I too always thought it was a shame that the manga showed her to be potentially the strongest one yet never had anyone train her to use her power. If someone like Sesshoumaru could train her I'm sure she could surpass all of her old group. In his own way he is taking care of her. He's giving her the clothes, beautiful clothes, to fit in. He is training her to take care of herself, which is something none of the others had done. He's helping her to fit in and survive the feudal era.
i look forward to the next update.
Awesome Chapter!! It's good to see that Sesshoumaru is going to put his differences aside to train Kagome rather than just come to her rescue- I think it really befits his character. And I like how you are making Kagome narrate all the disney stories to Rin, I wonder which one of them will be similar to Kagome and Sesshoumaru's story. :P
Yes a strong kagome is best. I love Rin even the kappa is right on point great story.
Koi (Chapter 7) - Mon 14 Sep 2015
You know I have always wanted Kagome to have some hand to hand combat and a secondary weapon skills. I hate that of the 3 or 4 years of Kagome following a SKILLED demon slayer, that she never was taught to fight. Out of all those episodes the newest skill that Kagome learned ...was......the....teleporting of ........ an arrow. I was so disappointed. I am so happy that you thought it would be a great idea for her to know these types of skills. Awesome you!!! lol I can't wait until the next chapter!
Debra (Chapter 6) - Sun 13 Sep 2015
Really good story. I loved how Kagome is spending time Rin, she needs a woman around her. Also I think Kagome does need space from Inuyasha. He let her down so horribly, without a single thought about her. She died horribly and alone, that has got to have left a lot of issues. I'm sure whatever trust she had in him died, and I seriously doubt it can be resurrected as easily as she was by Sesshoumaru's sword.
I am surprised though that Naraku hasn't shown up to gloat about killing Kagome, and really rub it in Inuyasha's face that he not only failed to protect her because of Kikyo showing up, but left her choking on her own blood. It sounds like something he would be forcing them to watch on Kanna's mirror as he sickenly laughed at them.
Great story!
Just started reading this story. It's very interesting. I like that everyone is so IC. Love how you have Inuyasha chasing his tail looking for Kagome. :P
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Well now he's worried.
Saiya (Chapter 6) - Fri 11 Sep 2015
Poor kags hes so hard to please. and if they looked at her shirt that was a fatal wound and she should be Dead mmmmnnnn i wonder who has a sword that can bring people to life. mwhahahahahaha
Mona (Chapter 6) - Fri 11 Sep 2015
More please.
p.s. I think you might want to revise your last statement in this chapter, I believe your forgot a word.
Okay my interest has been kept. I've decided I do like how this story is going. It has a very nice flow to it and I love how it's not feeling rushed. It's anticipation wondering when Inuyasha is going to figure everything out. I'll be looking forward to reading more.
Koi (Chapter 6) - Fri 11 Sep 2015
My Sesshy is getting a warm, fizzy feeling with Kagome! I can't wait until the next chapter, I wonder where Sesshy walked off to. With that in mind I really can't wait for the next chapter, this is an amazing story! I can't wait until inuyasha and them meet up to find Kagome...with Sesshomaru. I wonder how that'll turn out. Will you make her choose between inuyasha and Sesshomaru?
Please update soon. This story is good so far and very interesting. Thanks
Well it's good to see Kagome getting bold. LOL I can't believe that she straight out asked Sesshoumaru about whether or not demons fall in love. I really like the slow but steady progression between them. I mean they just had their first conversation without Kagome screaming at him or Sesshomaru threatening her. :D looking forward to chapter 6. :)
Saiya (Chapter 5) - Wed 09 Sep 2015
I like how Kagome Thinks.
joyouki (Chapter 5) - Tue 08 Sep 2015
I think you're doing a fantastic job! Really enjoying this story. Can't wait for updates
Koi (Chapter 5) - Tue 08 Sep 2015
How exciting! I felt her nervousness for her... This was greatly written! I can't wait until the next chapter, it would be funny as hell if she got swallowed whole. I love sesshomaru lack of eagerness about the shards! It's sooo like him! I love the part of him stating that she is like inuyasha because of the lack of tack and the lack of patience to evaluate the situation and the enemy, what's the rush. That was funny as hell Especially, since I have always asked myself the same question everytime! Fantastic chapter! I can't wait for chapter 6!!
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