very good and rivetting. keep up the great work. and very good on keeping very closely to the actual POVs of each character. =]

I loved the part where Sesshoumaru is ttrying to comfort Kagome and he says " Do not let that baka taint something so beautiful." I almost cried. You are the Goddess of words (gets on knees and bows repediatly) you are sooooo awesome.

Wow! what a ride. nuff said

I read this at one go. What a delicious toe curlingly sexy finale. Well done! You definitely merit your nomination! Fabulous!

Ahh! That was great! Sesshomaru is a bit out of character, but not that bad-I really liked this!!

awwwwwww thats so nice!

I liked your story bitten and this one my only question is your use of the word, "nain" I can see that you use it for the word "no" but I do not know what language it is or if you just made it up for your use. It sounds awfully familiar to "nein" which is German for no. I would be content if you could explain that word usuage to me. That being said your story was hot!!! Okay Sesshy is hot....[ne?] and for a moment I thought that Inuyasha would take Kagome when he was crazy and I was beyond excited. It seemd so terribly wrong an dyet arousing. You spared her but before making your readers go mad with half-hatched asusmptions. WRITE MORE!!! I implore you. Oh and I never knew that fluffy was a hentai! Spying on Kagome, tsk, tsk. Although way cool. Wish I were Kaggie.

-Dani.

LOVE YOU!!!!! [or your writings, same thing]

^_^

I liked your story bitten and this one my only question is your use of the word, "nain" I can see that you use it for the word "no" but I do not know what language it is or if you just made it up for your use. It sounds awfully familiar to "nein" which is German for no. I would be content if you could explain that word usuage to me. That being said your story was hot!!! Okay Sesshy is hot....[ne?] and for a moment I thought that Inuyasha would take Kagome when he was crazy and I was beyond excited. It seemd so terribly wrong an dyet arousing. You spared her but before making your readers go mad with half-hatched asusmptions. WRITE MORE!!! I implore you. Oh and I never knew that fluffy was a hentai! Spying on Kagome, tsk, tsk. Although way cool. Wish I were Kaggie.

-Dani.

LOVE YOU!!!!! [or your writings, same thing]

^_^

Damn!! That was good.

As awlays "Rinseternalsoul" delivers an awesome piece of fanfiction. I am always excited to read another of her stories. They are always very well written. The characters are always in context with twists and turns all along the way. The stories make you want to re read them again and again. This one is no exception. I think I have read it 3 times. lol