Nice, keep it coming.
Just a note: If they are getting married on the full moon, then the new moon can't be three weeks away. The new moon occurs exactly fourteen days after the full moon. That's why the lunar month doesn't match with our calendar, because the lunar month is always twenty-eight days.
Fun Fact: The last time the full moon happened on the winter solstice (Dec 21) was 2010. The next time will be in 2094. There is no fixed interval, it has to be calculated. The Old Farmer's Almanac Online will have the dates of past and future occurences.
rose (Chapter 13) - Thu 12 Mar 2015
next chapter please
Like, keep it coming.
Like, keep it coming
I've seen your story a few times on here, but never actually read it. Which sad to say I couldn't kick myself for. I didn't have anything else to read and last night I was like why not. Let me tell you I am so happy that I finally read it. I really could be kicking myself for not reading it soon. Shame on me. Anyways I love love love your story!! It is totally different then anything I have read on here and I totally love all the twist and turns you have in this story. I really need you to update like asap, bc now I'm an addict. I can wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. I really want to see how the presentation goes while visualizing Karin stomp that guy into the ground. I also can't wait to see who Rin ends up with. I also have an idea about where your going with Kagomes mom and all the other priest and priestess, but I can't wait to see if I'm right or not. So keep up the great work and I would be totally happy with like a 5 chapter update. Or 10. Or 20. Actually any update really. Lol
rose (Chapter 12) - Sat 07 Mar 2015
next chapter please
Just because I don't review every chapter of this story does not mean that I am not reading it. I read every chapter and I think all the chapters are nicely written and enjoyable. I'll review a chapter when it calls for one. Trust and believe this story is good and I will continue to read til the very end. Fabulous writing job!
I have been following this story since it was first posted. While i may not review each chapter, i figured i should let you know that it is a very enjoyable story. Your writing style may need a bit of refinement but it doesn't take much away from the story. I greatly enjoy reading and i look forward to every update. So keep up the creativity!Until next time ^_^
Nicka (Chapter 12) - Thu 05 Mar 2015
I absolutely love this story and you writing style. You have such an attention to detail. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
Great, keep it coming.
I really like your story, but I have a question. Why is Kagome so bipolar? One second she is strong and vowing to protect the ones she loves and the next second she is terrified of any you Kai that are after her and crying like a child? Also, it seems like she has a super powerful aura that would prevent you Kai from messing with her, so why does she mask it? Maybe you covered this in the story and I missed it.
I love how strong Kagome can be, so I am really anxious for her to stop crying and kick some butt.
Wonderful chapters, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
rose (Chapter 10) - Fri 13 Feb 2015
next chapter please
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