kaoruhana
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Created On: 12/16/2014 11:47:42
Thank you for your review. My aunt had breast cancer and a mastectomy so that's who I based Kagome on. My aunt doesn't talk to me a lot about her surgery either. I know she and my mother have had conversations about it though. So, I understand your feelings, in a way.
I'm quite sorry for your loss. My aunt was lucky in that her tumor was detected early enough to save her. I'm quite grateful for that.
Considering I have no experience writing them, I'm quite glad that so many people did say the last scene came out well-written. To be honest, I focused more on the physical acceptance and less on the sexuality in that scene. I hope that explains that scene a little better. And in a way, they both are having sex for the first time in their new bodies, so it is a new experience.
As for the rest, thank you for your kind words. I'll work hard on Part II (though I think I need a break as my emotions were everywhere when I wrote this part) and hope that you enjoy it as much as you did Part I.
Happy Holidays to you as well!
Kaoruhana ^_^ Feedback from Mutnodjmet: I am glad that your Aunt is alive and well, I miss my sister alot but it's not as painful as it was back in 1988, I know that it has been a long time but we have pictures and a video of her singing in a choir. She had a beautiful voice and she was beautiful herself. Your story had touched my heart. Thank you again.
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Moonlight Silk
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Created On: 12/07/2014 20:46:41
Thanks for reviewing. I named the story Deep end of the Ocean because in it there would be a lot of angst and unhappiness at first. It is still Sess/Kag but like my other stories they as a couple will have a bit to overcome before any possibility of happiness comes about. Stick around I am sure you will be pleasnantly surprised. Feedback from Mutnodjmet: Thank you for giving me hope 
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Sesshomaru's Secret Admirer
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Created On: 10/20/2014 08:52:27
More than anything...it pleases me most to read reviews that comment on the emotion they connected with the characters. I'm glad you were able to see the raw emotions that Sesshomaru portrayed this chapter in the "Hime Tradition."
I love the suggestion you left about Kagome awakening and healing the broken Sesshomaru. You know her very well...we shall see how this plays out though.
Thank you for your kind review! Your support helps me continue to write.
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Sesshomaru's Secret Admirer
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Created On: 09/29/2014 22:03:25
Thank you for your review on "The Hime Tradition"!
You have a point when you said that 'trust' was needed between them. But, I didn't think their relationship would run smooth from the beginning anyways. They just recently found out their love for each other...so I visioned their relationship to be a little shaky for now. ^0^ heartaches and headaches are just the beginning of a very long lasting relationship! Thank you once again for everything!
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SuWan
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Created On: 09/25/2014 10:05:38
Hi!!
Thank you for kindly reviewing my story thus far!
I'm glad my English seems good!! Hahahah, even if it doesn't seem that way it really isn't my first language... 
I would love to answer your questions but I can't yet if I continue the story. I offered just a middle piece of the intro of the story to make it a purely 'this is a part, are you interested?' type ordeal. I promise to have all explained in due time~! :3
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Moonlight Silk
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Created On: 09/23/2014 09:43:40
Thank you so much for reviewing and for the kind praise of my work. I am glad that my story could hold your interest, and I will try hard not to disappoint with the plot twists. 
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Sesshomaru's Secret Admirer
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Created On: 09/15/2014 11:11:00
*chuckles*
Sorry it took quite a while for the two to finally confess~ and of course my next story will be a sess/kag pairing! Hahahaha no other couple will be written by me.
And I think I surprised everyone with the inari/inuyasha pairing...but I have laid down some hints *smirk* feel free to go back and find them! Thanks again for your review on the "Hime Tradition"
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Sesshomaru's Secret Admirer
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Created On: 08/08/2014 22:15:23
Ah~ thank you for always complimenting the writing on "The Hime tradition". I'm so glad that this story is able to portray the three main characters emotions and feelings well. I really feel that it is important to do so. Your review is really helpful!
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Sesshomaru's Secret Admirer
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Created On: 08/01/2014 23:23:53
Interesting. It would be really helpful to know if I need to change the summary of "The Hime Tradition". I am assuming that its the summary of the story that has made you pass by the story without wishing to read it. Anyways, I am SO GLAD you have clicked to chapter 1 and read alllll the way to chapter 19! Your review warmed my heart! Your comment on my writing skill just melted the rest of my heart. And then you went as far as suggesting that you might read other stories that I have finished....*breathe in* *heart attack moment*
Thank you for being such a supportive reader! Your review has made my day FOR SURE!
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Lucy Morningstar
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Created On: 07/18/2014 00:39:07
Hey there! Thanks for your review on The Oracle! I've made the necessary changes to the story already. Thanks for informing the paragraphing was non-existent. ^^ Btw I'm putting in a new chapter, so check it out!
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