Good fic! Hopefully you will update! It has nice touches of stubbornness and affection just what's needed! Eager to read more!
The last two chapter were REALLY REALLY good! I love how comfortable Sesshy is getting around Kag, but is still himself. Nice job on the detailing of the last chapter! I can't believe Sesshy shielded her with his beautiful body! So much for not protecting her anymore! I have that Kagome's arrow just nipped Kagura...SHOWS HER! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow, I think I'm as addicted as the inu boys are dense lol. Hope gou update soon!
Pamela (Chapter 11) - Thu 05 Nov 2015
Awesome chapter! He protected her from Kagura, swoon. And he actually let her touch him, wheeee!
This is good, please update as soon as possible ;3
I'm loving your story :)
Saiya (Chapter 11) - Thu 05 Nov 2015
The Wait Is Worth It!!! Glad your new meds ain't takin you to the land of fog. This chapter was Most Excellent that Naraku is a sick basterd.
Debra (Chapter 11) - Wed 04 Nov 2015
Great chapter. I love how Sesshoumaru doesn't understand these other feelings he can't name yet. Not to mention his confusion as to why he saves her or the fact that he knew he was going to let her have her way and bandage him up. It's really cute, and I love how Kagome is starting to notice him as well. The whole jealous Kagura thing was really good as well. I look forward to your next one and hope you feel better soon.
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to next chap. Feel better soon.
Mona (Chapter 11) - Wed 04 Nov 2015
Thanks for the update, I can't wait to read more. Also feel better.
Great story, keep it coming.
Pamela (Chapter 10) - Fri 09 Oct 2015
I love all the thought out emotions you put into this chapter a lot of soul searching and I love that they will be going on an adventure just the two of them. Maybe they will get to know each other better:) aww! Rin is so sweet talking to Inuyasha.
hey hope you get well soon! don't worry about the updates and take care of yourself- your health comes first! And although I will admit that nothing particularly exciting happened in this chapter, it was still needed nonetheless to lay out the future track of the story like you said. thank you for taking the time to update while you are in such a condition.
Saiya (Chapter 10) - Thu 08 Oct 2015
Oh God i hope your ok. The chapter was Sweet. Hope you Get Better and thank you for the update but don't push yourself to write if your in pain. We can wait for more chapters when your better and not in pain.
tonya (Chapter 10) - Thu 08 Oct 2015
well i can't wait for the next chapter! this is awesome story.
Debra (Chapter 10) - Thu 08 Oct 2015
Totally understand about the family and the hospital. I still thought the chapter was very good. I also like how you have Naraku focusing on Kagome not Kikyo. Kilogo was a good miko in her life, but she was rased and trained for practically all of it to be such a good miko. Kagome doesn't even try and she can use her purifying powers. If someone was to have trained her I believe she would have surpassed Kikyo easily. Kagome was also the only one who has come close to nearly killing him. I would think it is obvious that his real worry is on killing Kagome.
Eva (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Sep 2015
I just found this story so this will be my first review. I find it plausible that Kagome was killed as Inuyasha ran off to find Kikiyo. I also appreciate Sesshoumaru's slow tolerance of her presence and insistence that she learn to protect herself. I look forward to see how the story unfolds.
This is quite different to what I had in mind, but main elements was all there. I LOVE Kagome's and Sesshomaru's reactions!! I totally love how Kagome broke the news of her death to Inuyasha, I feel like that was done perfectly! And you used the correct timing to make Sesshomaru interject in the showdown. I am glad that you made him think the way he did, because he hasn't developped any feelings for Kagome yet for him to worry about whether she will continue to travel with him or go to Inuyasha...he was just internally amused at being able to see the shocking and despairing looks on Inuyasha's face. I am sad that Shippo didn't join Sesshomaru's group yet, but I accept the reasoning that you gave. :) I know this chapter was hard for you to post because this was the chapter that could honestly potentially make or break the story, so you can relieve a sigh of relief because this was awesome. :D
Saiya (Chapter 9) - Wed 23 Sep 2015
wow that was intense.
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