Oh holy roller-coaster of emotions is right! You weren't kidding one bit in your notes. I went from, feeling terrible for poor Sesshomaru and what he underwent to laughing countless of times at Inuyasha's antics. Then this “Can you tell him not to use the bathroom in his bed?” I laughed hard I tell you! Tears woman! The rest of the chapter had me in absolute stitches. Phenomenally done.
No Uta (Chapter 36) - Wed 18 Mar 2015
I am just catching up again. I apologise for falling behind. I must say this chapter made me blush multiple times! Especially when Sesshomaru did not give a damn about displaying his sexual activity with his queen to the two yokai that came to see his mark upon her. Hawt flippin damn! Great chapter over all.
Sooooo...what ever happened to Ray? Did Kagome kill him? I have to say I love this story! I read it from start to the current chapter uploaded atleast once or twice a week! I'm sad to see it ending but can't wait to check out your new work!
Emu (Chapter 39) - Tue 17 Mar 2015
Yay, I don't know what you're worried about there wasn't many errors from what I saw, I think your beta got most of them. Nice job, the story is concluding nicely, can't wait to see how you finish it off.
Debra (Chapter 38) - Sat 14 Mar 2015
Great chapter! I just love how you had Sesshoumaru react to losing Kagome. Even if it was only a few minutes it still happened and he had to deal with actually watching his mate die.
Koree (Chapter 38) - Fri 13 Mar 2015
Awwwwwww I Definetly Shed Tears Reading This Chap
Wew! Only had to catch up on like 16 chapters lawl, but worth it ^^
Can't wait to read the last two chapters you have c: and great work so far, love the plot you have
Liking both chapters, keep it coming.
Aw I feel a bit bad for Kagome as she wanted a daughter and now has three sons :( And poor Kazuhiko.....I wonder what happened between them? Very heartbreaking and yet heart lifting chapter......joy, and sorrow.....
Eva (Chapter 38) - Tue 10 Mar 2015
What a rollercoaster. Poor Sessh, I can't believe you killed off a second partner. I guess they don't get a little girl of their own and no grand pups don't count. Very well written.
Holla!
I love this story so much... XD
TT. TT beautiful.
you make me want to cry from all of the emotions that i feel from reading this. What TRULY made this great was Sesshoumaru vomiting. it sounds weird, but the fact that you wrote about him being that vulnerable and physically ill made your characters adn hopefully future character development that much concise and rich.....I love you and your works, so please continue.
Emu (Chapter 38) - Tue 10 Mar 2015
Woot, cute ending. I would've liked to have seen Kagome with a daughter, maybe they'll adopt rin.
It was a nice chapter. I cannot help feeling like kagome not being able to have more children is yet another thing she has to give up. It is sad.
OMG Fantastic!! You had me very scared for a minute. When Kagome died my heart just about stopped! But Sesshoumaru's reaction was heart breaking and beautiful. The love they share is genuine and unique. I have to say by the end you had me laughing out loud. They can't hide anywhere so they can be together without being caught!! Tense moments, loving moments and down right funny moments this chapter had it all!! Loved it!
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