BEWARE TO ALL READERS. So I finished reading these and the other stories that go along with it. When I get to the final series I get to chp 9 but something in my gut told me to check the date on the story. I go look, and its INCOMPLETE! No big deal I figure there will be weekly of monthly updates, NOPE! IT HASN'T BEEN UPDATED SINCE LAST YEAR 2016. The reason I give the warning is cause its such a good read that it sucks u in only for u to find out its incomplete and apparently on a super huge cliffhanger. I wish someone warned me before thats why Im here. Its just kinda sad. I wish she would update. Im gonna stop reading to spear myself the heart break.
I really hope Gramps gets to tell Taisho stick in the butt a little more of how foolish he is. Sess is a grown ass man wtf! He's dad is so annoying. Can't he see he's dooming Sesshomaru to make he's same mistakes. I really hope the other series is complete because honestly this is to much for my frail condition ????. No seriously i don't think I can take it but I can't go on not knowing.
Urgghhh so obedient it is somewhat frustrating. No it's actually rather frustrating, I understand why though but still I can't help but be upset.
I really hate how this is going : (. Gramps is my fave character. Sessh barely stands up to his dad and now Kags has to deceive the world. Smh I want too gouge all the enemy's eyes out
I was really hoping for a smut telling of their first and second time.
WHATTT Ino Tasi-HOE needs to learn from his past mistakes and not force them upon his son. Ridiculous SOB
I swear Sesshomaru's words felt like the author talking to herself or a person telling her self all the things she thinks are bad about her. Alot of the times people like that don't realize they are their own worst critics. Because to be honest Kagome does not seem to be weird at all until talk like this comes up from someone else's mouth. Lile seriously alot of the things Kags has done has not been weird or bipolar or depressing. I only feel that they were because Sesshomaru said so or Kagome says so in her mind. Im sorry but this seem misdiagnosed. Honey you're just dandy except this ex issue.
Ok this is so weird! What's up with Kagome. We women need to stop letting men like that have so much power over us, its lame and dramatic. And I thought wow this is so specific and I was really upset until i saw the A/N which I do not typically read but today I did. And I feel for u, people can be aholes. But don't waste you breath and energy on people like that eer! Its unecessary drama and stress in your life. Plus to be honest the text didn't seem to be that big of a deal. He just seems like a real jackass whom you shouldn't have even texted back. If he doesn't text u don't text him, simple. I wish I could brick him in the head for u!!!
Some moments in this story are strangely specific. The emotional strangeness, Sess not liking cum, and the way he tells Kags about her moods. This sound like.......
Enjoyed the drama in this story. Can't believe you managed to kill her twice in one story. Great cliff hanger. Your world building for this one was interesting; I think you could use that background effictively for an original story with your own chacters.
Rena (Chapter 70) - Wed 21 Oct 2015
Never read a fanfiction that actually broke my heart, this story had me crying my eyes out towards the end. Love your work though.
i am new to you as an author, but i think you did a great job with this story. you're lemons weren't as spicy as i liked, but they were ok. i think it's hard to write down a simple love scene, but even harder to write down an erotic one. i'm going to look for the rest of this story and i hope that they are close to completion. love your work, so far. great writing. c'ya'
Sessygurl (Chapter 71) - Wed 15 Jul 2015
hahaha
No Uta (Chapter 71) - Wed 15 Jul 2015
Hahahahahaaaaa this was fabulous! I found myself giggling hard, reliving a few of these scenarios. The first one that had me about choke on my soup was when Socrates threw up in the expensive sake at a high dollar restaurant. Then Shin’ichi trying to stab Totosai with a hot fire poker. The porn collection and Sesshomaru calling you a very sick being had me in tears I was laughing so hard. I loved this. It was adorable and an extremely unique idea! Thanks so much for the heads up that you'd posted it!
Saiya (Chapter 70) - Mon 13 Jul 2015
Dominate His Ass Sesshomaru. Live Kagome.
(First Reaction to ending) NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
(Second Reaction) *frantically searches for second story*Noooo!
(Final Reaction) * rages and whined for next installment to come *
(All within 5 minutes)
Aw it's over! Loved this story and I can't wait till the next part!
Susi8 (Chapter 70) - Mon 13 Jul 2015
Wow! Awesome job with this chapter! Congrats on finishing this part of the story! (^_^)
Mia (Chapter 70) - Mon 13 Jul 2015
Talk about a cliffhanger. O.O;
Mona (Chapter 70) - Mon 13 Jul 2015
I am happy and sad about the ending. Happy to read the first installment of the series to end because now I can anticipate the continuation of the series. Sad because of the events in the final chapter, Inu no Taisho has completely lost his mind, and now Kagomes life is on the cusp. I hope Sesshoumaru got him good, and those screams of pain are coming from the great despicable Lord Inu no Taisho.
I so can't wait for the second part of the series.
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