Reviews for At What Price by DarkShadow
geminie- Tue 08 Apr 2008
damn, u made Sessh a asshole to Kags. guess it was ok but Sessh still really needs to understand how he treated her so bad and mean. i mean there were some parts that were really sweet but others just mad me wanna slap the f*@%k out of Sessh. i mean like forcing himself on her like that in his study and just walking away from it?????
jessica- Sun 20 Jan 2008
this is an awsome story i love it nice gob i must of taken you a long time for you to finish props to ya i love it its awsome
kiba- Sat 19 Jan 2008
make a movie outta this man!
Cafekko- Wed 11 Jul 2007
*points to chap 77*
woah.
that's gotta be the best/worst cliffie I've ever seen =D
woah.
that's gotta be the best/worst cliffie I've ever seen =D
Milana DesPana- Fri 15 Jun 2007
0o0 WOW this is the best fanfic I have ever read great loemons niccccce fight sceens and an amazing ending
nIcOlE- Fri 18 May 2007
i salute you for being against lemon and smutss or is it only for those who you don't like?
29 Soft Kisses- Mon 14 May 2007
Oh wow, two days to read 79 chapters.
ANd I must say it was worth it. Although I did notice some errors but not many...just some spelling and pretense errors.....
I can only imagine the work and effort you put into this.
ANd I must say it was worth it. Although I did notice some errors but not many...just some spelling and pretense errors.....
I can only imagine the work and effort you put into this.
ohiowriter- Mon 14 May 2007
I thought you said that the door to his room only opened for the lord and his lady, but Rin and Jaken could get in there, too. How?
katie- Sun 13 May 2007
OMG!!! THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT FIC THAT I READ THE ENTIRE DAMN THING IN ONE DAY!!! I COULDN'T STOP!! IT WAS AWESOME!! GREAT JOB AND I HOPE TO SEE ANOTHER FIC OF YOURS UP SOON!!! KEEP UP THE WORK...AND AGAIN WOW!!
Chibikawaiichan- Sat 12 May 2007
waaah, how beautifull! X3
Silvermist- Fri 04 May 2007
~~NOT a flame!!!~~
This story is giving my brain a good workout. word usage or what i suspect to be a rather futsy spellchecker substituting words that while making no sense at all to the sentances, can be with the right amount of twisting, turned into a reasonable semblance of the intended word.
I'm enjoying this fic, quiet alot acctually. It is more a matter of puzzling out the intent at 6am. Down with insomnia!
Good work,
The taleweaver
This story is giving my brain a good workout. word usage or what i suspect to be a rather futsy spellchecker substituting words that while making no sense at all to the sentances, can be with the right amount of twisting, turned into a reasonable semblance of the intended word.
I'm enjoying this fic, quiet alot acctually. It is more a matter of puzzling out the intent at 6am. Down with insomnia!
Good work,
The taleweaver
alandrias- Sat 24 Mar 2007
this was an awsome story... i love it so much well done
shaanjin- Fri 23 Mar 2007
I really like the storyline. It may have been already used, but it is not overused and you have a very fine way of developing the plot.
Oh, by the way. It isn't really a flame, only a hint how to improve the overall quality of your story, because no story can be wholly perfect, we can only try to get near it: I would advise you to ask a BETA reader (or best two, because four eyes see more) to go over your fic and correct the spelling or tipping mistakes. There are quite a few. Your grammar is good.
If you wanted me to, I would gladly comply.
shaanjin
Oh, by the way. It isn't really a flame, only a hint how to improve the overall quality of your story, because no story can be wholly perfect, we can only try to get near it: I would advise you to ask a BETA reader (or best two, because four eyes see more) to go over your fic and correct the spelling or tipping mistakes. There are quite a few. Your grammar is good.
If you wanted me to, I would gladly comply.
shaanjin
magnificentchaos- Wed 17 Jan 2007
This was a great fic i loveed it until the very end thanks fo sharing it with us
Senka- Fri 05 Jan 2007
^^ thank you for posting the missing chapters!!!!! O! i am so excited to read!!!!
Luna- Thu 04 Jan 2007
i hope it doesn't end like that because it says complete in the discription. i love it so far but i really hope it doesn't end that way
kie- Sun 31 Dec 2006
Your story is very good but I wonder if you know that it's under "completed." I was quite surprised when I realized that I was at the end of the last chapter and that the story wasn't finished.
Could you e-mail me when your story is done? I don't get to use the computer for fun much and I'd like to set aside some time to finish it.
Oh .. and HURRY WITH IT PLEASE!!!
(tokelauteine4evaz@yahoo.com)
Could you e-mail me when your story is done? I don't get to use the computer for fun much and I'd like to set aside some time to finish it.
Oh .. and HURRY WITH IT PLEASE!!!
(tokelauteine4evaz@yahoo.com)
Vaneles- Sun 17 Dec 2006
I love your fanfic. I read it all on some other fic site...animespiral i believe... and it was amazing. but sadly I have forgotten how it ended since it was like three years ago. I will await your next updates! Ja ne!
britt- Sat 16 Dec 2006
please! please. please. finish the stoorryy. It's SO good.
kat- Fri 15 Dec 2006
omg!!! evil cliff hanger update soon please??? sessho has groveling to do!
