well at least we have a face thats something. great two chapters. love the detailed picture i got in my head of the scene, very realistic. love love this story.
I'm really enjoying your story so far. The dream/memory sequence, although frustrating for Sesshou, is a nice touch. He as well as we are emphasizing with the girl while helpless to aid her. I wondered how he would come to know her and I'm glad you didn't go the 'it was fate' route.
I have to know. Were you inspired by "Shatter Me" by Lindsey Sterling and Lizzy Hale? If you haven't heard of it, you should look up the video on YouTube.
now we get a little insight to happen in her background, nice background.
Midian (Chapter 13) - Fri 17 Oct 2014
An origional story with great writing i am amazed how few reviews it has vs. some of the cookie cutter stuff
hey!!! thats not fair!!! i want to know the second name!!! :-( sad. its really getting interesting, though i would put somewhere in this chapter that Sesshomaru is dreaming.
awwww maybe he will find the answers he seeks!!!!
really good, now would be a good time to throw in a dream about the girl in the globe, just a thought or opinion. i wish you would update sooner than later but its really good.
Keep it coming!
I really like the gentle feel of this story. The plot is original too.
I hope you will continue this! :)
oh wow, this is really original i love it!
i cant wait to see if it actually does breaks and lets her out or if sesshomaru makes a wish to set her free. i am on the edge of my seat! please update soon.
oooooooooo I like this plot! a very vexing mystery!!!
Kat c (Chapter 10) - Mon 13 Oct 2014
Amazing story can't wait for the update
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