Kaede, you pain in the ass haggard miko! Grrrr... rude wench hahaha. Leave it to her to ruin EVERYTHING just kidding. Holy hell our beloved couple's shared kiss was absolutely riveting! I especially enjoyed the part where Sesshomaru raked his fangs upon her skin, reminding her of what and who he is. Guuuuuurl that gave me all kinds of happy chills! The kissing scene was beautiful written. I am fond of how you've paced the development of their feelings for one another. I'm glad he didn't claim her just yet. Sessh is definitely demonstrating his willingness to commit to Kagome. First by taking her into his home, making her pack, then establishing a bond of communication, now he has taken in Shippo who's basically a son to her. Oooooh Sessh has got it bad and poor Kagome is feeling guilty for having targeted him simply as a means to an end. It will be interesting to see when she chooses to reveal this to the daiyokai. Will she tell him after they've mated or will she tell him before? How will he react to this bit of information in either case? Annnnnd the plot thickens all the more. There's also Kagome's upcoming visit with Souten. I'm definitely looking forward to see how that plays out. Thank you so much for taking the time to post on my wall. It was a pleasant surprise. I do my best to be thorough when I review your chapters. I understand the work that goes into what your doing. I look forward to your new fics. I'll definitely read and review them. Thanks again for another amazing update.
Ruyusaki (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Aug 2015
YES YES YES LOL
Kae (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Aug 2015
your progression of characters is really impressive! I love the push and pull, because it's so REAL. Every time I see this has updated, I can't wait to see what's next!
Thanks for updating your wonderful story... I really love this story, cz the fresh idea, commedy, the suspense on kagome feeling and absolutely for your ability to catch their character and pour it into beautiful story :)
And abolutely, i will love to read your other story..
Please update whenever you can...
Thank you :3
Mona (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Aug 2015
Great, hoping for another update soon.
Aziza (Chapter 20) - Sun 30 Aug 2015
*screams internally* This is getting serious...
Keep it coming!!
Melissa (Chapter 19) - Thu 27 Aug 2015
I love this story.
I love your story. The whole otome game idea is hilarious and you have executed it beautifully. The plot is wonderfully paced and has twists that I wasn't even considering. Chapter 19, oh my goodness, was great squared. I figured the kids had something to do with it, but I didn't think the marble would be a miko relic, my mind was blown a little. It has been a while since I read a story that was so fresh and delicious. I look forward to reading more.
No Uta (Chapter 19) - Tue 25 Aug 2015
Osh... I forgot to mention the "Unmother" got sucked in too!!!!!! Omg Kagome's mum in the Otome game! You are brilliant! Sorry for the second review. I had to compliment you.
No Uta (Chapter 19) - Mon 24 Aug 2015
YEAYUS! Great update! I've been looking forward to the great reveal. I had a sneaky suspicion both Shippo & Rin where behind this somehow. I didn't however forsee how it all came to be. You did a wonderful job telling the story through the flashbacks. It was clear the obscure marble was connected to their situation somehow, but I couldn't fathom exactly how. This is a very creative plot line. Having all of them trapped into an Otome game was unique on its own. The way it happened is also in itself unique. Hmmm... so it seems Sesshomaru had his eye on Kagome prior to their predicament. It appears he either purposely jumped in after Kagome or positioned himself near her to protect her as he was being sucked in by the marble. I had a feeling it was Kagome's reiki somehow keeping them trapped and possibly draining all the other yokai, however yet again I couldn't begin to possibly imagine why and how. This was a very well put together unveiling. It was also a very informative chapter. Annnnnd Sesshomaru finally kisses Kagome! Great way to wrapped it up. I look forward to your elaboration of their shared kiss.
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