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About Me

 

My name is Lidiya and I am a fanfictionoholic :) I am a rather hyperactive 21 year old Russian who loves the SessxKags pairing. They are just great together. I love music, writing and art. I'm not that great an artist but I do enjoy drawing immensely. At the moment I am working and trying to complete my Uni course :).

Thanks to the lovely Sugar0o my stories are here!

I appreciate any constructive criticism but will not reply when people are just clearly meanies. I will try to update all my stories as often as I can unless I feel that the quality is starting to slip, which is why it may longer for some chapters to appear (which is why drabbles work better for me lately, no word limit and all).

 


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01/11/2011 09:30:31Re:I write to...Off-Topic Discussion194726
01/11/2011 10:41:01Re:I write to...Off-Topic Discussion194726
01/15/2011 07:25:57Re:Favorite (older) books?Off-Topic Discussion51642
01/19/2011 02:30:08Re:I write to...Off-Topic Discussion194726
01/29/2011 03:54:31Re:Just Ran Across ThisOff-Topic Discussion4621
02/13/2011 05:35:13Re:Fairy tale SurveyOff-Topic Discussion96279
03/13/2011 09:21:25Re:I'm New?Off-Topic Discussion88574
03/31/2011 08:12:39Re:How old are you, Dokuga?Off-Topic Discussion145656
04/24/2011 21:23:02Re:Happy Easter 2011 Dokuga!Off-Topic Discussion77214
07/26/2011 08:26:04Re:How Tall are you Dokuga?Off-Topic Discussion38551
10/03/2011 03:56:57Re:YAY! The bats are back!Off-Topic Discussion3982
01/08/2012 01:59:16Re:GMDDN (18+) ONLY: January 14th, 2012Off-Topic Discussion4517
05/13/2012 07:21:02Re:Happy Mother's Day Dokuga!Off-Topic Discussion5704
07/25/2012 06:31:06Re:Happy Birthday JeniNejiOff-Topic Discussion7439
08/26/2012 01:29:52Re:HAPPY BIRTHDAY WICCAN!Off-Topic Discussion5978
07/26/2013 02:38:09Re:Happy Birthday JeniNeji!!!!!!!Off-Topic Discussion3655
09/28/2018 02:40:05Re:Dokuga Holiday Exchange Sign-ups!Off-Topic Discussion15322
01/08/2011 23:03:11Re:Things Sesshomaru would never say.Forum Games612859
01/09/2011 06:52:53Re:Things Sesshomaru would never say.Forum Games612859
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Fanfiction

criticat has 11 stories

Taking in his tired, red-rimmed eyes and dishevelled hair, Kagome saw desperation for what it was. ‘Super’ nanny or not, she would have to do.
Rating: T  -  Universe: Alternate  -  Status: Incomplete  -  Category: Oneshot Collections  -  Created: 06 Oct 2019  -  Updated: 09 Apr 2024
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 23  -  Reviews: 37  -  Words: 3,235  -  Reads: 42,682
 
The jewel is complete and although Naraku is yet to be defeated, Kagome makes her wish. But who would have thought that the Shikon has a mind of its own and twists her wish to suit itself?
Rating: M  -  Universe: Canon  -  Status: Incomplete  -  Category: Chapter Stories  -  Created: 12 Dec 2010  -  Updated: 12 Dec 2010
Genre: Action, Angst, Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 6  -  Reviews: 4  -  Words: 17,201  -  Reads: 10,359
 
A youkai and a miko. Such a pair would be unable to produce offspring. Or so they all thought until the amber-eyed girl was born.
Rating: M  -  Universe: Alternate  -  Status: Incomplete  -  Category: Chapter Stories  -  Created: 12 Dec 2010  -  Updated: 14 May 2011
Genre: Action, Angst, Friendship, Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 25  -  Reviews: 55  -  Words: 30,636  -  Reads: 56,388
 
Written for AmaViarra's 'No strings attached' challenge. It was all so simple initially. He was to find a miko and thus not worry about being tricked into producing an heir. This is the perfect arrangement for him and so it shall remain, no matter what.
Rating: M  -  Universe: Alternate  -  Status: Incomplete  -  Category: Chapter Stories  -  Created: 07 Feb 2011  -  Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 2  -  Reviews: 5  -  Words: 2,089  -  Reads: 6,965
 
What are little girls made of? Sugar, spice and a wish gone wrong apparently. For ROo's GenderBender challenge.
Rating: M  -  Universe: Alternate  -  Status: Incomplete  -  Category: Oneshot Collections  -  Created: 22 Mar 2011  -  Updated: 05 Nov 2011
Genre: Action, Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 11  -  Reviews: 23  -  Words: 7,019  -  Reads: 14,499
 
For R0o! Happy Mod Appreciation day! Sesshomaru just could not, would not believe that he is the problem. Must be the miko.
Rating: M  -  Universe: Alternate  -  Status: Complete  -  Category: Oneshot Collections  -  Created: 19 Apr 2011  -  Updated: 19 Apr 2011
Genre: Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 10  -  Reviews: 10  -  Words: 3,695  -  Reads: 17,451
 
The desert... so much and so little changed over time. In this world, filled with cruelty, betrayal of those close and superstition, an ancient prophecy birthed the belief into strength greater than any witnessed before. The being that wields the power shall surpass any other, but wish for more, this hunger being its downfall unless it shall find the desert's greatest treasure. A collection of Drabbles for different prompts.
Rating: M  -  Universe: Alternate  -  Status: Incomplete  -  Category: Oneshot Collections  -  Created: 01 May 2011  -  Updated: 13 Mar 2012
Genre: Action, Friendship, Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 137  -  Reviews: 200  -  Words: 35,292  -  Reads: 133,255
 
