Chie
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Created On: 09/07/2018 07:04:21
Yes, unfortunately, I wrote The Demon Lord's Bride as a one shot for the reader prompt I received. I'm very, very sorry to disappoint you - I genuinely felt bad when I got your reviews.
That said, I'm sorry but I will not be continuing this story. :/
Quite honestly I don't have enough interest in this world and setting to want to extend The Demon Lord's Bride into a chapter story. I think it's because my past two long chapter fics have centred around an arranged marriage or a marriage of convenience, which means I've been writing a story with a similar scenario for the past 9 years. Much as I love both tropes I just want to do something different for a change.
I don't know how much of a consolation this will be, but I do have two new chapter fics that I'm working on. One that's already being updated (a historical AU fic titled Sengoku Love Story), and one I've been working on since LAL ended (a modern AU fic).
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Peach
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Created On: 07/19/2018 01:28:49
Awww thank you, I am glad you like my style. Lol unfortunately I don't write professionally, I wish I did though. Lol you had put in your review that you like mythology, I am currently working on the next chapter to my new story that I posted. I will be incorporating mythology creatures in that story from 16 different cultures so if mythology is something you enjoy than that story will be right up your ally. Lol I look forward to more of your reviews,Mutnodjmet!! And I hope you enjoy the future chapters to come.
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Peach
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Created On: 07/13/2018 23:25:48
You know Mutnodjmet, I always love reading your reviews. They are always so positive and make me smile. I know it's been awhile since I updated and I'm happy to see that you stuck with my story. Unfortunately my job doesn't allow me to write as much as I would like to, hence why it takes me awhile to update. But just know that I don't plan on dropping the story.
Now for a comment on your review for 'A Tale of Souls and Swords'.
The reason the gods made the decision to take the soul of the winning champion is because they want to keep balance and order. Kikyo is a good example of this, she originally was the champion of light but due to Akuma's interference, she died before she could take her journey. Her pride and anger over this turned her dark, which Akuma took advantage of. So this is something that gods don't want to happen after the war, with someone being too over powered, that champion could cause devastating damage if they were ever to turn dark.
But you are right, Kagome is different and this time around things are not going to go like the other wars. Kagome will be taken down a path that not only she will be unprepared for but also completely unexpected to even the gods. Feedback from Mutnodjmet: Thank you Peach for your response to my review. You gave me some hope that Kagome may get something very special for her victory instead of a death knell.
I just love this story. You are an extraordinary writer. Do you write professionally? If you don't, you should. I love your style.
Cheers!!!
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Siera Serenity Star
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Created On: 06/23/2018 10:55:17
Thank you so very much for your review for 'Angels Among Us'! i'm so glad you like it. In regards to your Question, yes, Miss. Tensho is Inuyasha's biological mother and Sesshoumaru's step-mother.
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xxMyNameIsASecretxx
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Created On: 06/10/2018 10:40:22
Review for Kekkon Shiyou (Let's get married)
Honestly, you caught me red handed hahaha XD I was watching Cinderella the time I was inspired to write this.
And you are right English isn't my first language. I did however rushed this story so it really player a big part with my grammatical errors. I am so sorry. I'll do better next time and use beta read (TT - TT)
Please do watch over me in the future. I will need your guidance. ^^ As for Kagome being weak I am super sorry hahah I think my current situation reflected on what I was writing. I'll try to avoid that in the future XD
Omg! This does not discourage me! This is actually a great motivation! You don't know how much this review means to me! Any review whether it's good or bad will guide me with my upcoming stories. So again, thank you so much!
I agree about the last chapter. ( -u-)>" I think it was an overkill. I was so focused on Sesshomaru and Kagome that I forgotten the rest so I tried to fit it all in one chapter. Sorry about that.
I promise not to make Kagome pathetic in my uocoming stories, I promise to not make the same mistakes I did in chapter 10 and I promise to use beta read. Will totally remember these in the future
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Chie
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Created On: 05/29/2018 06:10:45
Thank you for reviewing Life After Loss one last time.
I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed the ending! I figured it would be a fitting one for this story.
I've started working on my next story, so there will definitely be something new to read.
Hope you have a lovely week! Feedback from Mutnodjmet: Thank you for your response.
I was expecting an email from someone who said they sent it like two days ago so I checked my junk mail, all 500 of them, and low and behold there it was along with your email and a couple of other Dokuga mail. Anything having to do with Dokuga should never have gone to spam or junk folder. Now I wonder how many other important email I deleted without reading...ooohhh, now I'm irritated.
Oh well, water under the bridge
I'll be sure to be on the lookout for any fantastic new stories from you.
Thanks again...cheers!!!
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Chie
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Created On: 05/10/2018 10:50:40
Thank you so much for your lovely review on Life After Loss!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter and the story in general! And thank you for your kind compliments - personally, especially given Kagome's situation, I felt that a slowly developed romance would be most realistic.
Thank you for your support and hope you have a lovely weekend!
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CookieAsylum
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Created On: 03/30/2018 14:33:59
Thank you so much for the reviews on Fennel! I really appreciate it!
Writing battle scenes is pretty tough, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Haha to answer your question about Sesshoumaru's gold eyes, I figured that since this fanfic is a little more historical-fantasy leaning, that I'd keep Sesshoumaru's gold eyes. Also he's too pretty not to have them lol.
Thank you for the reviews! And I hope you continue to read and enjoy it!
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yukihime
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Created On: 03/25/2018 12:12:49
Thanks for your wonderful and encouraging review! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. I have some ideas of what I want for the next one but there is a good chuck that I have no clue what I'm going to do yet. I will definitely keep your suggestions in mind.
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yukihime
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Created On: 02/24/2018 18:51:22
Thanks for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm currently working on the second part. It's not quite finished as I wasn't happy with some of the original scenes.
Very nicely written but the story felt kind of disjointed, like it was missing some important facts, but I guess that was the way you wanted it to be.
There are some details that are missing and my writing has improved to the point that this needs to be reworked. It's one of the ones that I hope to have revised soon since it is shorter than most. Feedback from Mutnodjmet: Thank you for your response to my review.
You write very well and I agree that it has improved which is a good thing. I think all artists get better over time. I admire you and all the other writers and artists that actually post their stories and artwork for the world to see. I don't have that kind of gumption to do that. I am not talented like that way.
But I do enjoy reading your works of art, whether it is writing or drawing
Keep up the excellent work.
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