Forget bout forgiveness. Kagome is highly pissed off. Maybe when all is said and done, InuKimi should have Inuyasha's soul within the Meidou Stone, slowly turning him into a Gatekeeper to the Underworld. He'd be in good company while Kikyo is in Hell. She definitely has a hand in all this, the manipulative bitch. Or better yet, have Inuyasha turned into a pet. *shrugs*
Wow! such language from the Lady! LOL Cannot wait to see his punishment.....
tonya (Chapter 4) - Thu 20 Nov 2014
great chapter!
No Uta (Chapter 4) - Wed 19 Nov 2014
Ooooh! I like how you've incorporated Inu momma in this part. We can see whom Sesshomaru inherited his sadistic side from in this. ;-) I could not help but to chuckle at the description of the smil, his sire had plastered on his face in the painting in this chapter. I enjoyed that you had Sesshomaru, refer to his long lost father for advice as he gazed upon the painting. Inu momma has admitted her eagerness to finally have a reason to punish Inuyasha. The half breed and his dead miko are in for it...if they are captured. I appreciate that you are updating as much as you have been. Also, gratitude to you for giving your viewers notice of your upcoming absence. May the moving process go smoothly for you. I'll be looking forward to whatever chapters you do post for us. Well done!
Danna (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Nov 2014
I like where this story is going. What's ur schedule of updating? Weekly will be perfect...lol. Cant wait for the next chapter.
marisel (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Nov 2014
this sound like agood story. more please. good job. short and sweet to the point. me like a lot. keep them coming
Oh snap!!!!! This is going so well, im in pins and needles awaiting for the next chapter, please dont take too long to update, bc you are doing a mighty fine job with this!! :-)
tonya (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Nov 2014
love this story so far! please update asap
No Uta (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Nov 2014
Yesssss yesss YUSSSSSS! I love what you did here. Piecing together the part you originally wrote, which inspired this fic to begin with. Well done. I am excited to read the pursuit of Inuyasha and Kikyo. Sesshomaru will definitely not let this go. I also wonder what exact role Kagome will play in this. Will she be full of vengeance? Will she forgive Inuyasha? This can go so very many ways. You motivate me to possibly start writing fanfiction again. This story has turned out wonderfully so far. A unique beginning and two intense chapters. Impressive, please continue as you have been. Bravo!
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Nov 2014
OH!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE already!
And what a way to leave us all hanging already... ;)
Looking forward to more!
Your story sounds very promising, very detailed and the writing easy to follow.
yah! You did it iam gonna be a constant reader and will review if I can , iam so happy keep the good work ! :)
No Uta (Chapter 2) - Tue 18 Nov 2014
What a lovely, no phenomenally unique style you have of beginning your fics. This is one of the many reasons I am such a loyal fan of your work. Having Inu momma tell the tale of how her grand pups and their pack came to be is such a wonderful way to spin this tale of yours. Very clever indeed. I enjoyed your description of the pups and the resemblance each held to their parents. I chuckled at the rude one that apparently, inherited his mum's big mouth ha ha. Also, your introduction to this fic was superb. I cannot tell you how happy you've made me and your other reviewers in choosing to continue to elaborate on this story. You've definitely made my day. Thank you!
No Uta (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Nov 2014
Omfg I love you for this!!!!! This is going to be so flippin fantastic I can feel it in my very bones! You are so amazingly awesome woman! Ok...ok... let me compose myself and read the following chapter.
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