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that last scene was hilarious!! i see what you did there!! bahahahaha!! love this chapter. i think it will forever be my favorite. and oh, look! sesshoumaru confessed! well. somewhat. i love this story to death. >_<
Leaora (Chapter 23) - Sat 06 May 2017
Awesome! I love the way you included a bit of every perspective in this chapter. Even if I thought that Inuyasha or Chihiro could have told the gang about the mole when they first got back or even mentioned it to Sango, I loved it.
Go Chihiro! Wonderful chapter, I cant believe Sess admitted he loves her!!!! I look forward to the next (:
I loved this chapter so much! I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome tries to astral project again, hopefully it goes better than last time. I've been looking up a lot of conspiracy theories and Mandela effects lately so I found it kind of cool when Souta brought up that conspiracy theory about the magnetic field! I love your long chapters. Can't wait for the next.
OTP progress! I love Momos backstory, and how enamored Sess is with the feeling if someone wanting to understand him... its sweet and easy to relate to (:
Great chapter! I love Momo so much, her personality is great. I still don't trust Ginjiro, I feel like he may be working with Naraku or something. I think something is up with that little wooden mouse token that Kagome has. I love these long and detailed chapters, and I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
LOL, interesting flirting techniques there you two XD
Wonderful chapter, Momo is... interesting...
Kanda (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Apr 2017
what's funny is that i have my spirited away dvd sitting right next to me. i was trying to watch it, but my laptop is being stubborn. *eyes suspiciously*
lol, poor inuyasha, but this makes great one on one time with our favorite pair. 8)
Kanda (Chapter 17) - Sun 30 Apr 2017
you say yer ashamed of yer characterization when you read imain's story. i am ashamed of MY writing because of you both! you portray sess so well. i can't compete with any of you! i can't even dialogue well. qq yer an immensely talented writer.
I know I've already left a review for this chapter, but I hope everything is okay! I also wanted to let you know if you ever have a chance, I made a fanart for this story, I tried to anyway lol. I use Dokuga on mobile so I'm still trying to learn how to use it properly, just wanted to let you know about the art(:
I feel like Chiriro and her grandma may have something to do with the Mikos in Kagome's time. Anyway, I loved this chapter and I hope 2017 gets better for you!(:
Definitely not expected but I knew Naraku had some kind of trickery up his sleeves. Hmmm i just might have to draw Kirara asleep on Sesshomaru's chest. that sounded adorable lol
The bunny rabbit armor was such a cute gift from Sesshomaru. I can't see what happens when they finally find Naraku.
Those Miko pills are like super Benadryl lol (: i loved the prank she played on Sesshomaru.
Great chapter! I'm not sure if I trust Ginjiro fully yet. He so easily obeyed Natake and now he's obeying Sesshomaru. Who's to say he won't go back to Naraku once he comes back? Idk! Lol.
Little Rabbit! That's so cute! And he helped her with her powers? That's great. Lol. Poor Inuyasha, but I don't feel that bad for him. he should have gotten his feelings in order sooner and then he may have had a chance. Too bad Sesshomaru is now interested in Kagome(;
Glad she finally got her well deserved rest. Kagome was kind of mean to Souta but I dog blame her, she just wants to make sure he's safe. I had a feeling Sesshomaru might be the one to relieve her headache! Lol
Really good chapter! I can't wait to see how Souta is going to follow her back to the feudal era. Hopefully she puts everything back in order.
I really love your story so far! I used to keep up with your story but I sadly havent been reading it, I'm re reading and catching up now! I'm right where I left off. I can't wait to see what happens next with the well having that crack down it and with what happens with Naraku coming back.
Nice update! I love the SessKag progress, and the little brotherly bonding (though those two would never admit to it being that) as well!
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