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AnimeLady04 (Chapter 3) - Mon 24 Aug 2015

Iam dying otu of curiousity at how he met/saw her and wanted her as his permanet mate....
But this chapter is very good. I like how Sesshomaru truly wishes to help Sango because it would make Kagome happy. And maybe she is battered, but I do not think Kagome is broken. She can still laugh, she can share the joys and sorrows, she can still care for others, and she can still walk forward. She may stumble with the new drastic changes in her life but that is to be expected.

She's forced to work for a cruel man whom she fears would rape her at any moment, then is sold to Sesshomaru against her will, then is tricked into mating Sesshomaru. And while, yes, Sesshomaru is better than staying with Hojo, Kagome doesn't know that. She knows next to nothing of Sesshomaru except of that night.  He needs to look at it from her POV. Sesshomaru forced Kagome to say she'd go with him so his plan would work, to her, he was humiliating her. She now knows he's rich (but probably doesn't understand how rich), and she thinks he's sort of deviant - he did after all buy her from Hojo.

He himself has not opened up to her, so how can he expect Kagome to open up to him? To let down her defenses and become even more vulnerable to him? As his mate, she sees herself basically his slave for all of time with no way out, not even death. He is showing patience for her but it has been only one day for them and Kagome feels completely at his mercy.

I like how you're showing Sesshomaru's considerate side, but it seems he is lacking the knowledge of how to call a truce with Kagome and make her comfortable enough to start lowering her defenses to let him get to know her and bond closer.


bookgirl813 (Chapter 3) - Sun 23 Aug 2015

Always a joy to see an update from you on this continuation.

I can understand Kagome's fear.  Has she found herself owned once again?  Can she trust Sesshomaru?

I'm curious if you will take them back to Japan and locate her family.  


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 3) - Sun 23 Aug 2015

Oh my poor Sesshy. Poor Kagome. This will be a tough thing to get through but they WILL get through it... and when is Miroku gonna come into the story?!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 2) - Sun 23 Aug 2015

GEFNALJGN I hate you hojo!!! GAH!!!!

 

I am sooo glad Sesshy came to the rescue!!! Now if only he'll save Sango, too!!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 1) - Sun 23 Aug 2015

OMG I can't believe her mom did that! Poor Kagome... Thank goodness he didn't force himself on her - DAMN YOU HOJO I NEVER LIKED YOU!!


SashaMarie (Chapter 2) - Fri 19 Jun 2015

Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 2) - Mon 18 May 2015

well even though this is now the sequel, I am just glad you're continuing the story!
I cannot wait for the next chapter.....^_^


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 2) - Tue 28 Apr 2015

Oh please oh please mighty author update this story! I cannot wait to see what Sesshomaru will do with Sango!


Nicole (Chapter 2) - Wed 08 Apr 2015

This (and its predecessor) is a fascinating story! I looking forward to reading more (and I hope we learn something of why Sesshomaru came for Kagome) in future chapters! 


Chandra (Chapter 2) - Tue 24 Mar 2015

Please update soon! I loved the new chapter and can't wait for more!!! Thank you!


Yin - Yang M (Chapter 2) - Thu 19 Feb 2015

Thank for updating. I hope you get Hojo club shut doown. It will funny if you had Kagome and Sango own the club.


Ree-san (Chapter 2) - Thu 19 Feb 2015

I'm so happy to see the update!  I was afraid the story was going to die.  I'm really looking forward to Hojo getting his!  That club has to be shut down somehow.  I'm really curious about how Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship develops.  I'm hoping for another update soon.


Minime (Chapter 2) - Thu 19 Feb 2015

Finally an update! Hojo is a scum. Sango's boyfriend is too. . Please kill them off. Will wait patiently for your next chapter. 


Chandra (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Feb 2015

Please update soon! Thanks


Minime (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Dec 2014

Please continue. I love it. Hope you'll update soon


Cheryl (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Dec 2014

love this new sequel, i read through your first story and was so stuck on getting a continuation only to find this and nearly scream in happiness! thank you so much for continuing this and its a great come back, can't wait for the next chapter! 


Ree-san (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Dec 2014

I actually read this one first and I really like it.  I also see why you separated them and I think it was a really good call.  The initial story still has Incomplete in the summary though. 

It's very enticing; so many questions that intrigue you go through your mind as you read.  What the hell is up with her family?  How quickly can Kagome recover from all of this and regain herself?  How had he been watching her and what made her so special to him?  What's up with Hojo's obsession and when's he going to get his?  Is there something going on within his family?  Sesshoumaru is OOC but I love it!  It somehow seems like it fits him. 

I think your style is wonderful.  You really draw in the reader without being overly verbose.  I really hope to see updates on your other current stories as well.  Perhaps you can be chained to your computer? :)


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