This isn't a bad piece and I kinda would like to see it continued to see where it goes, and if it stays casual or not (I'd hope not lol) and if and when Inuyasha finds out about it and all.
However, it had some spelling errors and that kind of hindered me from enjoying it more. I do hope you get those corrected!
Absolutely loved this! :)
That was amazing. I just...omg WOW
Wonderful!
Sad that its a one shot. Haha
desje (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Dec 2014
I liked It a lot and it was cute yet steamy.
I loved your story. I found it very well written and true to the characters, while adding dimension to them as well. I love how you made Kagome more of a regular teen with sexual experience with multiple guys, not just Inuyasha; It gives her more of a life like quality that you rarly see in other stories. I adore how you keep true to Sesshomaru's character, but add depth to the exsisting sides we know. I know this is a one shot, but I think it would make an interesting series.
Nile (Chapter 1) - Sun 30 Nov 2014
I'm just saying that I love this approach and if it so happens to progress into further encounters or a more developing relationship... that would be VERY intriguing. However, I do understand as an author that sometimes ending it is best. It's just.... well... this has that interesting potential.
This was fun! I'd love to read more.
This story was great. Happy Thanksgiving!
would love to read more
Wow great story! I loved it. Very steamy-- in more than one sense of the word!
This was a very erotic and well written piece. There were a couple of typos but other than that it was executed nicely. It would be nice if you had a sequel but it ended nicely as is. Great job!
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