Ace!- Sun 23 Mar 2008
:D I'd like to see where this is going and how you and the story are going to progress. my only advice is to add more detail, give it more feel.

Sashi- Wed 17 May 2006
Grrr you need to write more it is really good

Sashi- Wed 17 May 2006
this story is soo good! but it is sad

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