Senka- Sat 11 Nov 2006
please please please update the rest of this, i know theres ten and then some chapters left *if i can remember correctly* please!!! i use to have this fic but then it went byebye! and i would love to read it again, please! i know im not the only one! if u can just update it in one chapter, copy and paste. please!!! *puppy eyes*
Katsumi- Wed 11 Oct 2006
I like this story so far! Keep up the good work. Though there are a few...spelling and grammatical errors it is, over all, quite good.
lovesbooks16- Sat 07 Oct 2006
I was enjoying your story and then came upon the last chapter posted. It didn't seem to be finished. I think I have read your story before and enjoyed it so much that I had to read it again. Is there another website that contains the full story? I would really enjoy reading it fully again. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.
Stacie- Mon 18 Sep 2006
WHY IS THIS IN THE FUCKING COMPLETE SECTION?!!! UPDATE!! I HAVE WAITED FOREVER FOR YOU TO FUCKING UPDATE!!!! DO IT NOW!!!
please and thank you!
please and thank you!
Jessica- Wed 13 Sep 2006
I love this story and I can not wait to read the rest of it please let me know when you have the next chapter up. Thank You.
lovesbooks16- Sun 20 Aug 2006
i was wondering if there was any more chapters to this story. It seemed to be cut off but I remember reading the whole thing. I was so enjoying it. Let me know if I'm mistaken please. Thanks.
Xiomara- Sat 05 Aug 2006
Wow!!!!
Geez, louise!!!!
Your story is awsome... ^_^ you have any idea how many stories i have read? ....*suspence* many okay.... lol.
Well i was just letting you know how awsome your story really is!
I would love you sooo much if you e-mail everyt time you post a new chapter.... *begs* please, pretty please, with sugar on top... ^_^
I would gladly appriciate it!!!
*|Xiommy|*
Geez, louise!!!!
Your story is awsome... ^_^ you have any idea how many stories i have read? ....*suspence* many okay.... lol.
Well i was just letting you know how awsome your story really is!
I would love you sooo much if you e-mail everyt time you post a new chapter.... *begs* please, pretty please, with sugar on top... ^_^
I would gladly appriciate it!!!
*|Xiommy|*
Kaori- Wed 26 Jul 2006
wait... what happens next? please update, cause you can't just leave the story like that. PLEASE!!!!!!!
Marjorie- Tue 25 Jul 2006
AHHH OMG THAT'S NOT COMPLETE!!!! Pleaz update! This story is really awesome and there's NO WAY u can finish it like this!
Mit SS- Wed 19 Jul 2006
AHHH!!!! plz UPDATE!!!!!
i love aur sory but i despise
unfinished ones.....
i love aur sory but i despise
unfinished ones.....
Ezriee- Fri 14 Jul 2006
I just wanted to stop and say that i absolutely love this fic. I read it before in the past and had to reread it. :) I just wanted to let you know that that i think the site lost the last few chaps of this story because I could have SWORN that this fic had already been completely...much to my dispare because I wanted it to keep going *pouts*. I would be a very happy lil ezzy if you were to repost them if you got the chance to. Again, awesome fic and I look forward to reading more of your fics.
Ezri-Candy
Ezri-Candy
stacie- Wed 12 Jul 2006
YOU CALL THAT COMPLETE!! WHAT THE CRAP! FINISH IT!
genevieve- Sat 08 Jul 2006
PLEASE UPDATE IM BEGGING YOU! I love this story! PLEASE =)
Dark Topaz- Thu 06 Jul 2006
this doesn't seem complete
sssc- Mon 19 Jun 2006
awww u just left the story are you going to update it?
10/10!!!
10/10!!!
Kylee- Sat 17 Jun 2006
I was just wondering if this fic is actually finished....it says it is but i read it and either my computer isn't workin right or something cuz i could not get the whole thing....so i was just wondering about that... otherwise i really like the fic and would like to read the end!! lol
Dee- Thu 15 Jun 2006
I am sooo loving this story. I cannot wait until you finish it. Please hurry with the next chapters. Waiting impatiently.
Dee- Thu 15 Jun 2006
I am sooo loving this story. I cannot wait until you finish it. Please hurry with the next chapters. Waiting impatiently.
Karu Moonlight Shadow- Tue 13 Jun 2006
hi it is an awsome story but the status says complete and i was wondering if it was or not because it leaves a cliff hanger on and if it is complete are you amking a sequel and if you not that sucks but if it isn't complete please update asap! i really like this story! and you mite wanna change your status! Thanks!
~Sesshoumaru Crazy~
~Sesshoumaru Crazy~
thehotty- Wed 07 Jun 2006
Oh! MORE!!!!! Please send more! I really like it!
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
LadyDesdemona- Sun 28 May 2006
Hey, I LOVE your story! Do you finish is and then not up lode the rest? I really wanna know what happens. If you've finished it please let me know I really enjoy reading it. You’re a very talented writer.
~desdemona
~desdemona
Sess' Sakura- Thu 18 May 2006
I just wanted you to know that I love this story. You did a great job with it.
Sakura
Sakura
Cochrann- Tue 16 May 2006
you have your story listed as complete, when it definitely is not complete! so plase correct that it's really infuriating. Otherwise it's a great story and I absolutely love it and hope you finish it, surely it will only take a few more chapters to complete - at least that's how I see it.
Hailey- Wed 10 May 2006
hi i was wondering if you can send me the link to your story.. "At what price" when it is done! I can't believe that you wrote over 70 pages but it was mostly half a page compared to others so i guess i understand...lol!
Thanks!
btw the story is pretty good...hope you wrote more..if you did can you send me links to completed stories
Thanks again!
Thanks!
btw the story is pretty good...hope you wrote more..if you did can you send me links to completed stories
Thanks again!