Cool! And it's in Spanish!

Some suggestions: You could use "frunce los ojos" instead of "reduce ojos". That's because reduce in here means reduction and you don't reduce your eyes. It's tricky because even if the word-by-word translation is correct, context changes things.

Also, in "No hay razón de que preocuparse de todos modos", "de todos moods" should go first because in Spanish, the exception is emphasized (though, however, etc.).

Great job and wonderful art. Thanks for sharing!