DAMN

and then the ending, omg ...

T_T I cried and then the last sentence I was almost wailing,

I was like o_o omg, you slut T_____T

and well I think this is the best story I've ever read ever, I usually don't curse from frustration T-T It was like, you actually pulled everyone out of that imagination that they have that Kagome isn't human and that she lives with him forever,

...i'm just stunnded into silence T_T

well sort of, and then after wards, after I stop hyperventilating I was like...

THIRD FUCKING PLACE?! T-T

xD and and when she was like...wake up wake up Fuck you just wake the fuck up

I was like
LMFAO XDDDDD

Anyway T-T your talent is amazing, this is movie quality

T_T slut XD j/k I'm just...I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU MADE ME CRY T-T and FEEL Pain...

Your story made me feel...o-o

anywho,.. bye -waves and throws rose pedals-

Kitty- Wed 19 Dec 2007
OMG, ITS ABOUT FUCKING TIME...that was my expression when the lemon started o-o

And everytime it was about to start I was like, come on ...o.o come on > DAMN

and then the ending, omg ...

T_T I cried and then the last sentence I was almost wailing,

I was like o_o omg, you slut T_____T

and well I think this is the best story I've ever read ever, I usually don't curse from frustration T-T It was like, you actually pulled everyone out of that imagination that they have that Kagome isn't human and that she lives with him forever,

...i'm just stunnded into silence T_T

well sort of, and then after wards, after I stop hyperventilating I was like...

THIRD FUCKING PLACE?! T-T

xD and and when she was like...wake up wake up Fuck you just wake the fuck up

I was like
LMFAO XDDDDD

Anyway T-T your talent is amazing, this is movie quality

T_T slut XD j/k I'm just...I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU MADE ME CRY T-T and FEEL Pain...

Your story made me feel...o-o

anywho,.. bye -waves and throws rose pedals-

daniela gonzalez- Fri 23 Nov 2007
hey i love this story it must have token for ever to finish it cuase i was realy well made plot and twist and turns it was sad funny and exciting hope you make aother

Kay- Tue 06 Nov 2007
All i can say is that story made me cry...My grandmother died from cancer and she was almost like my mother it brought back all the happy memories i had of her again and i thank you for that...also besides that your detailing was fenominal to say the least i congradulate you on that and thank you for not having sess bite her and have them live together for the rest of their lives, the way you did it just made it sound real and more like something like this could happen to you or me...which if it did i would find the person to be a little phscitzo or mental at that...LOL...who knows it could in fact happen with all the time quantom physics sort of things...even though it is highly irrelavent....thank you for this story keep going becasue it would really be great if you wrote another one like this.....Thank you

ziggywillow- Wed 12 Sep 2007
I just finsished reading this and I have to say this was a beautiful story! I had read it before a long time ago but never got the chance to really sit down and read it, but now I can say I'm glad I did. It was written so wonderfully with the plot and the details and so realistic! Not to mention its the first time a story moved me to tears. I wish I could write nearly as well as you do, and I wish you good luck on any of your future writing.

beckyducky- Sat 01 Sep 2007
hello. i just wanted to say that your fanfic was just so beautiful. it made me cry throughout so many scenes. i bawled when the parts of miroku, sango, inuyasha, kikyo, shippo, and kouga came into place. it's just so sad to see that happen. The fic was so realistic when it came to Kagome aging while Sesshomaru stayed young. It kind of made my heart twinge. I can honestly say that i regret not joining a single spark sooner cuz i would have voted for you. If it was up to me, you would be first place. It was simply so good. I love a good fic that mixes in happiness with sadness. it was so well done. i cant thank you enough for writing such a beautiful piece.

haha. i am SO discouraged from writing Kag/sess fics now cuz i really would not like to compete against your fics.

have you thought about writing a crossover of inuyasha and yu yu hakusho? the pairing might or might not be kag/sess, but i bet you would write it really well.

anyway, i gotta read the story again. Thank you so much!!

Alyana- Fri 24 Aug 2007
Oh my God.

That was beautiful.

I started reading this a long time ago but then, for the longest time, Single Spark wouldn't let me in.

When I went to YouTube, I found several AMV's saying that your story turned them to SessKag-dom. So, I came back here and voila! It's as good as I remember and as they say!

^^ I know it's done, but, great job!

