Just found this through seeing the original picture. Love it. Hope you continue 

I like that your Kagome is a lot more confident in herself and kept her powers and instincts sharp.

Youkai Yume can be quiet rude with her comments she makes to her fans. (I literally only discovered her a week ago. I have the habit of stalking comments and such.) 

However, she is a great artist and we apparently have the same taste in stories.  Because I've read everyone inspired by this piece and they are fantastic(:

Eagerly waiting for chapter two!

Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!

Good start keep it up