this is a good story. i read it b4, but i forgot to leave a review. it was short, sweet, and had great lemons in it. i had a feeling sessho-kun(ha) liked kagome in secret. after a while hatred turns into love if you see the person ALL the time. you begin to wonder why you dislike the person when you don't even know them. then the object of your affections has a dilemma that you feel the need to help him/her with and then you understand that it wasn't hate but fear of the unknown. sesshoumaru is like that-he fears the unknowns of the heart. we all do. i'm glad i read this story and that it had a happy ending. keep up the great writing. c'ya'
Mae (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Feb 2018
I loved the story but it kinda just died for me with the way Hime is. The whole “Mommy” thing killed me wanting to finish the story. But other than that it was a great story.
I'm sorry, but can't read beyond this point. The constant "honey" is making my eyes tick. Also, the heroine bits. I guess English really isn't your first language. You need a beta. It's not mine either, and while I'm practically bilingual, I learned a lot of style and editing from my betas, and it brought my English to a higher level stylistically.
Kanda (Chapter 14) - Fri 11 Aug 2017
if i had something in my mouth at the time i would have spat it out when sess said "mommy." as it is. ppl are looking at me like i've gone crazy. XD omfg. that was a great laugh. XD
I absolutely LOVE this story!! Man I just love the humour in each chapter and I love the way you have characterized Sesshormarou's mom and his dad. Every single chapter was interesting and I love the pace of the story. Thank you for writing such a nice story and sharing it with the rest of us.
Very nice (and funny) ending. I only have one critique to offer. I'm guessing that English is not your first language. I applaud your efforts to write in English. I can't imagine writing on another language and doing it well. I don't know if you had a beta to help you. A lot of your sentences were a little contorted or the tense for words was incorrect. Here is can example:
"You told me you find out through the hard way we have a love bond. What do you mean by that?"
It would have been better written as:
"You told me you found out the hard way we have a love bond. What do you mean by that?"
I really liked your story and I hope you keep on writing. English is one of the most difficult languages to master due to our strange idioms. good luck with your efforts. Cheers!
Almost a cat fight. Nice chapter.
Mommy dearest??? i get the feeling Inu is going to get his butt handed to him...in pieces. Really Sessh...mommy. Oh boy. Interesting chapter On crazy family issues.
Oh yeah, she's scary. You don't want to piss her off. Famy meetings are such fun. Cheers!
UH OH here comes trouble. Great chapter. Cheers!
Got to love the power of a thunderstorm. Yum! Thanks for a fine chapter.
Papa inu, you are such a bad boy! And so entertaining! Great chapter.
Outstanding fun chapter! Sessh is going nuts, Kags is in heat and papa Inu is an instigator. Too much fun! Looking forward to more.
Great chapter! Love how Inu papa asks Inu if he is dead yet. Good on Kags for confronting Inu too. That was really a crummy thing to do. Take another girl on the honeymoon she had planned with him. What a scumbag! (I hate beating on Inu but he really deserves it in this fic). I'm behind a bit, just catching up. Cheers!
Very fun story!! Loved it! Can't wait to read more from you!!
Poor Sessh, left in a wanting state. I hope our girl starts using her brain and stops drowning herself in drink. Nice chapter. Cheers!
Ooooohhhhh this is really good
Cheryl (Chapter 16) - Tue 02 Jun 2015
great story~ congrats on this :)
Susi8 (Chapter 16) - Fri 29 May 2015
I really enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it :) I hope to read more from you.
You should make one shots about this story! Like their every day life since the mating bond!
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