I really enjoyed reading this fanfiction. I hope you can write more like it. There was a lot of drama and angst that kept me reading it to the end. I'm glad they finally worked it out and ended up together.

I really enjoyed the story. It was very refreshing. Up untill about 3/4 way through the story, there was a lot of details that made it very interedting.

The last 1/4 however was slightly lacking. Although the plot was there, the details weren't. The ending just fell flat. I feel like either you were sick of writing, or possibly setting yourself up for a sequel. Either way, it just wasn't dramatic enough. I would suggest possibly revising the end. A really great ending, that I remember to this day is the ending to "Tales from the House of The Moon". That 's just my two cents. I don't mean any offense. I do like the structure and ideas behind your story

i hope that you coutinu this fanfic

i hpr that you coutinu this fanfic

Love it! Great Job. I like your style and I'll be reading everything you have posted here and look forward to future stories. :) Makes me want to start writing lol but I can't write nearly as well as you, maybe one day I'll give it a shot myself.

To be honest, I've read this story (the ENTIRE story) over five times for the past two+ years. An absolute classic for me--I never ever got tired of it!! The first fanfic I read that caught my interest so completely. LOVE IT!!!!

ok now that was extremely well done O.O i love it 3

your fanfic is very good.but in some of the chapters you could tell us what they were wearing.

But it was a good fanfic