Ah. I love your portrayal of Sesshomaru, so mature and full of authority. Your choice of words is lovely as well.
Wonderful use of the prompts. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Go sesshomaru! Inuyasha is about to be taught a very valuable lesson by big brother. It's about time for him to grow up anyways. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Saiya (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Jan 2015
Hell Ya Go Sesshomaru!!!!!!
mandy (Chapter 2) - Fri 23 Jan 2015
Am I breathing? Ek! A treasured Sessomaru smile. I'm really excited that Kagome has learn to control her emotions a bit. And the fact that Sesshomaru smirk/smiled, I'm swooning! wonderdully writing segment. I love how this flows so nicely. Great imagery. Great chapter. I'm excited to read more. Happy writing!
mandy (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 Jan 2015
Beautifully worded. This first installment flows so well I'm envious! (Lol) Great first chapter! I love it.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
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