Heza-- Fri 10 Aug 2007
This story caught my attention and I couldn't stop reading until I was finished. TFTF

Kai- Thu 02 Aug 2007
I'm desperately trying to hold the tears back that I know are going to fall and my nose is running. This and, if you ever read, Temporal Sequence are now my most favoite stories of all time. I've spent a full day to read your story. Oh God how I love it! They didn't even need to tell each other that they loved each other and I think that's truly the best. Your story felt so...real. I've read and loved your other stories, but this? This truly takes the cake and more. I want to thank you for bestowing this story upon me the reader, and I guess others as well, considering. I know it's been out a while, but in the beginning I thought it started out as a love story between Sesshoumaru and Rin and then I got frustrated, so I kind of gave up. Wow! I was wrong. But this was ...Oh I can't even explain it, nor do I want to because I'll just end up fumbling through my words. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! 3

acidflower- Sun 29 Jul 2007
I have to say that this is a masterpiece. Amazingly woven with intricate details that make this story come to life. But what amazes me the most was that you were able to take the leap from the feudal times to having Sesshoumaru living in modern times without any sort of awkward writing. It fit naturally. I cannot praise you enough for this amazing work of art. What I feel sets this piece apart from others is that fact that you were able to weave a plot into the romance of these two. There was so much more in this than I had originally anticipated. I was expecting a few chapters of romance banter between the two, however, I was quickly proven wrong. The character development here was also amazing, Kagome went through this experience of self-realization and coming to ends with her story (as with Sesshoumaru). But dang! You're an amazing writer, I hope you'll keep writing these fics, they're the highlight of my day. =D You had me staying up till 4 in the morning several times (no joke) to keep reading this fanfic! xD
In addition, the amount of detail wove amazing scenes each time and I find myself absolutely enveloped in the story. It really does make the characters come alive. And I cried when Kagome died. But the most important thing was, I'm glad you were able to end it off amazingly smooth. It was a fitting ending, a quite, calm ending, where the two characters reach nirvana and I commend you on that. Since after all, a conclusion is what a reader remembers the most.


Anyway, props to you from Vancouver, Canada! I love your writing, hope you write more, and I hope you're successful in your dreams! I'll be cheering you on.

You've made me one helluva happy reader!

If I could, I would grovel at your feet and beg for more fanfics.

**Toxic**- Wed 11 Jul 2007
I lost this fanfiction about a year or so ago? It killed me. I searched for it on and off for several months than finally gave up on it all together. Then today, I was watching a music video on YouTube and I saw something with this title. I freaked out! I was like, I KNEW IT WAS REAL! Gah :] I am so excited now. I'm on the first chapter now and its just so amazing3

sexiroyalti- Sat 07 Jul 2007
even though this is relatively old and i am in the middle of a chapter, i just wanted to ask if you take psychology, because you mention some things about Sigmund Freud and all his nasty sex subconscious psychoanalysis mumbo-jumbo that only someone in that could know....well anyways, i'm going back to read more...i think i'll be reading this for the next 2 weeks if i keep reading in ALL my free time...hahaha...

Cosmos Writer- Sun 17 Jun 2007
i have read this twice already, i love the story line. but it always makes me cry. it doesn't matter if its a happy or a sad cry, i always cry.

*A-Kay*- Thu 31 May 2007
FINALLY! I finally finished. When I first started reading this it had to be at the end of march, but i had to keep stopping so it took me forever. but i inally finished and i must say i loved it. i cried. i laughed. i felt the pain and sorrow and happiness they were going through. i was shocked myself when i actually started crying. i cried for rin, i cried for him, kagome, hell i just cried. but i loved their little arguments. i love this story. now on to read another one of your stories.

*A-Kay*- Thu 31 May 2007
FINALLY! I finally finished. When I first started reading this it had to be at the end of march, but i had to keep stopping so it took me forever. but i inally finished and i must say i loved it. i cried. i laughed. i felt the pain and sorrow and happiness they were going through. i was shocked myself when i actually started crying. i cried for rin, i cried for him, kagome, hell i just cried. but i loved their little arguments. i love this story. now on to read another one of your stories.

cReaTiVe- Sun 27 May 2007
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!
I ALMOST wish I hadn't read this because now it's going to seem like everything I read is inadequate...It's going to be hard finding a fic that can even HOPE to match up to this one. One of the MANY things I love about this fic is that this fic doesn't sugarcoat anything nor add anything that isn't necessary, it has just enough to keep you satisfied yet begging for more. And the end...it's just so...I'm not sure I can even think of a word to describe all the feelings that the end made me feel. All in all this fic was truly ah-MAZING. I really did love it...now to start my quest for a fic that can matchup to it...this is going to take a LOOOONNNNNNGGGGG time...

P.S. When you have the time please make another fic that's just as good as this one and just as long... ^.^

ayvuir- Sun 20 May 2007
i get goosebumps everytime i read this >D its so delicious i have a very hard time trying to find anything as good as this 3

kel- Sat 12 May 2007
omg!!! that was fabulous!! i read it all in 2 days. i was so sad when i had to go to work and break for 12 hours. you're a fantastic writer, please write more fics

Revellyn- Mon 07 May 2007
This is like the proverbial comfort food. It soothes me in times of great duress and makes me smile even more when I am happy. Needless to say, I have read this story many times.

And each time, I conveniently forget the bittersweet ending that is more sweet than it is melancholy, and relive the heartache again.

I cannot pinpoint one thing that makes this story great. It would be futile anyway, because there are many good things about it. For example, your characterisation of Kagome and Sesshoumaru, who seem to be so in tune with their canon characters that I sometimes wonder that it is not a work of fanfiction.

