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SammyJams (Chapter 10) - Fri 08 Nov 2019

Oh no! Sango!


Elizabeth (Chapter 10) - Thu 07 Nov 2019

This version is turning out much better.  I vaguely remember the first try, and I am enjoying this one much more.  I really hope you are inspired and have more chapters soon!


Kimmy (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Aug 2019

Please update soon. Can’t wait to see how this goes. Need a new chapter.


Neelixonee (Chapter 9) - Sat 22 Jun 2019

Bahah that last part.  Poor Kags!


candy (Chapter 9) - Fri 21 Jun 2019

Please keep updating this story.  How does the first one end? Because they were going to the airport to pick up inuyasha on the last chapter.


candy (Chapter 9) - Fri 21 Jun 2019

Please keep updating this story. Care to make a bet I love it but I hate that it ended on them picking up inuyasha at the airport and I want to know how kagome acts when she face to face with inuyasha.


candy (Chapter 9) - Fri 21 Jun 2019

Please keep updating this story. Care to make a bet I love it but I hate that it ended on them picking up inuyasha at the airport and I want to know how kagome acts when she face to face with inuyasha.


candy (Chapter 9) - Fri 21 Jun 2019

Please keep updating this story. Care to make a bet I love it but I hate that it ended on them picking up inuyasha at the airport and I want to know how kagome acts when she face to face with inuyasha.


Kimmy (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Feb 2019

Please update soon, wanna know how this ends.


Kimmy (Chapter 8) - Tue 08 Jan 2019

Loved the first series. And completely in love with set of the after mating. Can’t wait for a update wondering if kagome could be pregnant since they didn’t have protected sex. ???? 


Random Reviewer (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

I‘d like to start off by saying that your writing itself is great, and I hope you continue to write on dokuga. However, I have problems with this story. Sesshomaru is quite despicable. He insinuates that those who work as prostitutes to gain their freedom are whores who have no morals (which is completely untrue and is pretty much victim blaming). He contracts Kagome into having sex with him because she has no other option, and sex when there is no other choice is basically rape. He also repeatedly forces Kagome into intimate contact against her will. He acts as if just because he “saved her” and “she needs protection” he has justification to force her to remain with him against her will. And I know you addressed this last offense, but the comment about returning her was disgusting, and the worst part about it was that because he “bought her freedom” he believea that she owes her life to him. It’s gross.

The reason I addressed this is because you are most likely going to continue to portray him in a positive light if you continue this story, which I find a little unsettling. At the same time, I understand if this is how you prefer the story, and I don’t mean to be harsh. I apologize if I come across as mean. 

I really do hope to read more of your work! Thanks :-)


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 7) - Sat 16 Jun 2018

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This story is awesome!!! Keep up the great work - I can't wait for the next chapter! I will love seeing Kag's reaction to Sango being freed :D


maria (Chapter 7) - Fri 15 Jun 2018

I looovvvere this the mall u  Mentioned was discover Mills right


Haven Himori (Chapter 6) - Mon 30 Apr 2018

The way he worded it made it seem like her fears of trading one master for another came true. Nicely done. :3


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 5) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

I really like this story and I like some of the revisions that you have done thus far.

Even though I liked the original version I like this version so much better.

I find that your portrayal of Sesshomaru is very appealing to me. I like his softer side but you do keep his 'darker' side on the frenges and that's 

makes him so appealing. He is very patient with Kagome and eventually his kindness and passion will bring her around to love him.

I am looking forward to the chapters that has Sesshomaru and Miroku saving Sango and bringing down Hojo and his whole operation of human 

trafficking, extortion and drug dealing, to name a few I'm sure.

Looking forward to future updates to this intriguing story.

Excellent writing!!!


Knight of Disorder (Chapter 4) - Fri 02 Feb 2018

I'm going to be a bit of a hypocrit and say you should definatly update this. It's a rather unique story. I'd like to see where it goes.


Nelda (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Nov 2017

Finish this story. Please!


Monstrous Jelly (Chapter 4) - Tue 04 Jul 2017

You definitely should write more to this!!! I'm looking forward to this! :D


Alashia (Chapter 4) - Sat 01 Jul 2017

This is definitely very interesting. Why Sesshoumaru chose her as a mate just out the blue like that? I can tell maybe he has always cared for her maybe in the distance through everything. I can't wait to find out!


Toni (Chapter 4) - Thu 02 Mar 2017

looking forward to more chapters really enjoying the story 


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