White Luna (Chapter 5) - Sat 08 Oct 2011

Very good, still needs some grammatical cleaning up and some clarification, but you have a strong plot :D.


helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 4) - Fri 07 Oct 2011

interesting...so does Kagome have an extended lifespan or something? also is Sesshomaru already born/grown or has he yet to be made? since Sesshomaru's dad doesn't appear to be all up in her business I'm very curious.

 

oh man...is Kagome gonna kinda be a cougar?

 

also in ch4 you accidently posted the chapter twice...it loops kinda in ch4.

 

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!


Hibikari (Chapter 4) - Fri 07 Oct 2011

I really like how this is going! Please don't feel rushed and go at your own pace I think you'll do a great job :)


White Luna (Chapter 3) - Thu 15 Sep 2011

I think you're doing well so far!


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