That was very touching. A gracious gift. I'm sure Kagome will make good use of it. 

Oh they are evil! Poor Fa indeed. Very sad chapter for the pack. Time to kick butt!

Thats fantastic! I love how you did this. (:

Well! That was exciting! Hope Fa survives, but Yasha has had worse and he's still around. Plus, Kags is going to heal him. Get your swords ready, trouble is coming!

I like the gift. I assume she will also be able to have full blooded pups. 

Wow... those kids are messed up. I love how you've writtent hem though, so dark and screwy in the head, perfect for Naraku's kids! I can't wait to read more. As for the gift, maybe a longer life span, or one of Fa's Youkai powers?

this story is really getting good

i think his 'gift' is his youkai

I liked fa to bad. He probably made her a demon

Please let the good guys have some sort of advantage. I don't know if the dad will be enough if he's breeding an army of disgusting babies. 

So much action so many questions answered. Great chap thank you

Awww man, judging by your comment Fa will die.  I was hoping he would survive, at least Jaken was witness to the act and knows who is responsible. 

This just gets more intersting by the chapter, looking forward to more!

Happy valentines

Good, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day! 

Wow! Lots of revelations and action in this chapter! Wonderful update! Thanks so much.

I thought he'd become a large fox like Sess' true form but smaller and well... a fox. Can't wait for more, and I love Xue's backstory!!!!!

Very nice chapter and some revelations. Looking forward to more!

Poor Shippo got the stuffing knocked out of him by inu papa. I'm not sure his reception is what he dreamt it would be. He has some explaining to do, leaving no explaination and throwing both sons into the deep end to learn life lessons.

You are evil! Thats some cliffhanger you left us on. LOve the story, great chapter.

Oh Shippo. You ned to calm down Love. You're growing up too fast for your own good.