I think there is a venerable quality to your depiction of the love shared between them that calls to me. It is... very difficult for me to describe it, so I shall have to use Margaret Atwood's:
"I would like to be the air
that inhabits you for a moment
only. I would like to be that unnoticed
& that necessary."

You are truly a gifted writer.

Chibikawaiichan- Sat 14 Apr 2007
omg. I think i died from laughter here.... oh wait. still alive. ehehe... I absolutely LOOVE your story!! I cried and laughed trough the entire thing! Never stop writing fics like these!!!

Kelly- Fri 13 Apr 2007
Wonderful. Completely and totally wonderful. I cried and I laughed...alot! I haven't read a story so complete in a long time. Thank you soooo much for writing it.

DreamingPisces- Tue 10 Apr 2007
CHAPTER 19 IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES!!! I just got done reading it and when Sesshy & Kags killed the dragon I literaly let out a breath i didn't even know I held in!

PS: Waterfalls/sunlight and thunderstorms make a lovely combination. *Wink, Wink* =D

crimsonnyte- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I can't believe it. You really did ship Shippou to Argentina! lol

crimsonnyte- Thu 05 Apr 2007
Simply amazing.

Lady Misaki (fanficton.net)- Sun 01 Apr 2007
This story was simply beautiful...thank you.

Tiegrsi- Tue 27 Mar 2007
I'm sure you hear this quite often, but, bravo! Seriously, I literally spent the last two days of my life reading that...continuously...no sleep...because it was just SO good. I'm not sure if that means you are a god among writers or maybe I just have a very boring life. Perhaps a bit of both. ;)

Bridget- Sat 24 Mar 2007
Wow....I can't really say anything other than wow. It took me a few days to read this, but I finally finished it. I must admit, for a while I didn't think there was going to be a happy ending. I'm glad there was. I have also looked at all the fan art your story has accumulated. It all just fits so perfectly. I don't th ink I've ever ready a story that actually brought tears to my eyes. This story is amazing!

ElegantPaws- Sat 17 Mar 2007
Oh My God...!!!

That was simply beautiful. I have a very few favourite overall works and this is one. I have tears in my eyes as I have just finished. What a masterful work. Talent you have, and talent you shared in this work. How gloriously, exquisitely beautful, poignant and so so loving....thank you.

ElegantPaws

Laryssa- Mon 12 Mar 2007
I love your story so much. It was great.

karla- Sun 04 Mar 2007
AWWE that was the second time ive read this story and i still cry at the end!

neith- Wed 28 Feb 2007
seriously, Im utterly speechless. Im sure there are many things I could say about the story itsself or the characters or your writing style and technique that anybody else has already said. Id rather add to your ego in another manner :) but the truth is im so blown away that the only real thing I have to say is just to you, keep writing. even if its only for yourself. tales from the house of the moon was, well it was disterubingly realistic :) All fanfic readers, and writers(; In my opinion are searching for some sort of 'feeling', for me, just to be moved in general. I have been moved beyond what I thought possible, and in the strangest way....I wouldnt have wanted it any other way. SHALOM

kitoriwitch613- Fri 23 Feb 2007
waaah! So beautiful! Because of this wonderful story, this is my favorite couple and my anger towards Kikyo has subsided. I'm so glad you didn't make her out to be heartless and dead. It took all my courage to read it through though because I don't like sad endings, but it wasn't sad and I shed tears of happiness for them. I'm actually crying now, too. Waaaah.

Naomi- Fri 23 Feb 2007
This is the first time I've come across this story and I have to say that it absolutely took my breath away. So much was put into bulding up the characters and plotline, and consequentially, the tension between Sesshomaru and Kagome. When things finally fell into place I literally felt something snap and it was as if I could breath.

It was definitely unexpected that our beloved heroine died, to cancer nonetheless. As completely and utterly depressed as I was, seeing Sesshomaru carry on the way he did gave me hope and, truth be told, made me cry.

I think you've created a wonderful story with such strong characters and a strong emotional connection with your reader. I can be sure that this is a story I'll never forget. Thank you for taking as much time as you did to write this. It has truly been an experience.

Jenna- Fri 16 Feb 2007
I just have to compliment you on your wonderful story. When I first read this last July, I totally became hooked with the Kag/Sess pairing. You totally opened my eyes to how good of a couple they would be. After so many months I had to read this tear-jerker once again, so I did. Hopefully you write many more masterpieces and inspire others to write stories in the future. I wish you the best of luck and fortune.

Kiriana Ki- Tue 30 Jan 2007
Omg! I love this story, I readd almost all of it awhile ago and I just reread eveerything and when I read the last couple of chapters, I started crying so badly! Are you making anything else like this? I love this story soo much! especially how you ended it, you left no room for the imagination for after the story. Keep up the good work!

