Like your storyline so far. Have to say that I'm mad at Sesshomaru for breakin his word to Kagome ,though there would be no plot if he hadn't. LOL! I really love to dislike Kagura. Never thought she was good enough for our Sesshy. Makes me jealous for Kagome. Never was that way with InuYasha and Kagome. I've always been a Sessh/Kag fan so that's kinda odd I guess. LoL So are we gonna get a flash back with Sesshomarus intended mate? Arrgh! Just the thought of it makes my youkie flare!! Heh heh!! Looking forward to your next post! ;^)
DSS (Chapter 16) - Sat 05 Sep 2015
Nooooo! Why couldn't the chapter be longer man he better answer all her questions!
iin (Chapter 15) - Sat 05 Sep 2015
oh so tragic..speechless!! but thank for update
rose (Chapter 15) - Fri 04 Sep 2015
next chapter please
Mona (Chapter 15) - Fri 04 Sep 2015
Poor Rin... I was hoping when Kagome lost consciousness that she finally discovered how to revive the dead, not all but Rin, since Sesshoumaru heart was still beating.
No Uta (Chapter 15) - Fri 04 Sep 2015
Ugh I forgot to sign in grrrr.
Anonymous (Chapter 15) - Fri 04 Sep 2015
I'm a huge fan of dark fics. The darker the better. The nature of this chapter pleased me greatly. I enjoyed all of the gory details. You've also thrown Onigumo into the mix. That is awesome and completely unexpected. I'm enjoying Kagome's memories as they return. Onigumo is one of my favourite characters. I am very much enjoying the back story to this tale and how you are weaving them as they unravel within Kagome's mind. I'm also enjoying Shin’ichi in this. Though he may be regarded in the past, it still warms my heart to see him in the plot. I also caught on how you had Sesshomaru remind Kagome just who the alpha is. ;-)
DSS (Chapter 14) - Thu 03 Sep 2015
Kagome needs her memory back I want them together again even though it might get messy since promsises were broken.
Kyo (Chapter 14) - Thu 03 Sep 2015
Oh. Kagura's in the mix? So this is another hand for complications or will Kagura just be a mere nuisance of herself? Also, I hope Jun-long is not lovey-dovey with Kagome here or I would really throw a fit another time around.
No Uta (Chapter 14) - Thu 03 Sep 2015
Loved the last two chapters. Once again, Sesshomaru's outwardly detached demeanor and more serious nature is outstanding! It is so fitting, especially after all he's endured. Granted he appears to be at fault for why Kagome fled in the first place yet it has been 500 yrs of protecting the woman he loves, from the shadows. It has worn him down. I think it's awesome that you've added Kikyo in the mix as well as her offspring with Inuyasha. Teuro is such a chicken shit owl lol. Had me a giggle at that. You've made Sesshomaru worthy of being obeyed. I am highly fond of the fact that even though Inuyasha is still boarish in nature; he submits to his alpha. They all do. Phenomenal work!
In an eccentric way that chapter was kinda funny. Can't wait to see what happens next!
iin (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015
oh a funny & cute chapter!
No Uta (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015
A hilarious chapter and my favourite old man is in it!!!!! Good ole blasted Shin’ichi!!!!! You've just made my morning!
Anonymous (Chapter 12) - Tue 01 Sep 2015
Finally got the whole story of the tempting divide but thanks to the grandfather and sessahmaoru she's alive!
Mona (Chapter 12) - Mon 31 Aug 2015
Perfect!!! I can't wait to read what develops next and I love the flash backs.
No Uta (Chapter 11) - Mon 31 Aug 2015
Finally all caught up. I hate when I fall behind like this. So much has happened since my last review... wow! Kagome and Sessh made a blood vow in the past. He promised never to touch the female he was being forced to mate. She in turn promised never to abandon him. He reveals to her that he broke his promise and it being the reason she left via way of Kokumajutsu. Kagome obtained a spell from a book which allowed for time travel. Sessh needs that book yet Kagome has lost her memories. He's demanding she find it. She's no clue where it is. We also find out that Sessh has been protecting Kagome this entire time. Their current encounter was not supposed to have happened yet, however it did because he had to protect her from that demon that attacked her back at the well house. Now they are both at the same gala. He refused to deal with her until she has retrieved that book. Kagome felt the pang of pain from being rejected by her alpha, though she doesn't quite realize that yet. I do enjoy how you've hardened Sesshomaru towards Kagome. His no nonsense - do as your told attitude demonstrates he is not to be reckoned with. While I enjoy Kagome sassing him and zapping his ass in your other tale; I find myself enjoying this more subdued version of her. He is her alpha. She just doesn't know it. She should succumb and bow to his demands or at least until he screws up again lolol. Sesshomaru appears to be painted in a more serious light in this story. I like that a lot. Don't get me wrong, I love your portrayal of him in your other story. I'm simply complimenting you in the notable difference in his character in this one. I love Inuyasha in this. He is hilarious!
Great story, keep it coming.
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