Wait I was soo into it! Its so good and EMOTIONAL! I literally got upset that i was interupted when reading it:(
Gosh, this is the type of AU I've been searching for. Most of the stuff I found are either abandoned, on hiatus, or not very well-written. And also: Grovelling Sesshoumaru!
Like Alon said, it's right up my alley! Knowing that 10+ chapters are posted at FF.net and waiting for me, I went there immediately to read.
I love how you wrote Kagome. I thoroughly enjoy and re-read her POVs - my favourite parts of the story, to be honest. As for Sesshoumaru's reflections, I can definitely feel the remorse, though I can't exactly sympathize with him. I can't seem to figure out why he thinks he's not cheating on Kagome when in fact he already did it emotionally, and also when he went on a date with Kagura in the coffee shop.
I also love the role reversal. Kagome, though she's hurting, was very pragmatic about the whole thing while Sesshoumaru is now the emotional and sentimental one.
Will there be any Kagura POVs? It'd be really interesting to read about their relationship in her point of view. I also wonder if she's aware that Sesshoumaru has a gf before she entered the picture, and if so, it's Kagome? I sense something shady about her, like every little thing she does is calculated.
You are a wonderful, talented writer. Your characterization is on point, and the way you weave your story is amazing. Keep it up! Looking forward to the next! :)
Mona (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Oct 2015
Great but what a shame, Sesshoumaru unconsciously and consciously cheated on Kagome. He now believes she is not his soulmate but maybe Kagura is, hmm, I think Kagome needs to go on an outing with a handsome male.
barb (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Oct 2015
Darn i wish i could delete my reviews.
Shouldnt have said sane person
I was in a situation somewhat similar to that once. Stuff like this is very complicated.
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