Krystal- Fri 26 Jan 2007
I'm so glad I stumbled across this fic! it was so good ^_^ though I think I need a more lightharted one now :P *glares at the pile of tissues next to her* yeah but it was awesome! I'll be reading more of yours :)

Just Unique- Thu 11 Jan 2007
Oh my GOD!!! Thsi fic is soooo great!! It made me cry "more than a few" times... it is very realistic and i love it.. there was this mix of tragedy and humor, it made me laugh in the most unexpected moments. This is one of the best fanfics i've ever read!!! Really Awesome!! Thanks a lot for enjoyable moments :D
PD: Write another one as good as this soon!

Leslie- Thu 11 Jan 2007
wow.... i read that story nonstop and the imagery in it is so mesmerizing and the emotion and raw feeling just grabs at the soul. Made me cry too. words can't describe and i hope you write another story, that would be really appreciated.

lilmoe31- Mon 08 Jan 2007
I'm am just going to say WOW. That was the BEST FF I ever read. DAMN I'm am at such lost for words right now. I just could not stop myself from read this FF.
YOU GO GIRL. Damn your good.

Jenna Meier-Bilbo- Fri 29 Dec 2006
wow! i would have written a review for all of the chapters, but i couldn't stop reading for the life of me! this is without a doubt the best fanfic i have read, EVER! this was great and i hope your others are just as good. never mind i know that you other will be just as good!

*Jenna*

Kanela- Thu 28 Dec 2006
I can't believe it...it's the third time I check this story out an dit still makes me cry...I'm bawling like a baby right now...I absolutely adore you. Thank you, THANK YOU for such a wonderful story!!!

Isis- Mon 04 Dec 2006
I have read this story now at least three times, and each time it still affects me. You are an amazing story teller. Words cannot sufficently describe the power of this story or it's heart. It was truly lovely... There was such truth in this tale, such raw emotion. I am awed by your talent and thankful that I got the chance to enjoy something so beautiful.

ice- Sat 02 Dec 2006
This was really good. Hmmm, it's hard to explain, but I'm dissappointed and content at the same time. I'm dissappointed, because your characters are really different from Fugue, but I'm also content for the same reason. It didn't go like I thought it would, but it was still really good. Great job. Congrats on finishing such an epic.

Kagome093- Thu 30 Nov 2006
OMG that is just so heartbreaking I'm seiously crying that is so sad for sessh 10 years is nothing he is a demon he'll live thousands of years without her that thought is so scary life isnt fair but then again that was the point of this story wasnt it great jobI can truely see why people love this story so much it is beautiful just briliant it shows how life can just slip through ones hand not by a villian or all powerful evil that she wont die risking her life to save the world but by something inevidable something that simply could not be cured thank you for making this story real truely honest to god real that you showed how they fell in love as slow as possible it acctually to longer than any other story I've EVER read (and thats alot I'm a bookworm) thank you for showing how truely unjust life and thank you for making it cancer cause I myself have lost my father to cancer at the age of 12 and I know millions of others know how painful it is to see someone you truely love die slowly and painfully and not being abl to do anything that not even someone as powerful as Sesshoumaru cannot save the woman he loves thank you for portraying that you have no idea how much that means to me you did a mindblowing job

Kagome093- Thu 30 Nov 2006
that was so utterly PERFECT I loved ever single second of it GREAT JOB. ....now to read.....the morning after...dundundun YAY

Kagome093- Tue 28 Nov 2006
omg ....that was so romantic i absolutly loved it. i want to seriously thank you for taking 30 chapters to reach that level of intamacy, for devoloping their relationship first instead of just a 'magical connection' at first sight, thank you for subtly showing the changes in their relationship it truely made this chapter worth while SPECTACULAR JOB

nere- Sun 26 Nov 2006
wow! wow! wow! this is the best stuff i have ever read. i find myself reading this wonderful story at 4:30am. the way you portray the characters gives them so much more depth than the show and the manga combined. beautifully written, the tension and underlying feelings between kago and sesho is brilliant. i love, i love, i love. you've gotta keep this going. gosh, you should get this publicized!! honestly!!! amazing amazing amazing....now i sleep.

Kagome093- Sat 25 Nov 2006
'a house with rearanged furniture' I LOVE THAT that's perfect it describes the differance between inu and sess in such a different perspective cudos for comming up with that

Raven- Thu 09 Nov 2006
Kami! That was such a beautiful story. I am at a loss of words in describing the feeling I was left with when I finished it. Your talent in writing is amazing...absolutely amazing. I was so enthralled with reading each chapter, that I put off two days of course work to finish it. I could not get enough; I found that I had to know what happened. I had to know where the story was going; how the characters would fare in the end. You wove together such an intricate tale that for a while there, I could almost believe that it was an actual novel. It's hard to describe exactly what it is I want to say about your fic, and I'm surprised to find that this is the first time that I am at a loss for words. Never have I come across such a talent as yours; such a passion for the story; or even a tale such as yours. I am still reeling from the effects that linger after I finished the last sentence. Amazing, beautiful, great; inspiring..these words don't even begin to describe the fic nor the feelings that I have from reading it. I think in essence what I want to say is: Thank you. Thank you for wonderful world that I could escape into...even if for a fleeting moment.

dana jean- Thu 02 Nov 2006
i just read this again

it produced all the same results. sesshomaru was just as witty and heartbreaking and alone

and kagome was just as real and sweet and i just believed it

just as much as i did before.


dana jean- Thu 19 Oct 2006
wow.

im crying, and im laughing, and together it sounds like a particularly horrifying train wreck- if i looked, i would probably see it on my face- but i dont care because its so beautiful and so real and i think i would be in love with you if that wasn't so strange..

how come i like this better than the actual anime?

