My Best Friends Son by Arashi-san

What are you?

So first go tell me what ya'll think please?  

“What are you?” 

That was the first real thing he said to me. Asked me. 

  I never answered him, I never could. Because I myself didn’t know anymore. 

And now I lay here in front of what could be him, if he was a woman. 

  Tall and aristocratic she stood regal looking down on my fetal position; tears of pain in my eyes as from the wound in my torso and whole in my chest. By all means I should be dead. 

 “What are you?” The womans tone held curiosity and fear. She had probably never met or seen a human woman who could sustain such injury. I didn’t blame her for it.

I wasn’t exactly sure how, but I answered her.  “Time… time…. I need time…”

She looked perplexed but her cold face softened quickly. She knelt down next to me and took my hand.  “If it is time you need, it is time you will have.”

 She closed her eyes, as if praying then picked me up, without care to her silken attire. I blacked out to the world as her youki gathered around us in an orb as she took us to her domain in the sky.

  A/N:  So what did you think? Was it okay? Criticism is welcome, to a friendly extent.