As someone that read the first version of this story, i think that part of sesh and kagomme discovering the kappa should br put in to understand the lore and consequences better. The story looks a lot cleaner, keep up the good work.
Good story so far.
Mona (Chapter 24) - Wed 07 Oct 2015
Great!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
No Uta (Chapter 23) - Tue 06 Oct 2015
I've finally caught up. My goodness so much has happened since my last review of chapter 15! So many memories have come flooding back. I had no idea Sesshomaru had planned on giving Kagome her freedom before she fled on her own accord using black magic. Kagome is now living with Sesshomaru and bantering with Inuyasha. That was priceless. This should definitely be interesting now that they are both under the same roof along with the rest of his pack. I've missed this story. I'm sorry I've been m.i.a. I hope to continue to keep up.
Sesshomaru just like some idiot! Cheater huh. . Kagome definitely can have someone better. .maybe a better competition for her is good?
Hi I love this fic. Will you be posting this on fanfiction.net? I only ask because its the only way I can read this, is on fanfiction on my phone. lol I have to go to the libary to read this on Dokuga. But this is great work. can't wait to read more.
Both chapters are nice, keep it coming.
Mona (Chapter 23) - Thu 01 Oct 2015
I'm curious to find out the reason why he broke his promise and slept with Miyako.
Please update again soon, I quite enjoy the fanfic. Hopefully more Kagome and Inuyasha shenanigans will ensure.
DSS (Chapter 23) - Thu 01 Oct 2015
Poor Shessy.
All four chapters are good, keep it coming.
DSS (Chapter 21) - Fri 25 Sep 2015
Hurry and give me the next chapter were so close yet so far of
this complicated situation.
Debra (Chapter 19) - Tue 22 Sep 2015
Good chapter. So Naraku has been after her for centuries, hu? Well very interesting. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Isn't it just so much fun to hate Naraku!!! Bring it on! LOL!
Anonymous (Chapter 19) - Sun 20 Sep 2015
i love how this story is coming along keep up the great work! So glad we're getting to kagome rembering things because she has to save the world from the time slit open for Monsters.
rose (Chapter 19) - Sun 20 Sep 2015
next chapter please
Debra (Chapter 18) - Tue 15 Sep 2015
Honestly I'm not sure she should 'get over it'. She should move on from it, put it in the past. You know, not let it get to her since it happened so long ago, but why get back in a relationship like that. He had already broke his bond and word of honor, and cheated on her. I only say cheated on her due to his promises. Had be not made any of those than of course what he did with his wife would not be considered cheating. Technically if Kagome had been his whore it would have been the wife he was cheating on. Either way I can't see Kagome wanting to go back to a man like that right away if at all.
That being said I still very much enjoy your story, and look forward to seeing were you take this.
DSS (Chapter 18) - Mon 14 Sep 2015
been such a long time but I can't wait for the next update! It is true though yoga stop going aroungtthe mole berry bush.
Mystic (Chapter 18) - Mon 14 Sep 2015
What happened to sesshomaru's mate and parents, and the pup?
All six chapters are nice, keep it coming.
DSS (Chapter 17) - Tue 08 Sep 2015
learned something new Akashic Records. Awww poor sessh he wants his woman back I hope he will soon.
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