Your Sesshomaru was so believeable, and so real. It was nice when most fanfictions are more to the effect of "i hate humans, but i met you 5 minutes ago and am already experiencing deep feelings of love/lust"

it was so real..

and so grammatically correct, with no spelling errors. i checked, mainly because i am a spelling purist, and as such i believe if you can't spell, you don't deserve a keyboard.

but you can.

well, thats enough gushing for now, i think. concise version of what i am trying to say- your fanfiction was beautifully written, poignant and so..so..correct, that i will probably dream it for a month.

here is to dreaming.

Steph- Wed 11 Oct 2006
Wow, so I am completely in love with your Sesshoumaru... not that I wasn't already obsessive over him, but your portrayal of him was particularly attractive... I just loved it when he was bored and started teasingly insulting his servants, and they groveled.. ehheh. The little arguments that Kagome and Sesshoumaru would have were amazing, and I am so happy that everything worked out for them. Also, I love how original their relationship was. Waiting so long for the lemon really made it something special. I'm at the point where I usually skip them because they are either all the same, or happen too soon in the relationship to be plausible. But everything about your story is absolutely amazing!

Tigeris- Fri 06 Oct 2006
BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER! I love your writing so much, but I'm not sure if I have ever revewed you before. This is the second time I have read this story, and like I said: BEAUTIFUL!

Aishiteru- Sat 30 Sep 2006
*takes deep breath* Whew. I almost forgot how sad this was...

I think I finally have enough will to read this story once again.....I read it the first time around, as you were updating it to this site, and I think I'm finally ready to read it again.

Beautiful chapter, and a great opening to such a wonderful story! I've always had a hard time coming up with a good opening, something to grab my readers...it seems you've mastered this. ^^ I'm going to try to leave a review for every chapter...because I didn't do that the first time around. ^^;

I love how you wrote the storytelling! It was very emotional. It was just so....words can't explain. Great job! *hug*

~Aishiteru

tenchi mizu- Wed 27 Sep 2006
Oh my god i am like at the point of tears that was amazing you wrote a story that wrapped me up then whisked me away into a story of love and adventure. You did an amazing job. Such an amazing job that I will be reading it again, and again, and again, well you get the picture but on top of that i will probably be sending you a new review every time. Oh and in case i didn't mention this before... you wrote an amazing story

jestergirl- Wed 27 Sep 2006
OMG that is such a great story, it made me cry so bad in the last 3 chapters. This is excellent, a good romance and comedy. The way yu describe sesshoumaru in the end reminds of my best friend/ boyfriend who is always finding a way of making be happilly crazy. Bravo!!!!!!!!!!

karla- Sat 23 Sep 2006
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! omg!!!!! i have cried, laughed, and stayed up all hours of the night trying to finish this story and i am soooo happy that the ending did not dissappoint me! I was so worried somehthing aweful would play out, but it ended so perfectly and they will be reincarnated! haha i wonder if the gods will finally smile on them and let them remember eachother when they find eachother again!!!!! i wonder... could there be a sequel for this fic? it is pure genius!!!! i loved it!!!! and hmm i would cut my leg off to trade places with kagome after she unsealed him... wonderful pictures you created in my mind with that chapter!!!! anyways loved this story VERY much i can't say enough about it haha!!!!

Warai_Jizai1986- Thu 07 Sep 2006
Okay, Wow. Those last three chapters made me cry. You are an awsome writer. It is so hard to find a good story that pulls you in and has you feeling everything the characters felt. And leaves you wanting more. Thanks.

Krys- Wed 06 Sep 2006
i loved the story, it was beautiful (= keep it up. Can't wait to read more of your stories!

Julie- Sat 02 Sep 2006
OMFG YOU BEASTARD!!!!!! You killed Kagome and didn't even give them one kid?!?!?!?!? Are you nuts?! I liked your story tho...except for the last 7 or so chapters ... they were depressing.

mitsuko_demon- Thu 31 Aug 2006
you've probably read this a million times but your story was AMAZING!!! I loved it!!! It was original and i never got bored. I hope that if u ever decide to write another fic like this one it will be just as great.

wishes of luck!!!
-MD

Catherine- Thu 31 Aug 2006
I don't think enough words exist to express how much I enjoyed your story. It was superb! You are an excellent writer. I love the way you captured the characters emotions. It takes talent, especially when your trying to portray Sesshoumaru showing emotions; especially regret and sadness. This is a masterpiece. Thank you so much for sharing your work!

