Nice! I really like Kagome's and Shin'ichi's outing to see Totosai hahaha it was funny.
Well, Taisho isn't really logical is he now? Lol He accepts Miyako because of alliances or whatever even if she can't transform, but he and Kimi don't accept Kagome, who can transform, making her one of the most powerful beings. Thank you for the swift update.
Mele (Chapter 63) - Mon 06 Jul 2015
Saiya (Chapter 63) - Mon 06 Jul 2015
I want to MURDER THAT PRISSY BITCH GGAAAAA Fluffys Fiance i Hate her.
No Uta (Chapter 63) - Mon 06 Jul 2015
All caught up! Wow Taisho is a piece of work and what of that ring? Sesshomaru failed to inform Kagome or was he not even aware of it? Sesshomaru's condition is alarming or so it seems. Was it the stress of his transformation or has he sensed Shin'ichi's life coming to an end? I'm certain you'll reveal all in time. I cannot believe this tale of yours will be coming to a close by the end of this week. I'll look forward to your updates.
No Uta (Chapter 62) - Mon 06 Jul 2015
Right-o Kimi's an arsehole lol. That gave me a much needed giggle. Sesshomaru definitely senses Kagome's keeping something from him. I can't imagine where on earth these two will be without Shin’ichi. He's the only one on their side. Teuro appears to be as well, but he doesn't have the same influence as Shin’ichi does. This will surely devastate Sesshomaru. The old man has been more of a father to him than his own sire.
No Uta (Chapter 61) - Sun 05 Jul 2015
Damn it man... I have been dreading this part. My old man Shin’ichi is dying. I deeply appreciated that you let me know ahead of time. It is a little easier to accept. I can't help it! I've become emotional invested in him. He is my favourite character in this fic. Damn I am going to blubber lIke a baby. Now...on to that bull that Kimi & Taisho have planned surrounding Kagome's transformation WTH? Is Sesshomaru aware of this? Good grief his parents are pricks. I'm certain my questions will be answered in the following chapters. On to the next one I go.
Saiya (Chapter 62) - Sun 05 Jul 2015
Kill his Fiance Miyako that bitch.
Mona (Chapter 62) - Sat 04 Jul 2015
Im a bit disappointed honestly, I hoped that one of them would atleast had the courage to reveal the truth. I guess I can wait for the next chapter to see if Kagome allowed the tarp to hide her identity or just ripped it and appeared in her birthday suit. Well I will be waiting for the update.
Susi8 (Chapter 61) - Sat 04 Jul 2015
I really love your story!! I can't wait to read what happens next. I know it's getting close to the end for this portion of their story and I really hope that Kagome defies Inutashio's, Kimi's, and the council's wishes and reveals herself as well, basically herself when she does transform. I really like Shin'ichi's character and Asil's as well, they are well written. I'm really looking forward to what happens next and P.S. don't let some people's close mindedness get to you. If you want to write a story where Kagome is an Inu Demoness, a different kind of demon, or what not then do so! It's your story, your plot, and your rules! (^_^)
Mona (Chapter 61) - Sat 04 Jul 2015
Wow this is getting messy, in a good way. I wonder what Kagome will do with this new information, she can't let them do that to her it is dishonorable and belittling to her person and Beast. I hope she or Shin'ichi does something to leak that it was indeed her, not Miyako.
Marie (Chapter 61) - Sat 04 Jul 2015
That's so sad why does sinichi. Dino have to go. I love his character and I pray kagome doesn't allow some upper crest hefer take credit from her. Show em up kagome. A tribute to shin Inichi.
Ree-san (Chapter 61) - Sat 04 Jul 2015
I'm so tired of his parents. They don't seem to know him well at all and don't seem to care if he's happy or not. Just about what people think. Will either Sesshoumaru or Kagome ever stand up for themselves. I feel so impatient to find out.
No Uta (Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Jul 2015
Oh wow, Asil and Taisho worked together to cover up Naraku's death. I didn't see that coming either. There are many twists in this tale. I've enjoyed them greatly. I had a feeling Asil was behind the murder and her blackout. It was still fun to ponder that Kagome may have committed homicide in her drugged state. I don't know about how other readers feel about Asil, however I actually so enjoy his character. His ways at expressing his love for his daughter are unconventional, yet there's no denying he does love her. He'll so what he must to protect her - even if it means extinguishing her life with his own hands. He feels responsible for her torturous existence. He doesn't wish to see her suffer. That man is bat shit crazy though. I wonder what in the hell is going on with Shin’ichi? Is his memory failing him due to the immense stress his family has been in as of late or is there something else? As always, you've left me intrigued. A wonderful update. Now onto a review you received that I read which left me appalled. It is obvious some of you fail at thoroughly reading summaries or simply fail at reading comprehension as a whole. It is clearly stated that this is an Alternate Universe fic. What does that mean? It means the author will most likely take creative liberties with the characters not just the Era. It means the author can make Kagome an Ewok if they so desire it etc. What of those stories that turn Sesshomaru into some romantic pansy yet claim the story to be canon. Most authors do try to keep aspects of the original characters persona, however read the summaries people and understand that anything goes especially when it has been clearly labeled as Alternate. This is grealty insulting to this author as well as to myself who also writes A/U fics. If you want canon. Go read canon and for God's ale people, learn to read. I apologize for my rant, it bothered me to see such ignorance spewed as one of your reviews.
Saiya (Chapter 59) - Wed 01 Jul 2015
Wow so Much Evil
I really love this story looking forward to the next chapter :D
Now before i end this review i just have to say this because it is stuff like this that annoys the crap out of me about some reviewer's we are well aware that kagome is a human but FFS this is fanfiction which means anyone can write their story's however they see fit IT IS THEIR STORY that is the beauty of fanfiction to see other's creative juices at work.
Therefore if someone wants her to be a goddess,hanyou,Youkai,angel or whatever else that is their prerogative same thing goes for the eye color an i see that all the time whenever i read fanfiction and it is annoying.
If you don't like what they write or how they write it then don't read it because when people complain about oh that is not how the anime was i see it as an insult to the arthur i mean come on they put a lot of time into their work an it is really disrespectful.
So if whoever complains doesn't like that something is changed from the anime then you might as well make your own story or rewatch the anime but keep this in mind if you do write the story that is like the anime or watch the anime again keep in mind that kagome doesn't end up with sesshomaru but yet i'm shocked they haven't complained about how put kagome and sesshomaru together isn't in the anime. :\
ok i'll stop now *sighs*
Mona (Chapter 58) - Wed 01 Jul 2015
Another great one, I hope you update soon. I'm wondering what is going on with Shin'ichi? Who did kill Naruka? What happened to Kagome in her moment of lost memory?
Ja (Chapter 58) - Wed 01 Jul 2015
No offence but why does it have to be phrased as 'dark skinned person', why not person of color or person of another culture or person of another continent or a person of different ethnicity.
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