Reviews for Unworthy One by Vyncent

Ada- Sun 27 Jul 2008
I've actually read this particular story multiple times (5-7 times =>) and its always an exciting read. Great job on this piece. Although A single spark no longer allows authors such as yourself to update, I wish you all the best with your future stories, and hopefully I will be able to read them as well. Good luck!!

anyomous- Tue 03 Jun 2008
sorry can't read this anymore you made sango and inuyasha together sorry

darkkira- Sun 03 Feb 2008
awww i loved it! your details were wonderfull!!!

Megan Consoer- Thu 06 Sep 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Nikki- Tue 31 Jul 2007
I am still in the middle of your story and I think it is sad that someone would down your work. I know little of japan's language but from that I have seen from movies anime and dateing asian men you put it to good use. Please do not let people who have nothing better to do and are unhappy with them self make you feel bad by downing your work. Writing is a art from and one that would and should be looked at with happyness for the courage that you show for posting it. Not many people can do that nor would because of people like them. I am very happy so far with your story and think you are going quite well. keep up thwe good work and follow your heart because that is where all good are comes from

Kawaii_Kilala- Tue 17 Apr 2007
I really enjoyed reading this fic, and am looking forword to reading even more of your work. If you hadn't made such a great ending for this story, i would ask for a sequal...but you put the best ending for this story on it, and make it impossible for me to ask that, without taking the chance that the sequal would ruin the first one.
I congradulate you on a job greatly done! I can just bet that I'll be reading this story a few more times, real soon, once I'm done with your other stories, and with other authors' stories, i have the longest list ever, from other friends...and, of course my husband...
Godd luck on any more stories you are currently working on!
TTYL;
joanne

D- Tue 06 Mar 2007
I loved this fic, this is probably one of the best Sess/Kag I have read in a long time. You're characterization of Sesshoumaru and a broken Kagome were right on.

Thanks for sharing

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Sesshomaru's True Love- Mon 19 Feb 2007
Because I'm rereading this, and you enjoyed the cute puppy dog eyes I gave you before...*scampering up close, the kitten child widens her eyes so that they glimmer and shine* Your fic is one of meh favs! *beaming, the kitten child wraps herself 'round Vyncent's leg with a hug, offering up a cookie for being awesome.* >^.^ MrrRowR

kimmy-chan- Tue 13 Feb 2007
WOW!!!! I totally loved it!! I finally finish it, too! It was awesome and worthy of an A++. ^-^

blue_angel36- Sun 21 Jan 2007
Woohoo! I finally finished this!!!!! *dies* I've always loved this fic, but would only get two or three chapters in before something pulled me away and I lost track of it. I FINALLY finished reading it all in one day lol Yes, I really have no life. lol But I loved, LOVED this story and it's now on my top five list of favs. Right up there with HotM and all of Striking Falcon's stories i've fallen for lol

tara- Mon 27 Nov 2006
hey i read your rant and since I'm an english major I thought I'd say something. Your absolutely right ! there isn't a damn thing wrong with your english and you'r one of the better authors around. Very enjoable work !

Andia- Sat 04 Nov 2006
Hey I just read your "rant' and I thought I'd let you know I am actually and English Major and I think your story is wonderful so far! Rants are fun, are they not?

Magiknight- Thu 26 Oct 2006
This is by far one of the best and most original stories I have come across in this pairing. It is truly a work of art. A warning to any person reading it for the first time, bring tissues.

Kayrea- Tue 05 Sep 2006
Hihi,
I've just read your little tirade at the person who calls him/herself 'Feh' and I just HAD to review. Firstly, I want to say that I completely agree with you, but there WAS one problem I though stood out a LOT. With the Japanese, I mean. I mean no offence, it just feels weird when I repeat the sentence/exclamation in my mind. I know a few other authors use this 'problem' as well, but... Yours just happened to be the one I wanted to review. =P So, the problem: A single word - "Iie", the Japanese word you replace for "No". "Iie" is the formal word for "No", and if you actually scream "Shippo, IIE!!!" It actually sounds weird if you watch anime. =P It'd be better if it were "Iya", which is more informal and more used in anime. =P I'm not being an expert - I'm 12 and only completed a Basic Japanese course so far, but I do know this much. =P I hope I didn't take up too much of your time and sorry if I offended you. =)
~Kayrea

Megan Consoer- Mon 21 Aug 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

solitairebbw218- Mon 24 Jul 2006
One of the most original, best written fan fictions I have ever read. Your writing talent enables a reader to almost live the story through your words. My eyes were definitely moist by the time I was finished...a sure sign that I was touched by your genius....Bravo!

RavenSilverKat- Thu 20 Jul 2006
I loved that story! As always, I love reading whatever you write as you seem to be Takahashi Rumiko-sensei herself with your great knowledge of Inuyasha, not only in fanfictions but also in whatever appears on the mailing list. I can't wait to read your other fanfictions and even though I'm usually a strictly KagomexSesshoumaru pairing girl, I think I should even read "Your Darkness". *bows* Keep up the beautifully great work!

jenn- Thu 20 Jul 2006
love it

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Mon 19 Jun 2006
I just finshed this and that it was amazing. I plain loved it.

mary soto- Thu 08 Jun 2006
I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this story. I even cried in the first chapters. Your story is very well written and the character depth was beautifully done, also the story's plot and attention to detail was very descriptive, so I give you praises for your work.

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