Nazel- Sun 27 Aug 2006
You know, even though I don't know you, I'm very thankful that I read this story. Although the characters are from another story which I also adored, your story gave them a different life. So real and tangible. Tangible that my heart was so touched even when I'm still halfway reading story. You touched my heart. Although I may sound exaggerated, the feelings Kagome portrayed in this story is so real for me. The angst, and the loneliness. I felt the emotions. It was so real. Anyway, enough for my babbling, just want to give you a nice pat on the back for this wonderful piece of work. No other fanfic nor novel (i do read a lot, in fact) has touched my heart as your story did. I'll never ever forget this. Thank you so much.

-Nazel
http://www.tabulas.com/~sophismata

TRACE- Sun 30 Jul 2006
I am eagely awaiting novels that you write.
Excellent.

Saben- Sat 15 Jul 2006
I not really sure how to begin, as this is my first review. I have only recently begun to read FanFics but I was quickly hooked. I noticed that like most art today you have to wade thru a fair amount of rehashed, tiring drivel before finding something of interest. While a good steamy oneshot can always be a very fun read, I have come to enjoy the longer epic style stories. I have to say that you are a truly amazing writer. The depth of thought for the plot, vividness of the characters, and the full range of emotions contained in this wonderful jewel of a story really surprised me. Until this little FF discovery I was a suspense novel person, my bookshelves dedicated to Rollings, Koontz and King. I never expected to find a FF writer who could so full captivate me, even better than any of the novels I have read in the last few years. I laughed so hard that I snorted, gnawed my lip in expectation and nearly wept at the end, so thank you for the great story! I can only hope that you continue to write and publish your works. Oh and as for those petulant morons who flamed you, tell a stroll off a cliff.

~ Saben ;-P

michy- Fri 14 Jul 2006
ok, how do i begin to describe your story?! i think if i could find all the right words & put them together it would take up too much space. btw, i've spent practically 2 days reading this, i think you put some spell over it or something cause i couldn't look away, even if my eyes were dry, but i'll forgive you since it was an.....amazing doesn't seem a strong enough word but i guess it'll have to do, story. there were so many emotions, so many thoughts, so much..everything! i felt like i was in the story watching them, forgetting i even exsited & being content if i only exsisted ( if i remembered i exsited from my earlier point), if my only purpose was to read your story. everything about fate, destiny, time travel, human mind, the big things in life and little mannerisms & details, the small things in life made the story extraordinary! the way you figured out how to word their thoughts is amazing. i'm really trying to be general cause if i focus in on a specfic thing i'll go onto another thing & never stop. how you made things seem so signifigant & larger than life and yet so real & human. i think i might even start thinking differently because of this, like how your characters think. sorry, got distracted from praisin your story, where was i? oh yeah, and i liked how you could make me feel the emotions the people in the story did, i cried, laughed, grinned, frowned, my family probably thinks i'm crazy by now since i've shown these emotions while they were within ear & eyeshot (picture me laughing & crying at a computer screen for seemingly no apparent reason) . i felt my heart leap for joy & be squeezed in fear. i even held my breath a few times now that i think about it. point is your story really touched & moved me, made me feel things, think about things, learn things. needless to say it's one of the nest stories i've read, now in my top 3! (and i've read A LOT of stories). i feel surprised that i relate more to sesshomaru than kagome, wait, that has nothing to do with praisin you at all now does it? well your story has also helped me cause i've been feeling....well neutrel for the past few months & it helped remind me of feelings. i like how you didn't make everything perfect, & didn't leave out the injuries that happen afterwards or certain details (like kagome putting her hand through a corpse's stomach) that would've made the story less well i didn't find it disgusting per se but i can't think of a better word at the moment, but would've taken away from the story. and the fight & nasty little thoughts in people's heads. when they spoke i could kind've hear them in the insane part of my mind, but when they thought it was like an echo, no a whisper inside my head. all in all your story was so amazing that words cannot descibe it, but i've tried the best i could, hope i got some of what i felt when i read your story across.


Kheylia- Thu 29 Jun 2006
My second time or third reading this.. and it's still just as good. You're a really great writer. Serious!
I love the whole reincarnation outlook.. at least.. I think that's what you were doing at the end. Overall, it's wonderful.

KitsuneDragonheartLove- Fri 23 Jun 2006
it is one of the best fanfics i have ever read. i only found it a few days ago and i'm curently reading chap.14 but i love it. i made me want to laugh, to cry and it stopped me from writing anything since i'm not confident enough to put anything down after i saw how good this story is. i also read making the best of purgatory, which had me walking around without a pourpous for two days, bugging my friends with how cool your storys are.

megumi- Thu 22 Jun 2006
that was an awsome story it was just awsome.....wow just wow I loved it thats all I have 2 say I loved it,u r an awsome writer keep up the awsome work, anyway take care Ja Ne ^.^

Angel- Fri 16 Jun 2006
Urgh! Is there enough words in the universe for me to say how much I loved this fic?? I think not, it was amazing I loved every minute. I would love to see reincarnated versions of Kagome and Sesshoumaru fall in love overand over again! (I'm such a sap) This fic deserved every award and more!

