An air of mystery in the closing of the chapter. I wonder who could be watching Kagome so intently? Someone Sesshomaru has sent? Is it Sessh himself? Whomever it is acquired a nasty scare on his hand. Curious to read what happens next.

Can't wait for more!

Drapetomania has returned -  New amd improved!  I've noticed the change in this prologue. In this tale Sesshomaru actually copulates with his mate to be! That's definitely different from the former version. The use of black magic in this is a unique twist also it appears there may be a curse to follow Kagome for breaking her blood vow. I'm curious to see how this carries over into the next world or era. I was a fan of the previous version of this tale,  yet understand you've started over. New version, here I come!

Please don't turn Kagome into a hypocrite. I know in the old one that Sess sleeps around and her taking comfort in Jun-long's arms but for me, shouldn't she instead keep herself chaste? At least with that she still possesses dignity and can look on without guilt. In that way, Sess is the only one at fault. I absolutely hate her sleeping around with other OC characters or even canon guys for that matter just because she feels slighted as a woman.

I'm in love with the newer version already! It has more of an. . . Umph to it!

This is good????