For him love was a waste of time. For her love was merely her job. Neither failed to get what they desired until the time came for the Kami of Love to take on her hardest task yet - find the perfect match for Takahashi Sesshomaru.
Rating: MA  -  Universe: Alternate  -  Status: Incomplete  -  Category: Chapter Stories  -  Created: 20 Nov 2011  -  Updated: 03 Feb 2018
Genre: Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 5  -  Reviews: 27  -  Words: 8,199  -  Reads: 12,402
 
Headstrong, loud, clumsy, annoying ... he loved it all. As strange as it was, rather than loving her despite her faults he loved her for them. He may not know exactly what drew him to her but he knew when it all started. It all began with a peanut butter and strawberry jam sandwich. **Written for my Dokuga's Secret Valentine: JeniNeji**
Rating: M  -  Universe: Alternate  -  Status: Complete  -  Category: Oneshots  -  Created: 16 Feb 2012  -  Updated: 16 Feb 2012
Genre: Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 1  -  Reviews: 3  -  Words: 3,741  -  Reads: 7,266
 
Raffle prize for Danielle. Spicing things up has never been this detrimental to one's health.
Rating: MA  -  Universe: Alternate  -  Status: Incomplete  -  Category: Oneshot Collections  -  Created: 10 Mar 2013  -  Updated: 10 Mar 2013
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 1  -  Reviews: 3  -  Words: 1,528  -  Reads: 4,314
 
Kagome knew that she could have at least left a note. Although there wasn't really a way to sugarcoat "I'm leaving you" just days before Christmas. My Dokuga Exchange gift for Kaoruhana!
Rating: T  -  Universe: Alternate  -  Status: Complete  -  Category: Oneshots  -  Created: 26 Jan 2018  -  Updated: 26 Jan 2018
Genre: Humor, Romance  -  Chapters: 1  -  Reviews: 3  -  Words: 3,353  -  Reads: 6,778
 

Favorite Fanart

Total number of favoured images: 524

MINE!!!
“I fell in love with the way u touched me”
Gangster
What Would You Like?
Shatter Me
Running Out of Time
The Clingy One...
No Dawn, No Day
Snowfall
Winds of Change
Stealing a Kiss
With the Rain (Title Page Preview 2)
Fade Out
Kagome Mama and Shippo - Braiding : Colored
  • Kagome Mama and Shippo - Braiding : Colored
  • Author: Blackthorn
  • Category: Fanart
Can I touch You?
[SessKag] Chibi Adventures I
Forgive Me?
[SessKag] Chibi Bath
My Precious
Conundrum sketch
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Chie
Created On: 10/16/2019 01:45:58
     
Thank you so much for your kind compliments and such a sweet review on Sengoku Love Story!

It is such a fun premise to write for, I still remember being blasted away by the plot bunny all "Oh wow I can't believe no one's ever done this before????"
Feedback from criticat: I like your human Sesshomaru, he's still himself but it feels like he is less certain somehow? As if he is more aware of the fragility of life.

I love all your stories! It's always a treat to see that you've updated! Thank you for writing!
JeniNeji
Created On: 06/27/2014 22:40:56
     
Long time no see! Thanks for commenting in my fanart :3 How has life treated you lately?
Feedback from criticat: I know! It's been ages!
Your art is wonderful, as always. I love the dark background and the contrasting colours. The whip and the light added to it nicely.
I'm good, thanks. Off work for the next two weeks, so I'm using my free time well


LM Bluejay
Created On: 09/26/2013 21:11:05
     
You don't know I happy you made me when I read your review! Some of the anons I could understand to an extent while with others it was just plain ridiculous! Lol. But I guess as an amateur fanfic writer dealing with "critics" comes with turf. But I digress...
Thank you so much for your lovely comment about the story! And I hope that you will enjoy the future chapters that will definitely come.


cakeiton
Created On: 04/18/2013 05:10:13
     
Thank you for your reviews on Just Imagine! I'm glad you are enjoying it. Also, you hit the nail on the head; they will be meeting in a more canon way later :] I hope you keep enjoying the story, thanks again.
Chie
Created On: 03/30/2012 04:18:55
     
Yes, it is completed. I wrote it to the end as a oneshot, but because it had so many short scenes in the beginning of the story I decided it would work even better as a drabble series, so once I got the story back from my beta I went through a minor editing process.

It's also why I dare to update it daily. My inspiration is often inconsistent at best. ^^;
Feedback from criticat: I like the daily updates, look forward to them very much!
Muses can be fickle, which is annoying, you feel like you are letting someone down by not updating but writing something not-as-good-as-it-should-be is worse.
Chie
Created On: 03/29/2012 14:27:01
     
Yes, Sesshoumaru did indeed consider starting something with Kagome. As this story was originally a oneshot, I didn't want to make it overly complicated.
Feedback from criticat: Simplicity is often best . I'm awfully guilty of making my stories far too complicated at times, I just can't help myself lol Oooh does that mean that it was completed? I'm glad! Means we will find out what happens soon ^^
Chie

Finland
Created On: 03/23/2012 05:33:41
     
Thank you for your review to Unforeseen!

That was actually exactly how I planned it to be - this is indeed just what she needs to be able to continue her life.
dianne
Created On: 03/14/2012 14:02:26
     
Thanks so much for reviewing Bewitched!


insomniac_amy
Created On: 03/07/2012 11:51:54
     
Thank you so much for your reviews on my story "Unwanted Desires" I'm glad you like it so far. I really need to get back at it and try to start adding more chapters.
Thanks
Amy


Sora
Created On: 02/02/2012 03:44:23
Edited By Sora On: 02/02/2012 03:47:31
     
Thanks for your review on Armor of the Emperor.
Thank you for the congratulations
P.S. You were right, russian letters come out like ??????


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