Nedrea- Wed 07 Jun 2006
Oh wow, that was absolutely beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your fanfic, and I was delighted to see that it was complete too! (Though I noticed this around chapter 15...) The writing was catchy when it needed to be and sweet when appropriate--things just fell very nicely into place. An extremely nice mix of angst and warm fuzziness.

I look forward to reading more fiction from you.

Lady Desdemona- Tue 06 Jun 2006
Ya' know that was a pretty gory chapter... Funny thing tho, I was eating and reading it at the same time.

party- Sat 03 Jun 2006
i love your fanfic! It was so sad and realistic that i nearly cried. I'm kind of sad and happy that the fanfic is complete. Hope you make another one!!

Lilyfearie- Fri 26 May 2006
I loved your story. You are by far one of the best writers I've ever run into. So fluid and poetic. The perfect blend of words and emotions. I will look for more of your work. Keep it up. Arigato.

Tara- Thu 25 May 2006
I had to tell you that I enjoyed this fanfiction greatly. The ending was a wonderful conclusion, and I look foward to reading more of your work.

Denise Gilliland- Mon 22 May 2006
There are no words to truly express how much I loved your story. For days now I've been reading this, hooked on it, and I'm disappointed that it's now over. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful, moving story with all of us. It was truly amazing

Chelsea Fournet- Mon 22 May 2006
I loved every last bit of this fanfic. Normally when I read fic I rate it before I finish it but this one I had to go through to the end. Kick ass. i hope to see some more of your work soon.

Chels

massao-na-mizu- Thu 18 May 2006
i don't know if i should've been happy when i reached the new country i was supposed to live in and grow and start over and then i see you've updated and finally finished. and then i read, and i read, and i read. and some parts, i had to print out, because i had places to go to and nothing to read but your work. and now that she's dead, no matter what i've read in the past, it made me cry. i've read a lot of books, full of angst, full of loss - but they never had an impact like this... the way you've writtten this, the way you've made it so humorous and at the same time heartbreaking so kills me.. but then i can't stop reading. i thought you'd make kagome say that she'd be waiting - like what she thought when she was supposed to die before - but then you always wrote the most unexpected which is why perhaps this fanfic of yours is the one i most love. and it really makes me ache to know it's done.. all i can do is read on.. and finish it. i might not be able to review again, the way my short term memory works and schedules do need to be followed but i wanted to thank you for writing this. it's really been a pleasure to have read it. you could write anything you want, with your talent. you shouldn't constrict yourself to fanfiction because i'd read anything you've written. seriously. er, well.. 'cept for the same gender stuff that is. i'm close-minded that way, but i did try. anyways, this review is going nowhere because i've already said what i've been meaning to. once again, thanks for writing this and thanks for the memories of this story. it truly touched my heart. it doesn't matter if it's not written by a famous published author or if it's bestselling, the way things are, you'd be on top if this was published.

massao-na-mizu- Thu 18 May 2006
i don't know if i should've been happy when i reached the new country i was supposed to live in and grow and start over and then i see you've updated and finally finished. and then i read, and i read, and i read. and some parts, i had to print out, because i had places to go to and nothing to read but your work. and now that she's dead, no matter what i've read in the past, it made me cry. i've read a lot of books, full of angst, full of loss - but they never had an impact like this... the way you've writtten this, the way you've made it so humorous and at the same time heartbreaking so kills me.. but then i can't stop reading. i thought you'd make kagome say that she'd be waiting - like what she thought when she was supposed to die before - but then you always wrote the most unexpected which is why perhaps this fanfic of yours is the one i most love. and it really makes me ache to know it's done.. all i can do is read on.. and finish it. i might not be able to review again, the way my short term memory works and schedules do need to be followed but i wanted to thank you for writing this. it's really been a pleasure to have read it. you could write anything you want, with your talent. you shouldn't constrict yourself to fanfiction because i'd read anything you've written. seriously. er, well.. 'cept for the same gender stuff that is. i'm close-minded that way, but i did try. anyways, this review is going nowhere because i've already said what i've been meaning to. once again, thanks for writing this and thanks for the memories of this story. it truly touched my heart. it doesn't matter if it's not written by a famous published author or if it's bestselling, the way things are, you'd be on top if this was published.

sweetygirly521- Thu 18 May 2006
the ending was beautiful....it shouldn't have ended any other way...just perfect

nicole.- Tue 16 May 2006
OMG!! I LOVE this story... seems kinda silly, but i cried at some parts. tsk.

nicole.- Tue 16 May 2006
OMG!! I LOVE this story... seems kinda silly, but i cried at some parts. tsk.

shadowcat- Mon 15 May 2006
awwwww! things are getting good. foreshadowing? i think yes. cant wait.

shadowcat- Fri 12 May 2006
awww... you know why? because they are totally falling in love with each other.

shadowcat- Fri 12 May 2006
"That doesn't sound like waking me up enough to move. That sounds really suspicious!"
HAHAHA that parts so funny. awww it's so sad!!

