So, I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter!! I love this story. Please update soon :)
I need you to update soon
Koree (Chapter 34) - Sun 02 Oct 2016
Took me awhile but i finally caught back up lol great chaps :)
More, keep it coming.
Liking the chapters, keep it coming. Happy Belated Easter!
Anonymous (Chapter 31) - Mon 04 Apr 2016
Good update.
So glad you updated. I've been waiting. Hopefully you post anothper chapter soon, I'm curious about this New Years thing.
Are you using the word womb to be synonymous with vagina? or do your demons have a weird anatomy quirk that lets their partners bypass their cervix and enter the uterus(womb)? I'm honestly confused.
Mona (Chapter 33) - Fri 27 Nov 2015
Great update.
Both chapters are good, keep it coming.
when you said, "all but one actually belonged to him" about Inuyasha and the suitcases, that means all of the suitcases were his except for one. Just thought I"d point that out.
Excellent job with this fic. i'm sad to see it ending. keep up the good work!
Debra (Chapter 30) - Mon 09 Nov 2015
I love the banter between Kagome and Inuyasha, and adding Kikyo to it was funny as well. It had to be horrifying for Sesshoumaru to listen to a kid give him advise on mating. Though I think InuYasha should remember that the more women he sleeps with the more the scar opens and hurts because of his broken vow. Kagome is supposed to be the only one he is with. He must know about the vows they took, right? Anyway good chapter.
Both chapters are nice, keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Ma-chan (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 Oct 2015
Honestly, I liked your story but it's irritating how Kagome seems to be blamed for what's happened. Yes, I know Sesshoumaru admitted he had faults as well, but it's almost as if Kagome's part in it is more to blame.
And the fact that Sesshoumaru believes that threatening to rape Kagome is acceptable is absolutely disgusting. Hopefully, you'll change his view or something cause rape, whether attempted or not, whether intended or not, is still wrong.
Sesshoumaru's character is just so annoying and so infuriating, if Kagome does somehow end up with him, I would be so disappointed with this fic. Of course, that's my opinion and I'm sure other people like this fic.
I love your story so far, but I hate Sesshomaru so far. So he almost raped her, to show her he could if he wanted to. He is a sick person if he thinks that proves him to be a good guy. It bugs me that he has the whole alpha control thing. I wish kagome could get her magic on and put him in his place for a change.
More, keep it coming.
Mona (Chapter 26) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
Lol is it Jaken, I bet she is going to wish she never freed him, if she is able to, because of his squeaking.
Great chapter, keep it coming.
Debra (Chapter 25) - Wed 14 Oct 2015
Good chapter. I look forward to seeing how Naraku is going to teach her.
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