i was looking for a lemon and found none. i was surprised, but i'm glad you didnt add one(somewhat). this was a great story. it was different from others i read b4. i dont do otome games so i guess this is why i liked it so much. i have added you to my faves lisht b/c your stories are so good. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

Man..you know how to deliver with those twists and turns. Loved every minute of this story. 

So very  sorry to hear about your mum. I hope that joy and peace fill your heart as you remember her and live your life to the fullest

I read this on ao3 and its fabulous

So I barely managed to finish this story last night and ended up going to sleep rather late (I will regret that later lol) so I left my last review for this morning.

i loved this story! Very gripping and unexpectedly kept me on the edge of my seat wondering what was going to happen next and rooting for their relationship developments. There were so many twists that I wasn’t able to predict how the story was going to resolve. 

Something I didn’t comment on much was how much I enjoyed their relationship. it Was very well developed, and while the setting created a very twisted version of their normal selves, you still managed to keep them enough in character to keep me interested. A lot of stories lose me because they try to write a story with characters names Kagome and Sesshomaru, but then they act so completelt out of character without any clear motivations to do so that I just can’t buy into it.

Thank you for the great story! I will have to check out some of your other writing as well.

This is looking so bad! I keep thinking the key has to be in the fact that Naraku probably isn’t being fully honest. It cannot be wise to make any decisions based on what he is telling her. Don’t do it! 

So close! Of course it couldn’t be that easy. But at least things seem to be somewhat looking up, if you can call it that lol...

So yeah I have waxed yet because I am being bad and reading! And omg the awfulness! Thinks need to get better quickly! I can hardly handle the drama.

I am reading during breaks while washing and waxing my car, but after your last warning that there may be bumpy seas ahead, my doom meter just malfunctioned and I am worried I won’t be able to stop reading if I keep going, and then my car won’t get done. Agh! Why did I have to do this today! Stupid pollen...

The drama llama has been around a while LOL...I haven’t heard that phrase before, I like it!

My feeling of doom is getting stronger here. Don’t do anything stupid Kagome!

Omg more twists! Some of My suspicions were correct, I had wondered if Shippo was involved, but then later thought no way, since things were not nearly as innocent as they appeared. But I wasn‘t expecting THAT! Now I am just waiting for her to feel guilty enough to do something stupid. I wish she had told Sesshomaru about the marble! 

It Being a responsible adult can really suck sometimes. I want to keep reading! But alas, sleep calls. I will be back tomorrow though to finish this once and for all! I really wasn’t expecting to get this hooked. I thought it would be light-hearted and humorous. And it has been, but it definitely took a turn for the dramatic. I went from reading a chapter here or there and getting so good laughs, to acting like an over-dramatic football fan on The edge of my seat, desperately waiting for that next major play. I love that I cannot seem to predict your twists. 

Until tommorow! 

While I am missing some of the humor, I am pretty intrigued by the unexpected twists you keep throwing in here. Who is real? Who isn’t? What does Naraku know a s how does he know it? Is he even real? Why is mom so creepy, and not Souta? Will Kagome get her hands on the marble and use it, or give it away? Who created this game in the first place! And why! So many questions! I did really enjoy the humor of Sesshomaru of all beings playing match-maker, especially after he sounded so disapproving of the whole thing to start with. And I love the odd little things that seem to get to him by affecting his instincts, rather than the usual otome cliches. But I suppose we are just trading otome Cliches for fanfiction Cliches lol...

i can’t wait to see where you go with this latest little development!

oh, and btw, good job on the creep factor. That trapped scene was very freaky, and if I were her I probably would have had a serious meltdown.

I am back! While I enjoyed the building mystery and I am really curious to find out what is going on, I absolutely loved the redo of the theft scene that turned out so disasterously. It was so funny! 

Ok this is pretty amusing so far! I was a little wary of it, but the fact that she is spending all of her time desperately trying to not raise meters instead of the only way around makes it much funnier than I expected it would be. You have gotten me to laugh out loud quite a few times so far.

Best wishes in your moving.  Change will bring you happiness and a fresh start.  I hope you keep writing when you have timr.  I hear Scotland is beautiful.   :):):)

I am sorry for your loss .  You are very strong to continue to finished yourmstory.   Very strong and determined.   Good luck.

After everything get done I will paddle shippo button for the mischief.  That's what I think and that unmothet, cr8ppy. And who invited naruku and the other bad guys

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I feel I just came to some kind of larger full circle. The manga and anime Inuyasha led me into the wide world of fabrication, which led not only to other manga and anime, but also the fanfiction of otome games, which led me to playing some otome games, and now I find myself having read a fanfiction of Inuyasha based on an otome game theme! I love it!

I really enjoyed this, it was a stubble across impulse read. I was poking through art work and saw the banner for this piece you posted and it interested me enough to check out your work. So thanks for that! I so enjoyed your writing and storyline that I'm moving on to your other works with interest! :)

As I read through your comments/notes each chapter end I could see you sharing some of your struggles in writing and life. I know I've come along years after your experiences writing this, but I thank you for your strength and determination to keep moving even though life was being very hard on you. My sympathies for what you and your family endured. We share a lot of ourselves in our writing and even reading, growing to love characters, stories, authors... A connection of sorts of established here and I hope it brought you strength and comfort, and continues to do so today!

This story was phenomenal! I literally spent all day engrossed in it. Everything was just so well thought out and woven together. Thank you for writing AND finishing it! 

Oooh this is a fascinating plot. I’ve never played one of these games but I’ve heard of them. Definitely looking forward to seeing how my favorite anime characters deal with this new twist.