shadowcat- Fri 12 May 2006
"That doesn't sound like waking me up enough to move. That sounds really suspicious!"
HAHAHA that parts so funny. awww it's so sad!!

shadowcat- Thu 11 May 2006
aww the last part... sniff. she should just stay in the past.

shadowcat- Thu 11 May 2006
GASP! Oh no! dun dun dun... btw, do you have ANY idea how often I have to look up words while i read this story? i love how you use such wide range of vocabulary and stuff.

bassekh- Thu 11 May 2006
ARGH!!! I can't believe it's done!! Sigh...Gorgeous, Divine, Soul Cleansing. I loved your story and am greatly saddened, not of the ending, but that it has ended. Thank you again for such a great fairytale ^_^

bassekh- Thu 11 May 2006
I've been reading this story avidly for the past 3 days, WAITING for Chapter 37. Delicious!! The whole story so far has been one long heartache and snotty sloppy giggle, but their joining in 37 was beautiful. Especially because at the time I was listening to a collection of Sarah McLachlan songs. 3 songs played that matched breathelessly to the scene: "Don't Let Go" ft. Bryan Adams, "Possession", and Sweet Surrender" Ach, I was in heaven mind and soul. Yours is a gift. Thank you for sharing. Now I have to finish it off ^_^

shadowcat- Wed 10 May 2006
awww!! sesshy has a soft side after all. if i may say so, i think the two are starting to actually like each other.

shadowcat- Wed 10 May 2006
there is a third movie. you get to see baby inu yasha. hes cute. and his parents. what's canon mean?

shadowcat- Wed 10 May 2006
SHE DIDNT TELL ANYONE SHE WAS LEAVING???? OH NO! WHY!!!!!! Aw Koga's so sweet, but his son is an ass. HAHAHA verybal diarrhea and constipation... that parts was hilarious. great work.

shadowcat- Wed 10 May 2006
SHE DIDNT TELL ANYONE SHE WAS LEAVING???? OH NO! WHY!!!!!! Aw Koga's so sweet, but his son is an ass. HAHAHA verybal diarrhea and constipation... that parts was hilarious. great work.

shadowcat- Tue 09 May 2006
nvm, i dont feel so bad for her anymore. what a slut. i was thinking of koga... haha.

shadowcat- Tue 09 May 2006
i feel so bad for machiko. they finally found her! haha i think i know what happened at the village...

shadowcat- Tue 09 May 2006
what's inu-ouji? haha this chapter was funny..

shadowcat- Tue 09 May 2006
AWWWWWWWWWWWW! THings are gettnig better. im glad. weheres shippo nm miroku n sango n koga n what happened to them?

shadowcat- Tue 09 May 2006
AWww.
sniff, another sad story! but it says north, so it cant be sesshoumaru! i hope it'snot. well anyhow, i feel bad for machiko or whatever her name was. how sad. that guy's a jerk. kagome should kick his ass.

shadowcat- Tue 09 May 2006
b-e-a-utiful!

shadowcat- Tue 09 May 2006
b-e-a-utiful!

shadowcat- Tue 09 May 2006
that was a very very very very very good chapter. expecially the last part, where kagome n sess are both like int he same situation doing the same thing. its so poetic and metaphor ish. good use of literary... techniques? yeah. you're an AWESOME writer.

shadowcat- Tue 09 May 2006
sooooooooooooo friggin sad. anyhow, i think i understand the time thingie now. btw, does sess really wear blueish in manga? never noticed. so how does the patter of the clothes work? i dont get that part (except the colors)

shadowcat- Mon 08 May 2006
WAIT! I thought it said over 40 years a couple of chapters ago, but now its like 30??

shadowcat- Mon 08 May 2006
WAIT! I thought it said over 40 years a couple of chapters ago, but now its like 30??

shadowcat- Mon 08 May 2006
AAAH what's going on? isn't kagome too late then? oh. she. is. that. miko. isn't. she.

shadowcat- Mon 08 May 2006
AAAH what's going on? isn't kagome too late then? oh. she. is. that. miko. isn't. she.

shadowcat- Mon 08 May 2006
AAAH what's going on? isn't kagome too late then? oh. she. is. that. miko. isn't. she.

shadowcat- Mon 08 May 2006
GAAAH! Doesn't that mean kagome' stoo late? is this happening at the same time, in past n present? oh no, poor rin...

shadowcat- Mon 08 May 2006
GASP! Inu yasha's dead? how? when? why? what happened five years ago? or has it been five years? oh no, is this when... oh no!

shadowcat- Mon 08 May 2006
GASP! Inu yasha's dead? how? when? why? what happened five years ago? or has it been five years? oh no, is this when... oh no!

shadowcat- Mon 08 May 2006
why am i the only one who left reviews for such a wonderful story? its making me so sad. i cant wait to read the rest and find out wha happens. poor rin, poor sesshy, poor kagome.

shadowcat- Mon 08 May 2006
sniff... that's sooo sad!! im crying.

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