Interesting. This is the start of a great story!! I can`t wait to learn what all the secrets are about. I love this Kagome, we have all been there if not will be at one point in our lives, when we realize that things are not as they should be and take a chance to make a change. Sesshomaru is awesome his curosity is sweet. I'm glad you are depicting his curosity with a gentleness towards Kagome. Usually in stories he would demand that she follows. I know he is far from gentle when necessary. I hope you update soon.
Blessings
InuAngel
Ooooh! Whats going on??
Can't wait till the next chapter!
This story is so far holding my interest and i just cant seem to tear my eyes off. xD Im glad this is not a song fic, (because i found myself not being a fan of the genre) so i must say, the story plot is well-planned and written, not to mention the accurate spelling and vise versa too. I hope you'll keep updating more fantastic chapters such as the first chapter, and please keep up the good work!
I really like your fic so far . Can't wait for the next chapter and the reason behind Sango and miroku not training her. :)
Neicia (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Dec 2014
This is amazing. You should update. Youre an amazing writer
I hope that this wil be continued i want to see what happens
I can't wait to read the next chappie. I wanna know why sango and Miroku are bein sketch.
Very nice start. Looking forward to reading more!
This story has caught my interest and I find that it is intriguing and thought provoking. I am glad that it is not going to be a songfic because I am not a fan of this type of genre. This chapter is well written with spelling, grammar and puctuation well placed. The length of the chapter only seemed to be long mainly because of the words from the song Kagome was singing, but I hope the regular length of future chapters will be longer in other words I like long chapters. I know I am going to like this story and I am looking forward to future updates. Keep up the good work. Fantastic job!
nia (Chapter 1) - Fri 26 Dec 2014
i wish that was her one last cry for inuyasha. don't wanna kagome cried and cried again because him.
Anywayy. thank you for the hardwork! ;)
I like the story, keep writing!!! :) semangat!!!
can't wait for the next chapter~
rose (Chapter 1) - Fri 26 Dec 2014
next chapter please
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Thu 25 Dec 2014
Oh This Story Is SSOOO GREAT!!! It was so Interestingly Awsome I Hope you Will Continue and Happy Holidys.
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