Wow SuWan, you have outdone yourself. This oneshot blew my mind!!! It did remind me of those old times gothic Victorian stories. I don't even know how to describe it! I lobe the playing with minds! Brilliant, I must say. I really had no idea where this story would lead....but you definitely took the plot and ran wild with it. It was an amazing mind twisting story!
My expression when I realized Kagome was the killer her father warned her of....Oh my... the expression and feelings I felt were crazy! I love how you added Sesshomaru in such a way that it portrayed his demonic character. Then you binded Sesshomaru with Kagome (I am you, you are me)...almost making it seem that they are like a mated couple. I dont even know if I am making sense. It just felt so dark yet so right.
And what I loved most was when Kagome's Father found her dead! I was like OMG! When she said she would go with him....I didnt know it meant death! T^T
But...as bittersweet as it is...that is true freedom. I just love how Sesshomaru is written in here...I cant stop thinking this!!! URGH! So good!!
You've definitely got the talent for imagery and writing. I love your writing style. I totally felt the gothic feel of the story...so well done!
I think this one shot is perfect for Halloween! You've definitely given me a treat! Thank you so much for the dedication! I am more than happy to support you and make you smile always.
Happy Halloween, SuWan.
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