Chie
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Created On: 01/15/2017 14:48:32
Thank you for your sweet review and kind compliments on Life After Loss!
No need to apologise, I do not expect everyone to review every single chapter, when I'm abysmal at replying to reviews myself! 
I'm glad you enjoy the development of the story -- the romance will come, slowly, when the time is right for it.  I hope you will keep enjoying this story! ^^
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FoxyKittyKatara
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Created On: 01/08/2017 22:07:21
Thank you so much for you review of Blindly Loved. My response has been sent to you via Private Message. I really do appreciate your response and plan to have chapter 2 up by tonight. Hopefully. If not before I go to work tomorrow.
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vhfluffy
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Created On: 12/31/2016 11:43:46
Thank you so much for your review of Best Friends...but Wait! I am glad you are enjoying it! I try to portray Kagome as a strong willed character, although not as much in this story. I also wanted to explore Sesshomaru's more vulnerable/ imperfect side, since I don't think he can always be perfect, but that's just my opinion. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well! Chapter 3 will be up soon!
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Crimson Rose
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Created On: 12/01/2016 02:29:52
Girrrrrl you're the bomb for reviewing on both of my stories! I'm dropping a third one sometime this week. With a kinda yakuza feel to it.  Don't be Surprised was a story I've been meaning to fix for a long time. Hated how I wrote it then but I was hoping it would show the differences in the writer I was then to the one I am now. Still freaking out about the no beta thing  but hopefully I get over that. I'll definitely dedicate a chapter to you for being so encouraging!
- CR Feedback from Mutnodjmet: Thank you. You grew as a writer from then to now and it shows. I think you are still growing and then you will be top-notch but I already think you are top-notch. I am definitely a fan now and can't wait for your new story. What will the title be or have you not named it yet? That is sweet of you to dedicate a chapter to me, I feel honored
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Crimson Rose
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Created On: 12/01/2016 00:04:51
Hi thanks for your review on His Disobedience! It's hard to catch every mistake cause I read through it but I write out my stories on my iPad and while auto correct helps a ton, it changes some words to weird things that I might not catch lol. But thanks Sessh is great! A little OOC but I think it would fit my story a bit better. Anyways you're my first reviewer on this story, so thank you for taking the time out to read my story Feedback from Mutnodjmet: I know I am going to love this story. I don't think you need a beta because your writing is just that good. Any grammar errors were moot, I should never had even brought them up. Keep up the excellent work.
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The Bard
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Created On: 11/30/2016 14:15:56
Thank you for your reviews. It means a lot to me to hear from readers and thoughts of my stories. I love the pairing of Sesshomaru and Kagome as well and I love romance but sometimes when I write I just get very demented and dark and it comes out that way. I like to push people and see where I can go. I'm glad you have read or started to read other stories of mine. I will be taking down a couple that I feel that aren't good or will not be continued. But I do have some good news that the story With You shall be continued and actually in the works right now. So expect an update from that. I hope you have enjoyed the other stories and most of them didn't have a beta so there mistakes and I apologize for that. But I do hope to hear more from you about Until We Feel Alright. Seems like how I shall end the story is going to be predictable and people are already reading my mind. lol so I am trying to come up with something that will be new and shocking.
Thank you again! Feedback from Mutnodjmet: I will definitely continue to read and review this story. Does Kagome have miko powers in this story that she don't know that she has or how to access them? Plus I will be looking forward to the updates on 'With You' Thanks for letting me know in advance. You are such an excellent writer. You really know how to push that envelope. lol
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Vixeria Snow
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Created On: 09/21/2016 21:02:07
Thank you for leaving a review on my story Revolving Around Water!
I do have other stories currently posted to my FF.net account, but I have only completed, perhaps, two? I haven't written anything in a long while, and a lot of times it's spurts of inspiration. X3 I am trying to write more often these days, which is why I decided to check out Dokuga! I'm very happy to know that you have taken an interest in my stories, so feel free to check them out! I may be posting them over to this site after I go back and correct all of my mistakes from other stories. X3
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Seraphim
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Created On: 09/02/2016 03:24:21
Thank you for reviewing my story Mutnodjmet.
It means a lot to me as a newcomer to the forum. I don't want to give away too much plot and spoil the upcoming chapters, but I don't intend for this story to become too dark. Perhaps in the future I will write a darker fiction, but this is not the one. There will be some mature themes explored, as to me, the characters themselves have aged and thus their lives will have greater challenges. I always felt that Kagome returning to the feudal era would not mean happily ever after. Demons and wars still create chaos and the future is never set in stone.
Sorry if the story feels too ambiguous, but I am fond of intrigue myself, so it comes out in my writing. I suppose I relish knowing what the reader does not. As for Miroku and Sango, they feel the mission is important enough that it concerns the fate of their children. Any parent would feel compelled to fight for their child's future in my opinion.
As for Sesshoumaru...he will be making his appearance soon!
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Miss Killington
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Created On: 08/25/2016 09:18:19
Thank you so much for your constructive review on AMWB! It helps knowing what I need to work on.
May I ask for an example of a spelling and grammatical error? For the third chapter I proofread it twice, but it's easy to miss your own mistakes. Not sure if this applies, but I'm also Canadian, so I do have more of a UK way of spelling things.
Events should pick up in a few more chapters. Hope you keep reading! Feedback from Mutnodjmet: I do understand about how Canadians and British spell certain common words differently from Americans because occasionally I slip back into that mode sometimes since I originally lived in the Bahamas so no worries there.
Anyway, the errors I found were in chapter one; the first one was in para. three you had subjugate family and I think you meant to say surrogate family. The other one was I think para. ten where Kagome was talking to the other shrine maiden "I not" when it should have been "I'm not". These are just small errors and they did not detract from the story at all. You write beautifully. I am going to enjoy reading more of this story.
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bloodraven13
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Created On: 08/08/2016 18:24:42
Thank you for your review of Little Red Riding Hood. I know its dark now, but it will get brighter. Feedback from Mutnodjmet: Hi, it's good to know that the story will be getting brighter. I feel so bad for Kagome but she still has a little fight left in her. I really like the story because it's different and intriguing even if it is dark now. Your writing skills are excellent.
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