A "bitch fight" ha ha haaaa! I LOVE it! This wasn't that dreadful of a chapter. Sure this was shorter, as compared to your previous one's, but that really isn't an issue for me. I'm just happy as all hell that you've updated so quickly hee hee. I'm easy to please and always grateful for all of your efforts.
Now onto the fic. I'm curious to find out what exactly has caused Kagome's transformation while in the afterlife. I have my theories of course, but will cease my yammering about it and not try to foretell the plot. InuKimi has stepped up to the new Inu "bitch". I can see that happening being that she's always been the alpha female. Here is this human suddenly yokai, challenging her on her own territory...RUDE! I like it though. It seems like something Kagome would do.
I see she's definitely not forgotten about Inuyasha's treachery even in her current state. I'm still dying to know where Touga's stance will be in the matter, once he's been informed of it all. Great plot so far. I like your buildup of it. Thank you so much for the update!
Yep, it's official. Inuyasha is totally screwed now that his father is back and not just with Kagome back as a demon.
Great story, keep it coming.
No Uta (Chapter 6) - Fri 21 Nov 2014
Ah, and my question was surely answered in this chapter. Kagome has returned as a demon from the afterlife, accompanied by the infamous Touga. InuKimi responded in a way I didn't expect. She appeared willing to defend her long lost, disloyal mate. Instincts, bond or love I wonder? I enjoyed how Kagome's beast immediately recognized Sesshomaru as her alpha. What an exciting chapter! Thanks so much for a two chapter update! This just continues getting better and better! Now that Touga is back in the picture. What will he do about Inuyasha's betrayal of his pack? Ooooooh so excited!
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