that was ... strange. Ok I'm going to kind of set the stage for a comparason. In one of my games theres a person called the Knower of names and she can tell you who your true love is, she can also tell you someone elses true love. Its like when she told my evil half demon that she is the one true love of an angel!

That was strange, maybe you should elaborate on why he loves her. You should do like some flash backs or something As far as this one goes there was too much OOC for me.